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news paper - 31st December 2008, 05:47 PM

aahshiq ne khudkushi kiti,akk k bewffa de pyar to.
kite jiondi nooh fooki gyi,lobhi sahure pariwar to.
jalandhar nede accident ho gya.
bach na sakia cycle wala ,kise luxary car to.
pardhan amntri ne afsos jataaiya,
ik vaar fer cricket team di haar to.
mandir de vich choori hogi,mashid de vch mori hogi.
bach na ski insaaniyat dangiyaa di maar to.
hun ta lagda rabb v akk chukia aapne is sansaar to.
hor "deep" nu ki a aaunda,
dubjane ne geet e bnata tadke-2 akhbaar to.
   
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22 g bht e alag ja topic a.... bht vadia a..... keep it up....
   
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31st August 2009, 05:30 PM

bahut khoob laggeya deep g,,,kuj hat k likheya tusi,,,,duniyadaari nu kaafi nikhareya tusi,,,,


Main duniya shorh kar jannat na loonga...
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thanx ji.. bs ik din bus ch baitha c.... saahmne wali seat te baitha person newspaper pad reha c... odo eh idea aaya ta baithe-2 ne likh ta...:-)
   
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1st September 2009, 10:21 AM

Ik waar fer fantastic. Deep ji ajj ik bahut hi alag zameen te likhiaa. Pataa nahi eh co-incidence ya meraa veham par ajj saverey jad maiN SDC te login keetaa taaN soch rihaa si ki Deep ne kadey Maasses di gall nahi keeti, kadey roz di zindangi nu nahi khangaaliaa. Te dekh lao deep ji tusi ajj hi meri eh shikayat door kar ditti.

Bahut hi mature poetry hai..... Har waar kenhdaa haaN te ajj fer kehndaa haaN ki tusi raaj karogey ik din kalam di duniaa wich.


Merey Kissey wich aundaa ein tu .... Merey hissey wich kyuN nahi aundaa
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2nd September 2009, 11:08 PM

hahahhahahah.. thanx aina pyar den lyi tilkji.... bas tsi likhai janeo..aape honsla vadh janda.....j nal tsi khade o...koi v banda likh sakda a fer ...
   
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aahshiq ne khudkushi kiti,akk k bewffa de pyar to.
kite jiondi nooh fooki gyi,lobhi sahure pariwar to.
jalandhar nede accident ho gya.
bach na sakia cycle wala ,kise luxary car to.
pardhan amntri ne afsos jataaiya,
ik vaar fer cricket team di haar to.
mandir de vich choori hogi,mashid de vch mori hogi.
bach na ski insaaniyat dangiyaa di maar to.
hun ta lagda rabb v akk chukia aapne is sansaar to.
hor "deep" nu ki a aaunda,
dubjane ne geet e bnata tadke-2 akhbaar to.



mast hai guru ji tussi to laughter challenge which hona chahi.............hope punjabi theek likhi hai....
   
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