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अंदाज़-ए-बयां शायराना है
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>> Meri MehfiL... -
26th May 2009, 11:56 AM
Hey frnds..
Aaiye miL k mehfil jamaye..
kuch hum sunaye
Kuch aap farmaye
Kuch log mehfil me aapne ishq ka bayan karne se darte haiN,
Unn dosto ke liye meri taraf se yeh samjhaish pesh haiN..
Jara gaur farmaiyega..
darna kaisa..
bayan aaj nahi to kal
karna haiN
kisse ko ek din to aam
karna haiN
ishQ ka izhaar bhari
mehfil me kiya...
yah chhup kar kiya,
raheta to ishQ haiN.
fir yeh dar kaisa,
yeh sharm kyu
sawalooN ki yeh,
justzoo kyu.
haiN koi arzu toh,
besak puri kijiye.
bhari mehfil me bhi
izhaar-e-mohabbat kijiye.
kya pata kal wo kaha,
kis gali hoo.....
aaj hai mauka kismat me,
shayad kal ho na ho....
-- OMi
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26th May 2009, 12:12 PM
[QUOTE=heart_killer;356156] Hey frnds..
Aaiye miL k mehfil jamaye..
kuch hum sunaye
Kuch aap farmaye
Kuch log mehfil me aapne ishq ka bayan karne se darte haiN,
Unn dosto ke liye meri taraf se yeh samjhaish pesh haiN..
Jara gaur farmaiyega..
darna kaisa..
bayan aaj nahi to kal
karna haiN
kisse ko ek din to aam
karna haiN
ishQ ka izhaar bhari
mehfil me kiya...
yah chhup kar kiya,
raheta to ishQ haiN.
fir yeh dar kaisa,
yeh sharm kyu
sawalooN ki yeh,
justzoo kyu.
haiN koi arzu toh,
besak puri kijiye.
bhari mehfil me bhi
izhaar-e-mohabbat kijiye.
kya pata kal wo kaha,
kis gali hoo.....
aaj hai mauka kismat me,
shayad kal ho na ho....
-- OMi[/QUOTE
omi ji
aapke is nazm ne toh hamari kayi sawal
ke jawab de diye,,
kya nazm likha hai
aap ne ji,,Fantastic
keep writing.
tc
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26th May 2009, 12:27 PM
ahahaha..
Aji aap ne meri puri baat nahi suNi..
half to abhi baQi hai...
Jara yeh bhi suN ke jaiye.. ji
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Pyar meiN Chup-chup ke milane ka
maza kuch aur haiN.
bhari mehfil meiN ek-duje se anjaaN
bane rahne ka maza kuch aur haiN.
baithe dono khamosii se,aur akhiyooN
se milane ka maza kuch aur haiN.
Chup-chup ke pyar karne...
Maza kuch aur haiN.
-- OMi
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rani Aflatoon
omi ji
aapke is nazm ne toh hamari kayi sawal
ke jawab de diye,,
kya nazm likha hai
aap ne ji,,Fantastic
keep writing.
tc
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26th May 2009, 12:32 PM
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
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26th May 2009, 12:38 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by heart_killer
ahahaha..
Aji aap ne meri puri baat nahi suNi..
half to abhi baQi hai...
Jara yeh bhi suN ke jaiye.. ji
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Pyar meiN Chup-chup ke milane ka
maza kuch aur haiN.
bhari mehfil meiN ek-duje se anjaaN
bane rahne ka maza kuch aur haiN.
baithe dono khamosii se,aur akhiyooN
se milane ka maza kuch aur haiN.
Chup-chup ke pyar karne...
Maza kuch aur haiN.
-- OMi
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HMMMMMMMM
not bad omi ji,,,
matlab mehfil main izhaar karne se
dar lagta hai,,
tabhi toh chup chup ke milne ka maza hi kuch aur hai ji,,
nyc once again
Na hi meri koi manzil hai na kinara,,
Mehfil mein tanhai aur yaadein mera sahara ,,
Us se bichar kar kuch yun waqt guzra
Kabhi zindagi ko tarse Kabhi Maut ko pukara...
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26th May 2009, 01:29 PM
Ji aaisa kuch nahi hai.. its depend 2 person and time,
aab har kisi ki soch ek hi hoo.. yeh jaroori to nahi haiN.
lagta hai.. aapNe kahi gehri chhot khai hai ??? is it...
chaliye aap ke dard ke liye..
ek khubshurat sher aarz haiN...
kore kagaZ pe humNe apni zindagi likh dii
AshQooN ki syahi se apNi har khusi likh dii
Dard ko jab utara humNe lafzooN meiN....
Logo ne sahara, kaha wah kya gazal likh dii
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rani Aflatoon
HMMMMMMMM
not bad omi ji,,,
matlab mehfil main izhaar karne se
dar lagta hai,,
tabhi toh chup chup ke milne ka maza hi kuch aur hai ji,,
nyc once again
Na hi meri koi manzil hai na kinara,,
Mehfil mein tanhai aur yaadein mera sahara ,,
Us se bichar kar kuch yun waqt guzra
Kabhi zindagi ko tarse Kabhi Maut ko pukara...
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26th May 2009, 09:19 PM
omi ji
haa yeh baat toh sach hai
ke har kisi ki soch
ek jaise nahin
hoti,,,
n by the way
chot duniya main
khana nahin padhta ji
khud hi mil jata hai
n waisa kuch nahin hai jaisa aap
soch rahe hai,,,
and nice one keep writing
tc.
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26th May 2009, 09:46 PM
good one OMI...........................keep it up dude.....
bekaraari ki tarah mujhko gale se laga le koi,
khud se udaas baitha hoon mana le koi
(Farhat Shehzad)
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 11:03 AM
OMI Ji, toh ap kab kissa aam kar rahe ho................ arey bata bhi do ab ki kispe dill aa gya hai apka................... he he he , just kidding.
Bahut hi accha likha hai apne, maine apne sabhi darpok aashiq doston ko padaunga yeh poem, shayad unka kuch hosla bad jaaye, agar kisi ek ki bhi love story hit hogayi, toh apko dua denge............................
waise bahut hi accha likha hai apne, awesome very inspiring..................
Quote:
Originally Posted by heart_killer
Hey frnds..
Aaiye miL k mehfil jamaye..
kuch hum sunaye
Kuch aap farmaye
Kuch log mehfil me aapne ishq ka bayan karne se darte haiN,
Unn dosto ke liye meri taraf se yeh samjhaish pesh haiN..
Jara gaur farmaiyega..
darna kaisa..
bayan aaj nahi to kal
karna haiN
kisse ko ek din to aam
karna haiN
ishQ ka izhaar bhari
mehfil me kiya...
yah chhup kar kiya,
raheta to ishQ haiN.
fir yeh dar kaisa,
yeh sharm kyu
sawalooN ki yeh,
justzoo kyu.
haiN koi arzu toh,
besak puri kijiye.
bhari mehfil me bhi
izhaar-e-mohabbat kijiye.
kya pata kal wo kaha,
kis gali hoo.....
aaj hai mauka kismat me,
shayad kal ho na ho....
-- OMi
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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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29th May 2009, 10:50 AM
bahur badiya shayri hai aapki heart killer............. khoosorat creativity .......... i appreciate it........keep up
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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29th May 2009, 06:50 PM
us ke hath main toote hue sheeshe ki tarha hoon
itna hi bohat hai ke woh bikharnay nehi deta
nm
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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29th May 2009, 11:48 PM
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29th May 2009, 11:54 PM
hey.. thxxx sweetiee..
thx 4 coming here..
tere iss dard ka jawab main dard bhare bt..thoda inspirational andaaZ me deta huN..
jara gaur kariyega..
Jiske diL meiN dard haiN duNiya kaa
wo har gam ko seh zinda rahate haiN
Joo mitate haiN khud koo jeete jee
woo mar kar bhi zinda rahate haiN
-- OMi
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30th May 2009, 12:09 AM
hmmmmm.... chaliye... aapke iss sher ka jawab dene ki kosis karta hUN.. ummed karta huN.. aap ko pasand aayegi..
Sulagti aankh mehkati hasii se kya kaheta
jo mujh pe beet rahi thi,dusaro se kya kaheta
Pyare diL me gam ka koi aashiyana naa mila
maiN aapni baat kisi khamosi se kya kaheta.
-- OMi
Quote:
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us ke hath main toote hue sheeshe ki tarha hoon
itna hi bohat hai ke woh bikharnay nehi deta
nm
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31st May 2009, 02:00 PM
Yeh joo waQt ki dhar haiN,
yeh naa ruk saki mere liye.
baha Mujh ko le gai itni dur
k aaj mujhe aapni kasti ka
naam-o-nisaaN nazar nahi aata..
Dur nazar aa rahi haiN ek basti
par jaane ko kastii aur
pahuchane ka kirana nazar nahi aata..
Meri dubati iss jindagi ko aab
kisi tinke ka shahara nazar nahi aata
--OMi
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21st June 2009, 01:42 PM
tujh se mohabbat ka paigaam likh raha huN
tere husN ko khat meiN salam likh raha huN
pee kar jeese madhosh haiN yeh duniyaa
husn-e-mohabbat ka wo jaam likh raha huN
tere husN ko khat meiN salam likh raha huN...
- OMi
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