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10th December 2012, 01:14 AM
Bhataktay bhataktay yuhi kuch anjaanay se khayaal dil meiN aa jaatay haiN,...aur dil me apna ghar kar lete haiN.....phir har mausam rangeen lagnay lagta hai,.....AandhiyaaN jab in dilkash khayaloN ko uda le jaati haiN,...tou gulshan veeran aur mehfil bezubaan lagne lagti hai....baqi reh jaati hai to ,sirf khalish aur kuch ranjisheN....
Huye door humse sanam Rafta Rafta WoH dha kar gaye yuN sitam Rafta Rafta Wo aayeNge humko manaane kisi din Chalo toota ye bhi bhram rafta rafta Khatawaar haiN hum, kiya ishq humne Milegi saza dum-ba-dum Rafta Rafta Ye din ujdey ujdey, ye sooni si shaameiN Ye wehshat-e-gham hogi kam Rafta Rafta Baday shouk se ibteda ki thi jiski Huyi woh kahaani khatam rafta rafta Na unse shikayat, na shikwa khuda se KareNgay gilay khud se hum Rafta Rafta Taqaaza-e-ulfat hai,rukhsat-e-Zainy Bhula dena humko sanam Rafta Rafta Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th December 2012, 05:49 AM
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Dayr aayay durust aayay! Waaah! Sub'hanAllah! Kya baat haye kya baat haye! Kya ajooba haye ki bahaar aayee haye khiza ka mazmoon sunaatee! Ayk ayk shayr purlutf, dilfareb aur rawaan dawaan. Zabardast! Dhayron daad aapkee is aala ghazal ki inayat par behna! Duagoh Ahmad |
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10th December 2012, 08:08 AM
Khatawaar haiN hum, kiya ishq humne
Milegi saza dum-ba-dum Rafta Rafta Ye din ujdey ujdey, ye sooni si shaameiN Ye wehshat-e-gham hogi kam Rafta Rafta Baday shouk se ibteda ki thi jiski Huyi woh kahaani khatam rafta rafta Na unse shikayat, na shikwa khuda se KareNgay gilay khud se hum Rafta Rafta WaaH ! Zainy JI !! Khoobsurat Ashaar Se Aarasta ... PurKash Ghazal Huii .. Sar Se Paa Talak ... RawaaN DawaaN ... BehtareeN Lafziyaat MeN ... Iss UmdaaH Kalaam Ke Liye Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!   YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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10th December 2012, 12:27 PM
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waaahhhhhh kyaa baat hai Zainy Saahiba..... Kisi nayaab nageene ki tarah hai aapka yeh kalaam.. behad haseen , behad khuubsurat , behad rawaan dawaan ghazal hai.... Sub'haan Allah... Ho zore qalam aur bhi ziyaadah... yahi duaa dene ke saath ijaazat letaa hoon.. khush-o-khurram rahiye... Allah mehrbaan hai Shaad... |
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10th December 2012, 12:34 PM
agar maiN ghalat nahin hun to shayad do saal baad padh raha hun aapko, ache khayaal haiN, bayaangi bhi behtareen rahi, khaas taur pe ye sher bahut behtareen raha:
Baday shouk se ibteda ki thi jiski Huyi woh kahaani khatam rafta rafta... khatm karte karte jubaaN pe gana yaad aa gaya aapke maqte se, Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere.... likhti rahiye aur sadaa khush rahiye...!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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10th December 2012, 12:42 PM
Zainy ji,
Bahut shandaar andaye bayan apki gazal mein. Ghazal per kar mere dil se yeh awaaz nikli: Haal ei dil aap ne sunaya rafta rafta, Bhar jayenge aap ke zakham rafta rafta. Sanjay |
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10th December 2012, 03:50 PM
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Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th December 2012, 04:23 PM
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11th December 2012, 03:36 PM
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Tah-e-dil se aapka bohat bohat Shukriyah Naresh ji..... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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11th December 2012, 09:08 PM
zainy :
namaste! baDe dinoN baad aapki koShiSh bazm meiN deKhi.. KhuShii huii...!! bahot hi umdaah Ghazal !! mazaa aa gayaa !! yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan ko aage baDhaate rahiye dil se daad KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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12th December 2012, 11:08 AM
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Khush rahiye... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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12th December 2012, 02:38 PM
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wah wah zainy jee bahu khoob likha hai aapne...... daad hi daad,,,,,, radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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12th December 2012, 03:15 PM
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Bahot Khoooob...!!!! Wo aayeNge humko manaane kisi din Chalo toota ye bhi bhram rafta rafta Ke Sirf Ghaalib ko hai pata, Radeef, Kafiya, Matla, Maktaa....!! Yeh Teer-E-Ishq kyaa 'Zindagi' se Ziyada, Kya Ghaalib ko hai Chubhata....!!!!! |
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12th December 2012, 04:14 PM
kya baat hai...bahut khoob...behad khoobsurat ahsaas....!
Ye din ujdey ujdey, ye sooni si shaameiN Ye wehshat-e-gham hogi kam Rafta Rafta Baday shouk se ibteda ki thi jiski Huyi woh kahaani khatam rafta rafta Rafta rafta kahani shuru hoti hai rafta rafta kahani khatam ho jati hai...rafta rafta dil sambhal bhi jata hai...hai na  Dear, dil se daad hazir hai...sabhi ahsaas dil ke kareeb rhe. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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13th December 2012, 08:29 AM
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Ufff!!.. yeh kya yaad dila diya aapne taish JI....yeh gaana hi tou is ghazal ka inspiration hai......bohat hi touching song hai...jab suna tha tou socha tha ke maiN bhi kuch likhungi milta jhulta.. Aap is gaane ki dhun per meri ghazal gungunaayiye...aapko pasand aayegi.... Ghazal ki tareef ka bohat bohat shukriyah...waise 2 saal baad nahi...6-8 mahinay baad likhi hai.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th December 2012, 09:33 AM
Zainy ji bahut hii khoob likh hai aapne
khaastor par yeh lines..... Na unse shikayat, na shikwa khuda se KareNgay gilay khud se hum Rafta Rafta. daad hazir hai rajinderseep |
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15th December 2012, 12:02 AM
zainy jee..har baar kee tarah sundar ehsaas...ghazal bahut sundar bani hai. Maine ise gunguna ke bhi dekha accha laga.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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15th December 2012, 12:19 PM
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Likhti Rahen Aur Khush Rahen Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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16th December 2012, 02:03 AM
wah wah... kia ghazab, bala ki ghazal biyaan ki hai aap ne.....
sir -ta- pa qayamat........ dil ko itnaa pur sukoon dekh kar be ta-haasha dharkaane chale aaye (hsn) aur haan maQta be-had pasand aaya aur dil k aar paar ho gaya..... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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16th December 2012, 10:48 AM
waahhhhh zainy ji behad khubsurat gazal aur adayegee hai aapki....
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17th December 2012, 12:18 PM
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Aapki daad sar ankhon per Duaon ki guzarish Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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17th December 2012, 01:18 PM
aadaab
aap ka qalam mohabbat se sarshaar ishq ke jazboN se labreyz hai badaa achha lagta hai aise kalaam parh ke jis me nayi nasl ghazal ke gaisoo ko sanwaarti nazar aati hai ek do jagah baat hai inshallaah fursat se bataaun gaa abhi aaya hun s d c pe abhi salaam qabool aren bas |
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26th December 2012, 01:23 PM
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Ghazal per ane ke liye bohat bohat shukriyah....sahi farmaya aapne behtar ho sakta hai..kamiyan tou hum sab me hain...koi bhi mukammal nahi...insha allah koshish karungi ke aage aur behtar likhun... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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26th December 2012, 01:24 PM
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...Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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27th December 2012, 04:20 PM
aadaab Zainy sahiba,
kya aalaa Ghazal kahi hai mohtarma, bohat khoob, mubarakbaad Tikaa lijiye aapki Ghazal aur phir Masood bhai ka tabsira padhne ke baad ek she'r yaad aa gaya, mulaiiza kijiye : abhi is taraf na nigaah kar maiN Ghazal ki palkeiN saNwaar luuN mera lafz lafz ho aaiinaa tujhe aaiiney meiN utaar luuN mujhe yaad hi nahiiN maiN aakhiri baar aapka koi kalaam kab padhaa tha, aji aapka to kya mujhe to yeh bhi nahiiN yaad ke maine apni koi Ghazal aakhiri bar kab padhi thi! ba-har-haal der aayad durust aayad mashq jaari rakhiye, ab aapki nayi Ghazal ka iNtezaar raha karega rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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28th December 2012, 12:44 PM
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BOHAT BOHAT SHUKRIYAH DHAVAL BHAI!!... Mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi..... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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28th December 2012, 12:45 PM
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28th December 2012, 05:40 PM
Zainy Sahibaa Aadaab!
Masha Allaah jee kia kahne behad khoob aur umdaa gazal ko kahi hai... waqai pur asar aur dilfareb ahsaasat ko umdaa ashaaroN meiN hazal kiya hai aapne... is behtreen kalaam par hazaaroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Likhatoi rahiye.... Shaad O aabaad rahiye.. Khuda Hafez... Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti Aaj tu zameen par hai kal zameen mein hoga Maut tujhe aani hai har roz tal nahi sakti |
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28th December 2012, 10:46 PM
bahut ahssas bhari ghazal hui hai
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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4th January 2013, 08:58 PM
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4th January 2013, 09:00 PM
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Shukriyah Di....I agree with you.............................. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th January 2013, 09:01 PM
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4th January 2013, 09:02 PM
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4th January 2013, 09:07 PM
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4th January 2013, 09:10 PM
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..THANKS FOR THE REPS.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th January 2013, 09:11 PM
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5th January 2013, 08:29 AM
Khatawaar haiN hum, kiya ishq humne
Milegi saza dum-ba-dum Rafta Rafta Baday shouk se ibteda ki thi jiski Huyi woh kahaani khatam rafta rafta Na unse shikayat, na shikwa khuda se KareNgay gilay khud se hum Rafta Rafta bahot sunder . khoobsurat ghazal .................................................. ........... |
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5th January 2013, 08:44 AM
Aadab Zainy Ji,
Bohot hi khoobsurat ghazal hai... Did se daad kubool kare... Duaon ke saath ijazat.. Abrar.  Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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