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Nazar Nahi Aata - 6th June 2003, 08:22 PM

KALI GHATA MAIN CHUPA HUA CHAND NAZAR NAHI AATA
ASMAN MAIN AAJ KOI TUTA HUA TARA NAZAR NAHI AATA
NAZARO SE DOOR BETHE DILBAR KA DEDAR NAZAR NAHI AATA
ARZOO SE BHARE DIL KO SARAHE WO YAAR NAZAR NAHI AATA
SAHRA MAIN KHADI HOO KOI PYAS BUJHAE NAZAR NAHI AATA
ROTI HUI IN ANKHOO KO SARAHE WO YAAR NAZAR NAHI AATA
SURAJ KI ROSHNI DEEKHANE WALA WO YAAR NAZAR NAHI AATA
TUMHARE BINA KAISE JIYE RAH DIKHANEWALA NAZAR NAHI AATA


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good. - 6th June 2003, 08:36 PM

hi mita ji.
NAZARO SE DOOR BETHE DILBAR KA DEDAR NAZAR NAHI AATA
ARZOO SE BHARE DIL KO SARAHE WO YAAR NAZAR NAHI AATA

bahot khoob mita ji.
vaakai me achha likha he aapane.
keep it up.
apana khayal rakhiyega.


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6th June 2003, 09:08 PM

itne saare dost aap ke shairy.com per hain. kyun fikr kerti hain.
sab aap ke hain.
khair yeh to mazaaq ki baat hai.
mita ji aap ki hassasiyat se to hamein inkaar ho hi naheen sakta.
bohat khoob likha hai aap ne.

likhti rahen.
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THANK U - 7th June 2003, 04:06 PM

Thank u shyamji. aap ki bhi shayri achai hoti hai.


Thank u mufi dost Aap ki baat sahi hai yaha bahot dost hai.khas kar ke aap jo har labz samazne ke baad reply dete hai,


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waah - 8th June 2003, 08:59 AM

mita,
heyyyyyy
yaar tu pan nang chhae. bahu j saras lakhi chhae
pan ek puchhu???
aa man wagar atley ke ahesaas wagar tu kai rite lakhi sakae chhae??? lol
bahu j saras lakhyu chhae
tu samajti j hoish....... mara thhi wadhhu aanand kone thhai sakae? right?
   
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good evening - 8th June 2003, 05:51 PM

Hi
waiting 4 yr reply only. 1st time i have felt that i have written good. santosh thayo. taro saath hameha joshe joshe ne joshe duniya na koi pan khuna ma kem na hoiye. bye.


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