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barsat ki boond (mine) - 30th November 2008, 03:51 AM
Ajj kuch khas din raha to man kiya likhne ka hope you like it

Barsat ki boond shishe se fisalti dikh rahi hai
teri jogan bhi ayeeni ko khoobsoorat si dikh rahi hai
yadon men kho gayi dobara aaj phir ik baar
phir se muhabbat ka wo ik geet likh rahi hai

aaj khud men lapet le mujh ko samet le barish kee boond kar
tujh ko mahsoos karti rahoon raat saree ankhn moond kar

aaj teer jism se risne ka man hai
aaj man ke pas ek tan hai tan ke pas ek man hai
dono main pyas jaga de dono kee pyas bujha de
main teri hoon gar dunia se na kah sake
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nice creation sapna jiii........................keep it up

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9th December 2008, 05:49 PM
Sapna Di ....pahli bar aapki rachna padh rahi hun...........bahot achha laga ehesaas aapki ..........Youn hi likhte rahiye ...aur hume padhne ki mouka dete rahiye

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9th December 2008, 06:06 PM
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Ajj kuch khas din raha to man kiya likhne ka hope you like it

Barsat ki boond shishe se fisalti dikh rahi hai
teri jogan bhi ayeeni ko khoobsoorat si dikh rahi hai
yadon men kho gayi dobara aaj phir ik baar
phir se muhabbat ka wo ik geet likh rahi hai

aaj khud men lapet le mujh ko samet le barish kee boond kar
tujh ko mahsoos karti rahoon raat saree ankhn moond kar

aaj teer jism se risne ka man hai
aaj man ke pas ek tan hai tan ke pas ek man hai
dono main pyas jaga de dono kee pyas bujha de
main teri hoon gar dunia se na kah sake
mere kano men bata de har fasala mita de
har parda hata de
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Sapna Di ....pahli bar aapki rachna padh rahi hun...........bahot achha laga ehesaas aapki ..........Youn hi likhte rahiye ...aur hume padhne ki mouka dete rahiye

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Smile Apki baarish ki boondon ne hamare har ehsaas ko bhigo diya - 11th December 2008, 01:17 AM
Sapna Ji,

Apki barsat ki boondon ne hamare har ehsaas ko bhigo diya......... yeh padke dil ke registaan main jazbaaton ki baarish ho gai..... aur dil ne be inteha sukun paaya hai.... bahut khub likha hai apne. Bahut lucky hai woh jiske liye apne yeh likha hai...

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Ajj kuch khas din raha to man kiya likhne ka hope you like it

Barsat ki boond shishe se fisalti dikh rahi hai
teri jogan bhi ayeeni ko khoobsoorat si dikh rahi hai
yadon men kho gayi dobara aaj phir ik baar
phir se muhabbat ka wo ik geet likh rahi hai

aaj khud men lapet le mujh ko samet le barish kee boond kar
tujh ko mahsoos karti rahoon raat saree ankhn moond kar

aaj teer jism se risne ka man hai
aaj man ke pas ek tan hai tan ke pas ek man hai
dono main pyas jaga de dono kee pyas bujha de
main teri hoon gar dunia se na kah sake
mere kano men bata de har fasala mita de
har parda hata de


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Sapna Ji,

Apki barsat ki boondon ne hamare har ehsaas ko bhigo diya......... yeh padke dil ke registaan main jazbaaton ki baarish ho gai..... aur dil ne be inteha sukun paaya hai.... bahut khub likha hai apne. Bahut lucky hai woh jiske liye apne yeh likha hai...

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