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dil se gar niklegaa to... - 5th December 2014, 11:31 PM

DostoN,

hazraat aapki mehfil mein kuch bikhre behke khayaal pesh kar rahuN inayaat kijiyeGaa

बात मेरी दिल में जो उतर जाये
तिश्नगी में देखिये ये जाम टूटेगा

हर शेर मुक़म्मल हो यह मुमकिन नहीं
दिल से गर निकलेगा तो दाद लूटेगा

जो लहरों से हो उलझा उसे न कहिये
तेरा साहिल पर आकर के हाथ छूटेगा

उनसे वादा है 'मस्त' जो अब तक नहीं है दीवाने
उनका चिलमन ज़रा सरका तो नशा टूटेगा


baat meri dil mein jo utar jaaye
tishnagi mein dekhiye yeh jaam tooteGaa

har sher mukkamal ho yeh mumkin nahiN
dil se gar nikleGaa to daad looteGaa

jo lehroN se ho uljhaa use na kahiye
tera saahil par aakar ke haath chooteGaa

unse waada hai 'mast' jo ab tak nahiN hai deewaane
unka chilman zara sarkaa to nasha tooteGaa



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Waaaaaahhh Waaaaaahhh Mast ji.
Bohot khoob sama bandha hai.... kya baat hai
Nacheez ki daad kubul farmayen
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6th December 2014, 09:43 AM

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DostoN,

hazraat aapki mehfil mein kuch bikhre behke khayaal pesh kar rahuN inayaat kijiyeGaa

बात मेरी दिल में जो उतर जाये
तिश्नगी में देखिये ये जाम टूटेगा

हर शेर मुक़म्मल हो यह मुमकिन नहीं
दिल से गर निकलेगा तो दाद लूटेगा

जो लहरों से हो उलझा उसे न कहिये
तेरा साहिल पर आकर के हाथ छूटेगा

उनसे वादा है 'मस्त' जो अब तक नहीं है दीवाने
उनका चिलमन ज़रा सरका तो नशा टूटेगा


baat meri dil mein jo utar jaaye
tishnagi mein dekhiye yeh jaam tooteGaa

har sher mukkamal ho yeh mumkin nahiN
dil se gar nikleGaa to daad looteGaa

jo lehroN se ho uljhaa use na kahiye
tera saahil par aakar ke haath chooteGaa

unse waada hai 'mast' jo ab tak nahiN hai deewaane
unka chilman zara sarkaa to nasha tooteGaa


Mast bhai....kya khoobsurat shayri pesh ki hai aapne, sabhi ashiyaar hame dil se pasand aaye...bahut sachi baate kahi hai aapne.
yeh sher mere dil ke khaas kareeb rha.

jo lehroN se ho uljhaa use na kahiye
tera saahil par aakar ke haath chooteGaa


pyar dur duaoN ke saath


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6th December 2014, 10:03 AM

हर शेर मुक़म्मल हो यह मुमकिन नहीं
दिल से गर निकलेगा तो दाद लूटेगा


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Mast bhai....kya khoobsurat shayri pesh ki hai aapne, sabhi ashiyaar hame dil se pasand aaye...bahut sachi baate kahi hai aapne.
yeh sher mere dil ke khaas kareeb rha.

jo lehroN se ho uljhaa use na kahiye
tera saahil par aakar ke haath chooteGaa


pyar dur duaoN ke saath
MamnooN hooN di ki aapne duaaon ke saath daad ki inyaat ki aage bhi aapse bejod saath ki umeed rakhtaa hooN..



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kya baat hai miyaan... mahfil loot li hai aapne...... bahot khoob mmere bhai.

likhte rahiye

Shaad......
Yakeenan shaad bhai agar mujhse bhi puchenge to yeh sher dil ke qareeb raha...

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Kyan rumani ghazal pesh ki Mast bhai ... ek se bar ke ek sher laga mujhe ..

per makta bahut kamal ka tha .

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Mast jee .,..kya bààt hai ......bahut khoob likha hai àapne..,. Daad kubul karein,...,



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7th December 2014, 11:34 AM

Mast Saahab, kya likha hai.... Nacheez ki dil se daad qubool karein.

jo lehroN se ho uljhaa use na kahiye
tera saahil par aakar ke haath chooteGaa
Wahhhh.. kya baat hai.

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Anu bhaii

Namaste

Waah.... mazaa aa gayaa... dil se daad

Khush rahiye....apnaa khayaal rakhen

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Kyan rumani ghazal pesh ki Mast bhai ... ek se bar ke ek sher laga mujhe ..

per makta bahut kamal ka tha .

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बात मेरी दिल में जो उतर जाये
तिश्नगी में देखिये ये जाम टूटेगा

हर शेर मुक़म्मल हो यह मुमकिन नहीं
दिल से गर निकलेगा तो दाद लूटेगा

जो लहरों से हो उलझा उसे न कहिये
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baat meri dil mein jo utar jaaye
tishnagi mein dekhiye yeh jaam tooteGaa

har sher mukkamal ho yeh mumkin nahiN
dil se gar nikleGaa to daad looteGaa

jo lehroN se ho uljhaa use na kahiye
tera saahil par aakar ke haath chooteGaa

unse waada hai 'mast' jo ab tak nahiN hai deewaane
unka chilman zara sarkaa to nasha tooteGaa
Waah waah mast ji bahut pasand aaye aapke bikhre baheke khyaal......



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Mast Saahab, kya likha hai.... Nacheez ki dil se daad qubool karein.

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Wahhhh.. kya baat hai.

Aapka khair khwah

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Khush rahiye....apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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