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Tum aa jaao.. - 14th May 2003, 05:36 PM

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Fiza me shabnam ki nami si hai,
Mehfil sitaaron ki jami si hai,
Tum aa jaao to ho jaye kamil,
Bazm me Chaand ki kami si hai.

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14th May 2003, 05:42 PM

Shabash,
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sahi maana mein daad deneko ji chahta hai.
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14th May 2003, 05:44 PM

Shukria Musharraf sahab!

Yeh apki salah maan ne ka nateeja hai.. Kai dino se humne kuchh likha nahi tha aur isiliye kuchh post bhi nahi kiya.. hir aaj achanak yeh sher zehen me aaya to post kiya hai.. Apko pasand aaya, humari koshish kaamyaab hui!


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14th May 2003, 08:25 PM

app na boht acha likha ha..keep up the good work!!!


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Hi - 15th May 2003, 10:37 AM

Banno jii..waah kya soch hain kya jassbat hain..waah jitanii bhii tariff ki jaye kaam hain....bada khushh naseeb hii hain joo ap ko chaand ki yaad dilata hain..humarii dua ap ke sath hain ap ko ap kaa chaand jarur milegaa...chinnta nakoo ....gar hamarii dua kabhul huvii tau hume yaad rahikyegaa.... chalata hun milunga ab ap kii fhurrsatoon main ...ek adhurraa swapnn

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15th May 2003, 11:44 AM

Zahra: Sher pasand farmaane ka shukria!

Ramance ji: Aap sab ko humara kalaam achha lagta hai yeh bohat hai..

Swapnn!!: Kidhar rehte ho aaj kal?? Hum to soch me paRe hue the ki humare khwaab kahan gum ho gaye Aapne dua de di, ye bohat baRi baat hai! Duaon ka bohat asar hota hai... lekin hum to aapko waise hi yaad rakhte hai.. Dua kubool ho, ya na ho..


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KYA BAAT HAI
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15th May 2003, 12:18 PM

Wah! Mohit, kya baat kahi hai aapne! Bohat khoob... Itna pyaara jawaab dene ka shukria!

Apke jawaab par hamaara ek sher yaad aaya hai, arz karte hain:


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Dekh lo ek nazar gar tum,
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wah - 17th May 2003, 08:21 PM

bannio ji.

wahhhhhh chhota sa par kaatilaana vaar kiya he aapane....bahut khoob....bas aise aise likhatey rahiyega.

apana khayal rakhiyega.


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18th May 2003, 11:06 AM

bahut acha kiha ahi apne bye
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18th May 2003, 12:21 PM

Thanks Punnu!

Shyam ji: Kaise ho aap? Humara sher aap jaise umda shayaron ko pasand aata hai, ye humare liye garv ki baat hai!.. haunsla afzai ka bohat shukria


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18th May 2003, 12:54 PM

Banno ji.

sabase pahele hum ek baat kahete he banno ji...ki hum umada shayar nahi he dost...gazal aur shayaro par hamane aaj hi ek gazal likhi he..usaka ek sher arz karata hu.

"apane aap ko shayar mat kaho "shyam", jara aas-paas dekho,
yaha to har ek aashiq ke dilo me panapati he gazal"

anyway...aaapane bahot chotdaar likha he..aur taareef ke kaabil he...aage bhi likhetey rahiyega.
bye for now.


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18th May 2003, 12:57 PM

Aapne sahi kaha, yahan har ashiq ke dil me ek ghazal hai, har deewane ke seene me ek nazm.. shayad isiliye ye shayri ki duniya itni haseen hai..

Milte rahiyega shyam ji


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hi - 19th May 2003, 06:19 PM

hi banoo ji
pehle to sorry k ham ne der se reply kiya
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kindly wajah to bata dain,,,?
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19th May 2003, 06:25 PM

Chaliye, Maaf kiya! Der aaye, durust aaye!



Wajah kya ya KAUN hai, ye to aap achhi tarah jaante hain..



Khair, kalaam pasand farmaane ka tahe dil se shukria!


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