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7th July 2004, 08:01 PM
Garmi ho chaahe sardi ho,
Sab kudrat ke nazaare hain...
Pyase to woh bhi hain,
Jinke ghar samander ke kinare hain..
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~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko,
De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon,
In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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Sirf
Tanu
Ki
ChaahaT
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8th July 2004, 01:20 PM
I like the last line specially.. Pyaase to woh bhi hain jo wsamundar ke kinare hain..... Do Keep the good work up.. TC
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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8th July 2004, 11:00 PM
Pulkit ji,
Aapne yeh sher padha aur pasand kiya, jaan ke bahut khushi hui..
lekin yeh sher mera likha nahi hai... meri zindagi ne kal yeh sher gungunaaya tha, to maine socha aap sab ke saath share karun.
Writer kaun hai main bhi nahi jaanti... par bahut achi lines hain..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko,
De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon,
In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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9th July 2004, 09:55 AM
Priya,
Zaroori yeh nahi ki aapne likha hai ya nahi... but u shared a good work with us and thats important......
So.. kee writing and keep posting.... Apni Zindagi se kahiye aise hi gungunati rahe
TC
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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9th July 2004, 08:52 PM
Thankyou so much for your wishes Pulkit ji!
~Priya
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De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon,
In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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10th July 2004, 06:38 PM
Priya
very sweet.
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10th July 2004, 11:31 PM
hi, priya ji jsk
Garmi ho ya sardi ho vix lagalo
hahahaha
Garmi ho chaahe sardi ho,
Sab kudrat ke nazaare hain...
Pyase to woh bhi hain,
Jinke ghar samander ke kinare hain..
aapka bahut shukriiiya aapne ye sher yaha pesh kiya
yunhee mahefeel sajate rahiyega
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12th July 2004, 05:19 PM
Meeta ji aur trufellings ji,
Bahut bahut shukriya reply karne ke liye!
Khush rahiye!
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De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon,
In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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