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Thumbs up Ghazal : Bewafaa tuu nahiiN Bewafaa maiN nahiiN...! - 17th June 2015, 08:23 PM

Mere Pyaare dostoN:
Namskaar aur Aadaab..!

Aik baar fir se meHfil meiN haaZir ho rahaa huuN apnii ik Ghazal ke saath…. Ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeh Ghazal pasaNd aayengii… aapki raae'y kaa iNtezaar rahengaa… mulA’iizaa farmA’iiYe…!

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Bewafaa tuu nahiiN Bewafaa maiN nahiiN
DhooNDhtee ho jise wo pataa maiN nahiiN

waQt thaa bewafaa ,Bewafaa hum naa the
waQt hi thaa buraa ke buraa maiN nahiiN

maiN zameeN saa rahaa tuu rahii aasamaaN
chaaNd taare ti’re maaNgataa maiN nahiiN

jaa ti’ree maNzileN DhooNDh le Khud hi tuu
maNziloN ke niShaaN jaanataa maiN nahiiN

jin baGhichoN meiN hum baiThate the kabhee
uss taraf ik naZar deKhataa maiN nahiiN

chaar suu bas diKhe muskuraahaT ti'ree
Ey sanaam ! aur kuChh chaahataa maiN nahiiN

maiN nahiiN jaanataa kyaa Khataa thee mi’ree
din-ba-din mar rahaa jee rahaa maiN nahiiN

Bewafaa par liKhii kyuuN Ghazal “JOSH” ne
Aag sii haii Qalam Aag saa maiN nahiiN


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17th June 2015, 08:50 PM

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17th June 2015, 09:25 PM

bahut achchi ghazal hui dhawal bhai ..dheroN daad kabool kareiN

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17th June 2015, 10:22 PM

Bewafaa tuu nahiiN Bewafaa maiN nahiiN
DhooNDhtee ho jise wo pataa maiN nahiiN

waQt thaa bewafaa ,Bewafaa hum naa the
waQt hi thaa buraa ke buraa maiN nahiiN

Kya baat hai dhaval ji.......bahut khoob ghazal pesh ki hai aapne...bahut khoob andaaz....
dher sari daad aur mubarak bad meri taraf se...



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Bewafaa tuu nahiiN Bewafaa maiN nahiiN
DhooNDhtee ho jise wo pataa maiN nahiiN

waQt thaa bewafaa ,Bewafaa hum naa the
waQt hi thaa buraa ke buraa maiN nahiiN

Kya baat hai dhaval ji.......bahut khoob ghazal pesh ki hai aapne...bahut khoob andaaz....
dher sari daad aur mubarak bad meri taraf se...



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18th June 2015, 10:12 AM

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Namskaar aur Aadaab..!

Aik baar fir se meHfil meiN haaZir ho rahaa huuN apnii ik Ghazal ke saath…. Ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeh Ghazal pasaNd aayengii… aapki raae'y kaa iNtezaar rahengaa… mulA’iizaa farmA’iiYe…!

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Bewafaa tuu nahiiN Bewafaa maiN nahiiN
DhooNDhtee ho jise wo pataa maiN nahiiN

waQt thaa bewafaa ,Bewafaa hum naa the
waQt hi thaa buraa ke buraa maiN nahiiN

maiN zameeN saa rahaa tuu rahii aasamaaN
chaaNd taare ti’re maaNgataa maiN nahiiN

jaa ti’ree maNzileN DhooNDh le Khud hi tuu
maNziloN ke niShaaN jaanataa maiN nahiiN

jin baGhichoN meiN hum baiThate the kabhee
uss taraf ik naZar deKhataa maiN nahiiN

chaar suu bas diKhe muskuraahaT ti'ree
Ey sanaam ! aur kuChh chaahataa maiN nahiiN

maiN nahiiN jaanataa kyaa Khataa thee mi’ree
din-ba-din mar rahaa jee rahaa maiN nahiiN

Bewafaa par liKhii kyuuN Ghazal “JOSH” ne
Aag sii haii Qalam Aag saa maiN nahiiN


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Mere Pyaare dostoN:
Namskaar aur Aadaab..!

Aik baar fir se meHfil meiN haaZir ho rahaa huuN apnii ik Ghazal ke saath…. Ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeh Ghazal pasaNd aayengii… aapki raae'y kaa iNtezaar rahengaa… mulA’iizaa farmA’iiYe…!

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Bewafaa tuu nahiiN Bewafaa maiN nahiiN
DhooNDhtee ho jise wo pataa maiN nahiiN

waQt thaa bewafaa ,Bewafaa hum naa the
waQt hi thaa buraa ke buraa maiN nahiiN

maiN zameeN saa rahaa tuu rahii aasamaaN
chaaNd taare ti’re maaNgataa maiN nahiiN

jaa ti’ree maNzileN DhooNDh le Khud hi tuu
maNziloN ke niShaaN jaanataa maiN nahiiN

jin baGhichoN meiN hum baiThate the kabhee
uss taraf ik naZar deKhataa maiN nahiiN

chaar suu bas diKhe muskuraahaT ti'ree
Ey sanaam ! aur kuChh chaahataa maiN nahiiN

maiN nahiiN jaanataa kyaa Khataa thee mi’ree
din-ba-din mar rahaa jee rahaa maiN nahiiN

Bewafaa par liKhii kyuuN Ghazal “JOSH” ne
Aag sii haii Qalam Aag saa maiN nahiiN


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18th June 2015, 06:20 PM

Namaste Gujju jii,

kya hal hai?

sab maja ma ne....

maine padhi tumhari ye ghazal..pahle kuch gadbad lagi..bt fir wapas pdhi..dimag lagake...to samajh agai ...
to ab samajh agai mujhe ghazal or achhi bhi lagi hai....

jin baGhichoN meiN hum baiThate the kabhee
uss taraf ik naZar deKhataa maiN nahiiN

ye mujhe bahot achhi lagi lines....

likhto raho gujju

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18th June 2015, 09:29 PM

Kya baat Chote ustaad ...

Maza aa gaya .. BeintihaaN khubsoorat Ghazal

Mashallaah bahut tarakki kari aapne aur yakeen janiye
MaiN bayaN nahi kar pa raha mujhe iss bat pe kitni khushi hai

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19th June 2015, 11:16 AM

Dhaval ji, bohot khoob ehsasaat, aur ek alag andaaz. Khoob ghazal huyi hai jenab.
Likhte raheiN.


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21st June 2015, 06:56 PM

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Kya baat hai dhaval jee..bahut hee sundar ghazal hui....daad kubul karein....



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Mere Pyaare dostoN:
Namskaar aur Aadaab..!

Aik baar fir se meHfil meiN haaZir ho rahaa huuN apnii ik Ghazal ke saath…. Ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeh Ghazal pasaNd aayengii… aapki raae'y kaa iNtezaar rahengaa… mulA’iizaa farmA’iiYe…!

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Bewafaa tuu nahiiN Bewafaa maiN nahiiN
DhooNDhtee ho jise wo pataa maiN nahiiN

waQt thaa bewafaa ,Bewafaa hum naa the
waQt hi thaa buraa ke buraa maiN nahiiN

maiN zameeN saa rahaa tuu rahii aasamaaN
chaaNd taare ti’re maaNgataa maiN nahiiN

jaa ti’ree maNzileN DhooNDh le Khud hi tuu
maNziloN ke niShaaN jaanataa maiN nahiiN

jin baGhichoN meiN hum baiThate the kabhee
uss taraf ik naZar deKhataa maiN nahiiN

chaar suu bas diKhe muskuraahaT ti'ree
Ey sanaam ! aur kuChh chaahataa maiN nahiiN

maiN nahiiN jaanataa kyaa Khataa thee mi’ree
din-ba-din mar rahaa jee rahaa maiN nahiiN

Bewafaa par liKhii kyuuN Ghazal “JOSH” ne
Aag sii haii Qalam Aag saa maiN nahiiN


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bhaai kaise ho?? ghazal bahut umdaa likhi hai aapne.. bas etna hi kahan chahunga ki likhate rahe..

shubhkamnaao sahit
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Bewafaa tuu nahiiN Bewafaa maiN nahiiN
DhooNDhtee ho jise wo pataa maiN nahiiN

waQt thaa bewafaa ,Bewafaa hum naa the
waQt hi thaa buraa ke buraa maiN nahiiN

maiN zameeN saa rahaa tuu rahii aasamaaN
chaaNd taare ti’re maaNgataa maiN nahiiN

jaa ti’ree maNzileN DhooNDh le Khud hi tuu
maNziloN ke niShaaN jaanataa maiN nahiiN

jin baGhichoN meiN hum baiThate the kabhee
uss taraf ik naZar deKhataa maiN nahiiN

chaar suu bas diKhe muskuraahaT ti'ree
Ey sanaam ! aur kuChh chaahataa maiN nahiiN

maiN nahiiN jaanataa kyaa Khataa thee mi’ree
din-ba-din mar rahaa jee rahaa maiN nahiiN

Bewafaa par liKhii kyuuN Ghazal “JOSH” ne
Aag sii haii Qalam Aag saa maiN nahiiN


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Behad khoobsurat gazal kahi aapne, har ek sher apne aap me ek kahani kahta hua.....andaz -e-bayaN behad dil fareb raha.......aur kya ehsaas waaaaaaah.......dheeeeroN daaad

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28th June 2015, 11:59 PM

dhaval miyaaN tak mera salaam pahuNche.... Radeef meiN nahin laga dene ke baad thoda mushkil ho jata hai nibhana, par aapne khoobi se ise nibha liya, is umda ghazal ke liye dil se daad qubool farmaayeN....



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Bohut ache dhaval ji.

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waQt thaa bewafaa ,Bewafaa hum naa the
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Kya baat hai dhaval ji.......bahut khoob ghazal pesh ki hai aapne...bahut khoob andaaz....
dher sari daad aur mubarak bad meri taraf se...
Madhoo jee

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kyaa baat hai dhaval bhai.... khoobsurat aashaar se sajaai hai aapneye ummdah ghazal.... ek ek lafz apne likhne waale ke hunar ko bayaan kar rahaa hai.... likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye

Shaad.........
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Namaste Gujju jii,

kya hal hai?

sab maja ma ne....

maine padhi tumhari ye ghazal..pahle kuch gadbad lagi..bt fir wapas pdhi..dimag lagake...to samajh agai ...
to ab samajh agai mujhe ghazal or achhi bhi lagi hai....

jin baGhichoN meiN hum baiThate the kabhee
uss taraf ik naZar deKhataa maiN nahiiN

ye mujhe bahot achhi lagi lines....

likhto raho gujju

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Dimaag lagaa ke ghazal padhii aur ghazal samjh mein bhii aa gayii khoob.. next ghazal italian lang. Mein likhni padengii .. ghazal padhne aur pasand karne ke liye shukriyaah... padhtee rehnaa aage bhee

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Kya baat Chote ustaad ...

Maza aa gaya .. BeintihaaN khubsoorat Ghazal

Mashallaah bahut tarakki kari aapne aur yakeen janiye
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Har sher mohabbat me duba hua tanj kasta laga

Malik aapko aur kaifiyat takseem kare

Zor e qalam aur ziyada
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Kyaa Kahne Dhaval Ji

Khoob Se Bhi Khoobtar Ghazal huii Hai Janaab

Jawaab NahiN

Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!




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Aik baar fir se meHfil meiN haaZir ho rahaa huuN apnii ik Ghazal ke saath…. Ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeh Ghazal pasaNd aayengii… aapki raae'y kaa iNtezaar rahengaa… mulA’iizaa farmA’iiYe…!

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waQt thaa bewafaa ,Bewafaa hum naa the
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maiN zameeN saa rahaa tuu rahii aasamaaN
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jaa ti’ree maNzileN DhooNDh le Khud hi tuu
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jin baGhichoN meiN hum baiThate the kabhee
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chaar suu bas diKhe muskuraahaT ti'ree
Ey sanaam ! aur kuChh chaahataa maiN nahiiN

maiN nahiiN jaanataa kyaa Khataa thee mi’ree
din-ba-din mar rahaa jee rahaa maiN nahiiN

Bewafaa par liKhii kyuuN Ghazal “JOSH” ne
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Yeh sher khaas pasand aaye:

waQt thaa bewafaa ,Bewafaa hum naa the
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maiN zameeN saa rahaa tuu rahii aasamaaN
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Aapki es creation ki jitani taarif karu kam hi hogi.. Bahut hi umdaa likha hai aapke.. God bless you..

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bahut umdah likha h dhaval bhai.....daad kubul karen


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bhaai kaise ho?? ghazal bahut umdaa likhi hai aapne.. bas etna hi kahan chahunga ki likhate rahe..

shubhkamnaao sahit
Akant...
Akant bhaiya

Pranaam

Bas main theek hun.. Shukriyaah ghazal ki pasandgee ke kiye

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Behad khoobsurat gazal kahi aapne, har ek sher apne aap me ek kahani kahta hua.....andaz -e-bayaN behad dil fareb raha.......aur kya ehsaas waaaaaaah.......dheeeeroN daaad

Aapka apna
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Khushii huii jaan kar ke aapko yeh ghazal pasand aaii.. Padhte rahen aage bhee

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kya khoob kahi sir....

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Ghayal bhai

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:
Namskaar aur Aadaab..!

Aik baar fir se meHfil meiN haaZir ho rahaa huuN apnii ik Ghazal ke saath…. Ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeh Ghazal pasaNd aayengii… aapki raae'y kaa iNtezaar rahengaa… mulA’iizaa farmA’iiYe…!

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Bewafaa tuu nahiiN Bewafaa maiN nahiiN
DhooNDhtee ho jise wo pataa maiN nahiiN

waQt thaa bewafaa ,Bewafaa hum naa the
waQt hi thaa buraa ke buraa maiN nahiiN

maiN zameeN saa rahaa tuu rahii aasamaaN
chaaNd taare ti’re maaNgataa maiN nahiiN

jaa ti’ree maNzileN DhooNDh le Khud hi tuu
maNziloN ke niShaaN jaanataa maiN nahiiN

jin baGhichoN meiN hum baiThate the kabhee
uss taraf ik naZar deKhataa maiN nahiiN

chaar suu bas diKhe muskuraahaT ti'ree
Ey sanaam ! aur kuChh chaahataa maiN nahiiN

maiN nahiiN jaanataa kyaa Khataa thee mi’ree
din-ba-din mar rahaa jee rahaa maiN nahiiN

Bewafaa par liKhii kyuuN Ghazal “JOSH” ne
Aag sii haii Qalam Aag saa maiN nahiiN


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kisne kaha thaa ki wafa tum karo,
itne nasamajh to tum kabhi naa the.

bahut khub dhaval jee.

ye wafa aur bewafai kaa aalam hee kuch aur hai
maine khud wafa karke aur bewafa hoke dekha hai.
   
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Kya baat hai mere chhotu, maza aa gyaa parhkar ek ek share bakamaal. Sub haan allha. Daad hazir hai👍👍👍👍👍👍


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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2nd October 2018, 12:48 AM

ye kya ki sab se bayaaN dil ki haalateiN karni

'faraz' tujh ko na aaiiN mohabbateiN karni


mileN jab un se to mub'ham si guft-a-gu karna

phir apne aap se sau sau vazahateiN karni


kabhi 'faraz' naye mausamoN meiN ro dena

kabhi talaash puraani rifaaqateiN karni



Shayar ho, ab bhoojo...to jaaneN!


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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