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Koi mujhko deewani teri kahe.. - 15th December 2016, 10:38 PM

ek kavita jisme prem aur samarpan ki gahrai ka bayaan karne ki koshish hai....


Koi mujhko deewani teri kahe ya pagal kah ke pukare ab
Mujhe teri gali hee bhati hai..bas jaun tere chaubare ab

Teri gali ki mati badan chhuye to rom rom khil jata hai
Har saans mahak uthati hai meri aur tera naam pukare ab

Tere desh ke panchchi bhi dekhun to koi farishta lagte hain
Inhe dekh tujhe dil yaad kare aur sari umar guzare ab

Teri ankhei.n,batei.n yadei.n sab mere paas yahi ek poonji hai
Muflis na bana rahne bhi de inhe paas mere rakh ja re ab.

Sapno ko baha na asuan me..na preet ko yun ruswa kar tu
Nadan na ban tu hosh me aa dil khud ko zara samajha re ab...


Madhu...




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19th December 2016, 07:59 AM

Bahut umdaa kavita likhi hai Madhu, mazaa aa gaya padhkar..khaaskar yeh do lines bahut pasand aayi

Sapno ko baha na asuan me..na preet ko yun ruswa kar tu
Nadan na ban tu hosh me aa dil khud ko zara samajha re ab...

Yunhi likhti raho..



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19th December 2016, 02:39 PM

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Bahut umdaa kavita likhi hai Madhu, mazaa aa gaya padhkar..khaaskar yeh do lines bahut pasand aayi

Sapno ko baha na asuan me..na preet ko yun ruswa kar tu
Nadan na ban tu hosh me aa dil khud ko zara samajha re ab...

Yunhi likhti raho..

Shukriya anu...aapne pasand kiya mujhe bahot achcha laga..mere sath kai baar aise hota hai ki kalam chalti hai aur koi nagma aise banta hai ki bas usme changes karne ka man nahi hota ye unme se ek hai.....bhale hee technically bahot strong na ho par ehsaas seedhe dil se nikle huye aur pure and strong....

Akhiri line mujhe bhi bahot pasand hai aur khaas baat ye ki vo post dalte vaqt hee likhi gayi hai....

Ek baar phir thank u ....



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