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khwaab kaanch ke mile - 20th November 2016, 11:25 PM

khwaab kaanch ke mile
dafn the takiye tale
yaad phir se aa gaye
mausiiquii ke silsile

mere likhe har lafz ki
dhuun bana karti thi tum
karch tum par kar diye
lamhe sabhi vo pyaar ke

main tera junoon tha
tu mera guroor thi
logon ne bas badhaa diye
faasle tere mere

munaasib nahi ki main tumhe
ab koi ilzaam duun
aye meri hum-nafas dua
jidhar rahe tu khush rahe

jis se likhe the khat tumhe
siyaahi vo thi udhaar ki
vo bezubaan alfaaz ab
'Qasid' tumhe bulaa rahe



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21st November 2016, 11:51 AM

wahh wahh bohat umda janaab,

ehsaaso ko behtreen lafzo me piro diya wahh



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khwaab kaanch ke mile
dafn the takiye tale
yaad phir se aa gaye
mausiiquii ke silsile


Waaah!!!! Behad khoobsoorat agaaz hai qasid sahab....kalaam ko bakhoobi anjaam tak pahunchaya aapne...bahot khooob maqta......

Bazm me apka qalaam dekhkar dil ko sukoon hasil hua. andaaz e bayaa.n bahot dilkash hamesha ki tarah... ....daad qubool kijiye...

Ye silsila yun hee parwaan chadhta rahe yahi dua hai......

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21st November 2016, 07:52 PM

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wahh wahh bohat umda janaab,

ehsaaso ko behtreen lafzo me piro diya wahh
Shukriyaa nacheez ke khaak alfaazon pe aapne tavajjo diya...



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khwaab kaanch ke mile
dafn the takiye tale
yaad phir se aa gaye
mausiiquii ke silsile


Waaah!!!! Behad khoobsoorat agaaz hai qasid sahab....kalaam ko bakhoobi anjaam tak pahunchaya aapne...bahot khooob maqta......

Bazm me apka qalaam dekhkar dil ko sukoon hasil hua. andaaz e bayaa.n bahot dilkash hamesha ki tarah... ....daad qubool kijiye...

Ye silsila yun hee parwaan chadhta rahe yahi dua hai......

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Umeed to meri bhi yahi hai Madhu, bas aap jaise kadardaan milte rahein to silsilaa jaari rahegaa



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aye meri hum-nafas dua
jidhar rahe tu khush rahe


behad hi kaamyaab kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne qasid saaab.........
bahot se rang nazar aaye hame aapki is kavitaa me... sab se khoobsurat wo rang lagaa jo quoted sher me nazar aayaa..... bahot bahot mubaarak ho mere bhaai............

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khwaab kaanch ke mile
dafn the takiye tale
yaad phir se aa gaye
mausiiquii ke silsile

mere likhe har lafz ki
dhuun bana karti thi tum
karch tum par kar diye
lamhe sabhi vo pyaar ke

main tera junoon tha
tu mera guroor thi
logon ne bas badhaa diye
faasle tere mere

munaasib nahi ki main tumhe
ab koi ilzaam duun
aye meri hum-nafas dua
jidhar rahe tu khush rahe

jis se likhe the khat tumhe
siyaahi vo thi udhaar ki
vo bezubaan alfaaz ab
'Qasid' tumhe bulaa rahe

wah jannab bahut hi umda hui yeh gazal.
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behad hi kaamyaab kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne qasid saaab.........
bahot se rang nazar aaye hame aapki is kavitaa me... sab se khoobsurat wo rang lagaa jo quoted sher me nazar aayaa..... bahot bahot mubaarak ho mere bhaai............

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khwaab kaanch ke mile
dafn the takiye tale
yaad phir se aa gaye
mausiiquii ke silsile

mere likhe har lafz ki
dhuun bana karti thi tum
karch tum par kar diye
lamhe sabhi vo pyaar ke

main tera junoon tha
tu mera guroor thi
logon ne bas badhaa diye
faasle tere mere

munaasib nahi ki main tumhe
ab koi ilzaam duun
aye meri hum-nafas dua
jidhar rahe tu khush rahe

jis se likhe the khat tumhe
siyaahi vo thi udhaar ki
vo bezubaan alfaaz ab
'Qasid' tumhe bulaa rahe

wah jannab bahut hi umda hui yeh gazal.
rajinderseep
Behad shukriya bhai aapko yeh ehsaas pasand aaye behad aacha laga



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khwaab kaanch ke mile
dafn the takiye tale
yaad phir se aa gaye
mausiiquii ke silsile

mere likhe har lafz ki
dhuun bana karti thi tum
karch tum par kar diye
lamhe sabhi vo pyaar ke

main tera junoon tha
tu mera guroor thi
logon ne bas badhaa diye
faasle tere mere

munaasib nahi ki main tumhe
ab koi ilzaam duun
aye meri hum-nafas dua
jidhar rahe tu khush rahe

jis se likhe the khat tumhe
siyaahi vo thi udhaar ki
vo bezubaan alfaaz ab
'Qasid' tumhe bulaa rahe
Beautifully written bhaiya! So nice to read your creativity after such a long time!
God bless you!!
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