Tanha zindagi bahuT Tadpaayegi.. -
23rd April 2008, 01:05 AM
Tumhare aane se hi zindagi khushnumah hai..
Tumhare jaaTe hi yeh bhi murjha jaayegi..
Na jaaya karo humein chodd ke Tum yun..
Ki Tanha zindagi na kaT paayegi..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
Tumhare aane se hi zindagi khushnumah hai.. Tumhare jaaTe hi yeh bhi murjha jaayegi.. Na jaaya karo humein chodd ke Tum yun.. Ki Tanha zindagi na kaT paayegi..
~Priya
hi aaj pehle baar apka share padha hai bahut acha likha hai share apne
apka qita paRha aur pasand aaya. is qit'e ka bunyadi Khayal achcha hai magar andaaz-e-bayaaN behtarii ka talabgaar hai. agar nazr-e-sani kar leN to kuchh muzaaiqa nahiiN. shukriya share karne ke liye
regards
MuKhlis
tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz
hiii
u hv written very nice
keep it up
here something from me
Barson Ki Chahat Ko Ek Pal Me Badalte Dekha Hai Maine
Toot Kar Chahne Waalon Ko Baat Se Mukarte Dekha Hai Maine
Naaz Karte Hain Jo Apni Wafaon Par
Unhi Ko Bewafai Karte Dekha Hai Maine
Kaise Saja Loon Sapne Apni Udas Aakhon Me
Har Khawab Ko Toot Kar Bikharte Dekha Hai Maine
Karte The Jo Waada Hamesha Saath Chalne Ka
Phir Unhi Ko Raasta Badalte Dekha Hai Maine
Aitbaar Nahi Raha Kissi Par Bhi Kya Karen
Is Aitabaar Ko Bhi Baar-Baar Marte Dekha Hai Maine
apka qita paRha aur pasand aaya. is qit'e ka bunyadi Khayal achcha hai magar andaaz-e-bayaaN behtarii ka talabgaar hai. agar nazr-e-sani kar leN to kuchh muzaaiqa nahiiN. shukriya share karne ke liye
regards
MuKhlis
Thanx Mukhlis ji....
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
bahut accha laga. aise hi likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye
Yaad main teri Aahein bharta hai koi,
har saans ke saath yujhe yaad karta hai koi,
maut sacchai hai ek roz aani hai,
lekin teri Judaai main har Roz marta hai koi....
Tumhare aane se hi zindagi khushnumah hai..
Tumhare jaaTe hi yeh bhi murjha jaayegi..
Na jaaya karo humein chodd ke Tum yun..
Ki Tanha zindagi na kaT paayegi..
~Priya
Dear Priya (Chaahat)
missing u alot..........kabhi to aao veeran hai sdc ki mehfil aapke bina...
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...