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Post Kaisa hoon, kis haal me hoon... - 30th January 2006, 04:43 PM

kaisa hoon, kis haal me hoon usko kaya khabar,
achcha hoon ya bura hoon, usko kaya khabar...

mulaakat ki usse hui barso ki sada,
yaad aata hai mera chup rehna, uski meethi baaton ki adaa,
kis kadar tute hai pal woh mohobat waale,
kis kadar chubhte hai pal ye yaadon waale,
tanha hoon ya toota hoon, usko kaya khabar...

kaya khabar thi dil ki baaton me haal_e_dil hai chupa,
chand yaadon par dard_e_dil hai utha,
jaane kyu sochta hoon guzra kal aksar,
jab kisi ko nahi koi matlab,
zinda hoon ya guzra hoon, usko kaya khabar...

Kaisa hoon, kis haal me hoon usko kaya khabar,
achcha hoon ya bura hoon, usko kaya khabar...

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bahut hi khoob saakib saab hamesha dil to chune wali kalam likhte ho aur humara dil jeet lete ho maza aata hai jab bhi aapka kalam padta hu..........................
bhai mera id hai my_heart_beats_only_for_u_dear@yahoo.com ho sake toh aapka bhi bata do


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31st January 2006, 06:21 PM

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bahut hi khoob saakib saab hamesha dil to chune wali kalam likhte ho aur humara dil jeet lete ho maza aata hai jab bhi aapka kalam padta hu..........................
bhai mera id hai my_heart_beats_only_for_u_dear@yahoo.com ho sake toh aapka bhi bata do

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ek baar phir se teh dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon jo aapne saakib ko padha aur pasand kiya... janaab id hum aapko zaroor denge... apna khayaal rakhiyega

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bahoot khoob..


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Re: Kaisa hoon, kis haal me hoon... - 1st February 2006, 09:42 AM

mulaakat ki usse hui barso ki sada,
yaad aata hai mera chup rehna, uski meethi baaton ki adaa,
kis kadar tute hai pal woh mohobat waale,
kis kadar chubhte hai pal ye yaadon waale,
tanha hoon ya toota hoon, usko kaya khabar...

wah sakib saheb
kya khubsurati se haal-e-dil is mishre mein samet diya hai aapne,,,"dard" par "wah" kehne par majboor ho utha mein...!!! Shakeel Badayuni saheb ka ek sher jehan mein ubhar aaya aapko padh kar

tamanna lut gayi phir bhi tere dam se muhabbat hai
mubaaraq gair ko khushiyan hamein gam se mohabbat hai

likhte rahiye...meri daad kubool kijiye
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1st February 2006, 06:35 PM

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bahoot khoob..
adaab,,,

shukriya saakib ko padhne ka aur pasand karne ka...
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Re: Re: Kaisa hoon, kis haal me hoon... - 2nd February 2006, 09:53 AM

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mulaakat ki usse hui barso ki sada,
yaad aata hai mera chup rehna, uski meethi baaton ki adaa,
kis kadar tute hai pal woh mohobat waale,
kis kadar chubhte hai pal ye yaadon waale,
tanha hoon ya toota hoon, usko kaya khabar...

wah sakib saheb
kya khubsurati se haal-e-dil is mishre mein samet diya hai aapne,,,"dard" par "wah" kehne par majboor ho utha mein...!!! Shakeel Badayuni saheb ka ek sher jehan mein ubhar aaya aapko padh kar

tamanna lut gayi phir bhi tere dam se muhabbat hai
mubaaraq gair ko khushiyan hamein gam se mohabbat hai

likhte rahiye...meri daad kubool kijiye
-MANOJ

adaab kureel janaab,,

bahaut hi khushi hui ki aap aaye hamari post par aur itna pasand kiya saakib ko.. janaab sher bhi hume behad pasand aaya. kureel sahab jab bhi aapko padhte hai to aisa lagta hai koi apna hi hai yeh anjaan shaks..ek baar phir se teh dil se shukrguzaar hai aapke jo aapne hamare liye waqt nikala...

apna khayaal rakhiyega..

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2nd February 2006, 09:59 AM

kaya khabar thi dil ki baaton me haal_e_dil hai chupa,
chand yaadon par dard_e_dil hai utha,
jaane kyu sochta hoon guzra kal aksar,
jab kisi ko nahi koi matlab,
zinda hoon ya guzra hoon, usko kaya khabar...


Hi Saakib,

Bahut hi khoobsurati se bayaan kiye hain dil ke ehsaas aapne... Iliked it a lot... Specially the above quoted words...they were just 2 gud....

Aise hi likhte raho...Do TC...!


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2nd February 2006, 05:46 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
kaya khabar thi dil ki baaton me haal_e_dil hai chupa,
chand yaadon par dard_e_dil hai utha,
jaane kyu sochta hoon guzra kal aksar,
jab kisi ko nahi koi matlab,
zinda hoon ya guzra hoon, usko kaya khabar...


Hi Saakib,

Bahut hi khoobsurati se bayaan kiye hain dil ke ehsaas aapne... Iliked it a lot... Specially the above quoted words...they were just 2 gud....

Aise hi likhte raho...Do TC...!

adaab pulkit ji,,,

shukriya jo aap hamari post par aaye aur saakib ko padha...
behad khushi hui aapka reply dekh kar...
take care.

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