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26th May 2009, 11:56 AM
Hey frnds..
 Aaiye miL k mehfil jamaye.. kuch hum sunaye Kuch aap farmaye Kuch log mehfil me aapne ishq ka bayan karne se darte haiN, Unn dosto ke liye meri taraf se yeh samjhaish pesh haiN.. Jara gaur farmaiyega.. darna kaisa.. bayan aaj nahi to kal karna haiN kisse ko ek din to aam karna haiN ishQ ka izhaar bhari mehfil me kiya... yah chhup kar kiya, raheta to ishQ haiN. fir yeh dar kaisa, yeh sharm kyu sawalooN ki yeh, justzoo kyu. haiN koi arzu toh, besak puri kijiye. bhari mehfil me bhi izhaar-e-mohabbat kijiye. kya pata kal wo kaha, kis gali hoo..... aaj hai mauka kismat me, shayad kal ho na ho.... -- OMi Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein....... |
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26th May 2009, 12:12 PM
[QUOTE=heart_killer;356156]Hey frnds..
Aaiye miL k mehfil jamaye.. kuch hum sunaye Kuch aap farmaye Kuch log mehfil me aapne ishq ka bayan karne se darte haiN, Unn dosto ke liye meri taraf se yeh samjhaish pesh haiN.. Jara gaur farmaiyega.. darna kaisa.. bayan aaj nahi to kal karna haiN kisse ko ek din to aam karna haiN ishQ ka izhaar bhari mehfil me kiya... yah chhup kar kiya, raheta to ishQ haiN. fir yeh dar kaisa, yeh sharm kyu sawalooN ki yeh, justzoo kyu. haiN koi arzu toh, besak puri kijiye. bhari mehfil me bhi izhaar-e-mohabbat kijiye. kya pata kal wo kaha, kis gali hoo..... aaj hai mauka kismat me, shayad kal ho na ho.... -- OMi[/QUOTE omi ji aapke is nazm ne toh hamari kayi sawal ke jawab de diye,, kya nazm likha hai aap ne ji,,Fantastic keep writing. tc  [/IMG]
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26th May 2009, 12:27 PM
ahahaha..
 Aji aap ne meri puri baat nahi suNi.. half to abhi baQi hai... Jara yeh bhi suN ke jaiye.. ji  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Pyar meiN Chup-chup ke milane ka maza kuch aur haiN. bhari mehfil meiN ek-duje se anjaaN bane rahne ka maza kuch aur haiN. baithe dono khamosii se,aur akhiyooN se milane ka maza kuch aur haiN. Chup-chup ke pyar karne... Maza kuch aur haiN. -- OMi Quote:
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26th May 2009, 12:32 PM
Are agree to hogi naa, maine itana sahi shot..thot jo likha haiN..lol
and tere thots, Hayee hayee... kya baat haiN... yuh jhute sanpe naa dee jalim... kyuki SapNe woh nahiN jo har roz RaatooN meiN aate haiN SapNe woh haiN jo raatooN ki neende churateN haiN Quote:
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26th May 2009, 12:38 PM
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not bad omi ji,,, matlab mehfil main izhaar karne se dar lagta hai,, tabhi toh chup chup ke milne ka maza hi kuch aur hai ji,, nyc once again Na hi meri koi manzil hai na kinara,, Mehfil mein tanhai aur yaadein mera sahara ,, Us se bichar kar kuch yun waqt guzra Kabhi zindagi ko tarse Kabhi Maut ko pukara... [/IMG]
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26th May 2009, 01:29 PM
Ji aaisa kuch nahi hai.. its depend 2 person and time,
aab har kisi ki soch ek hi hoo.. yeh jaroori to nahi haiN. lagta hai.. aapNe kahi gehri chhot khai hai ??? is it... chaliye aap ke dard ke liye.. ek khubshurat sher aarz haiN... kore kagaZ pe humNe apni zindagi likh dii AshQooN ki syahi se apNi har khusi likh dii Dard ko jab utara humNe lafzooN meiN.... Logo ne sahara, kaha wah kya gazal likh dii Quote:
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26th May 2009, 09:19 PM
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haa yeh baat toh sach hai ke har kisi ki soch ek jaise nahin hoti,,, n by the way chot duniya main khana nahin padhta ji khud hi mil jata hai n waisa kuch nahin hai jaisa aap soch rahe hai,,, and nice one keep writing tc. [/IMG]
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26th May 2009, 09:46 PM
good one OMI...........................keep it up dude.....
bekaraari ki tarah mujhko gale se laga le koi, khud se udaas baitha hoon mana le koi (Farhat Shehzad)  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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27th May 2009, 11:03 AM
OMI Ji, toh ap kab kissa aam kar rahe ho................ arey bata bhi do ab ki kispe dill aa gya hai apka................... he he he , just kidding.
Bahut hi accha likha hai apne, maine apne sabhi darpok aashiq doston ko padaunga yeh poem, shayad unka kuch hosla bad jaaye, agar kisi ek ki bhi love story hit hogayi, toh apko dua denge............................ waise bahut hi accha likha hai apne, awesome very inspiring.................. Quote:
Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe  Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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29th May 2009, 10:50 AM
bahur badiya shayri hai aapki heart killer............. khoosorat creativity .......... i appreciate it........keep up
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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29th May 2009, 06:50 PM
us ke hath main toote hue sheeshe ki tarha hoon
itna hi bohat hai ke woh bikharnay nehi deta nm "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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29th May 2009, 11:48 PM
well thxxx... agaiN..
chaiye.. koi gal nahiN..yuh hi mehfil me aate rahiye.. aur sath banaye rakhiye.. aur chot wagar ki naa sochiye.. ye to duniya ka dastoor haiN.. Quote:
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29th May 2009, 11:54 PM
hey.. thxxx sweetiee..
thx 4 coming here.. tere iss dard ka jawab main dard bhare bt..thoda inspirational andaaZ me deta huN.. jara gaur kariyega.. Jiske diL meiN dard haiN duNiya kaa wo har gam ko seh zinda rahate haiN Joo mitate haiN khud koo jeete jee woo mar kar bhi zinda rahate haiN -- OMi Quote:
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30th May 2009, 12:09 AM
hmmmmm.... chaliye... aapke iss sher ka jawab dene ki kosis karta hUN.. ummed karta huN.. aap ko pasand aayegi..
Sulagti aankh mehkati hasii se kya kaheta jo mujh pe beet rahi thi,dusaro se kya kaheta Pyare diL me gam ka koi aashiyana naa mila maiN aapni baat kisi khamosi se kya kaheta. -- OMi Quote:
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30th May 2009, 12:11 AM
Hey arvind
well thxx.. alot dude.. thx 4 ur appreciating my post.. well.. y dun u join us here.. lets do sumthing exciting..hope.. will see u sooN.. again n again.. -- OMi Quote:
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30th May 2009, 12:15 AM
Nalin ji..
hUm dusaroo se izhaar karwaya karte haiN yaar.. and waise bhi... aap ki uff ka jadu abhi tak gaya nahi hai.. lol..isi liye itane ashiQue mizaz huyee baithe haiN hum yaha .. hahaha lolanyways.. thx for aprecitaiing my post.. hope u goNNa join us here.. and haan.. aapne dosto ko jaroor padana. kahi unka kaam ban gaya to.. mera " LOVE GURU " ka business jam jayega.. lol..lol.. hahaha-- OMi Quote:
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31st May 2009, 02:00 PM
Yeh joo waQt ki dhar haiN,
yeh naa ruk saki mere liye. baha Mujh ko le gai itni dur k aaj mujhe aapni kasti ka naam-o-nisaaN nazar nahi aata.. Dur nazar aa rahi haiN ek basti par jaane ko kastii aur pahuchane ka kirana nazar nahi aata.. Meri dubati iss jindagi ko aab kisi tinke ka shahara nazar nahi aata --OMi Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein....... |
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21st June 2009, 01:42 PM
tujh se mohabbat ka paigaam likh raha huN
tere husN ko khat meiN salam likh raha huN pee kar jeese madhosh haiN yeh duniyaa husn-e-mohabbat ka wo jaam likh raha huN tere husN ko khat meiN salam likh raha huN... - OMi Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein....... |
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