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Mere papa mujhe beta q bulate hain!!! - 19th May 2016, 08:40 PM

I hd ds in my minds since ages.. bt recently got penned...


Mere papa mujhe beta q bulate hain..
Bahot pyaar karte hain.. apni jaan tak nissar krte hain...
Mere jidd k aage apni mazbooriyaan bhool jaate hain..
Par smjh ni aata ..mere papa mujhe beta q bulate hain..

Itrate hai meri beti kisi ladke se ni hai kam..
Sabse khoobsurat lamha h unki zinadagee ka jab hua tha mera janam..
Apne budhape ki baishakhi bol roj apni pari ko sulate hain..
par smjh ni aata mere papa mujhe beta q bulate hain..

Ithla k kahte h beta aur beti ek samaan hai..
Fir mujhe q ni dete jo mere sachha samman hai...
Q wo mujhe beta bol mujhe beta na hone ki yaad dillate hain ..
Mujhe samjh ni aata mere papa mujhe beta q bulate hain..
Mujhe beta q bulate hain...



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21st May 2016, 10:45 AM

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I hd ds in my minds since ages.. bt recently got penned...


Mere papa mujhe beta q bulate hain..
Bahot pyaar karte hain.. apni jaan tak nissar krte hain...
Mere jidd k aage apni mazbooriyaan bhool jaate hain..
Par smjh ni aata ..mere papa mujhe beta q bulate hain..

Itrate hai meri beti kisi ladke se ni hai kam..
Sabse khoobsurat lamha h unki zinadagee ka jab hua tha mera janam..
Apne budhape ki baishakhi bol roj apni pari ko sulate hain..
par smjh ni aata mere papa mujhe beta q bulate hain..

Ithla k kahte h beta aur beti ek samaan hai..
Fir mujhe q ni dete jo mere sachha samman hai...
Q wo mujhe beta bol mujhe beta na hone ki yaad dillate hain ..
Mujhe samjh ni aata mere papa mujhe beta q bulate hain..
Mujhe beta q bulate hain...



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Waaahh awy ji bahut achchi tarah express kiya hai aapne apna nazriya......bahut khoob koshish...

Likhte rahein..
Aate rahein..



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Thnku madhu ji... Hume khushi h ki aapko hamari koshish pasand aayi...
   
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21st May 2016, 03:10 PM

Awy....

I dont know what to say... i can relate myself with each and every line you hv written....

Ab talak mere zahan me yeh sawal nahi aaya tha bas.... ☺behad khubsurat rachana...


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Thnx purvi,, bt d intention ws nt to provoke d qstn bt ws jst a innocent desire to knw d answr.. M glad u liked it.. Thnx
   
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24th May 2016, 10:43 AM

bahu bahut acchaa likha hai aapne awy ji......................

main bayaan nahi kar paaaunga kya kyaa khayaal dil me gote khaane lage hain.....

par aapne har us ladki ke mann ki wyathaa ko bakhubi pesh kiya hai , aur har paathak ko yahi lagega ke ye usi ke liye likhaa gay hai.... aur asal maayne me yahi sacchii shayrii hai...

khush rahiye likhte rahiye

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25th May 2016, 12:43 PM

Hume wakai behad khushi h ki ise padhne wale khud ko isse relate kr paa rhe hain.. Qki shayri jajbaato se banti h .. N jajbaat humse... Aap sab ne saraha.. Uske liye tahe dil se shukriya...
   
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buhet achaa likhaa hey aap ney


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27th May 2016, 09:48 PM

Saaheb

Namaste

Aapko paDh kar behad khushii huii... aShaar dil mein Ghar kar gaye..dil se daad o mubaaraqbaad. Likhte rahiye aage bhee bazm ki shaan baDhaate rahiye

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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shukriya dhaval saab.. hume prasannta hui jaan ke ki aapki panktiyaan aapko pasand aayi..
   
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