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Angry baat karne mein jo - 19th April 2003, 05:15 PM

baat karne mein jo mushkil ho tumhe mehfil mein
mai samajh jaoonga nazron se bataana mujh ko
vada utnaa hi karo jitana nibha sakte ho
Khwaab pura jo na ho woh na dikhana mujh ko
apne rishte ki nazaakat ka bharam rakh lena
main to aashiq hoon dewaana na bana mujh ko....


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19th April 2003, 06:39 PM

Oh its a great poem.Bohut hi achai hai....

Khwaab pura jo na ho woh na dikhana mujh ko .......
ye line tho sub kuch hi keh deti hai.

Looking forward to more such great poems.

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19th April 2003, 08:31 PM

thanx rani je aap ko hamara sher accha laga us ke liye waise hum aur accha likhne ki kosish karege aur hum chahege ki aap ko hamare sher aur acche lage
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20th April 2003, 08:27 PM

wah wah wah kya bat hai bahut sahi likha hai aapne dil khush ho gaya padhne ke bad aise hi likhte rahiye dost bahut achha likha hai aapne
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21st April 2003, 11:06 AM

vada utnaa hi karo jitana nibha sakte ho
Khwaab pura jo na ho woh na dikhana mujh ko ...

hi! well kafi ghyari hai is sher mein.
jitni samajh sey isey likha gaya hai teek utni hi samajh chaiyee isey mahsoos keney key liye.
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21st April 2003, 06:28 PM

well kshitiz aap ne mera sir utha diya mere sher ki tareef kar ke ...
aap jaise to nahin par thoda sa likhna jante hai hum bhi par aap to bahut acha likhte hai thanx dost


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21st April 2003, 06:35 PM

well meetu jee baat to aap ne sahi kahi hai par jis ke pass dil hai woh hi to pyar karta hai .. ye to suna hi hoga aap ne waise hi is ko samjhe ke liye bhi ...... bahut tempo hona chahiye ...
thanx ... aur accha likhne ki main kosish karoga


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