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Love Tanha zindagi bahuT Tadpaayegi.. - 23rd April 2008, 01:05 AM
Tumhare aane se hi zindagi khushnumah hai..
Tumhare jaaTe hi yeh bhi murjha jaayegi..
Na jaaya karo humein chodd ke Tum yun..
Ki Tanha zindagi na kaT paayegi..


~Priya


"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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23rd April 2008, 10:14 PM
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Tumhare aane se hi zindagi khushnumah hai..
Tumhare jaaTe hi yeh bhi murjha jaayegi..
Na jaaya karo humein chodd ke Tum yun..
Ki Tanha zindagi na kaT paayegi..


~Priya

hi aaj pehle baar apka share padha hai bahut acha likha hai share apne

AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam
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Priya didi:

maiN samjh saktaa huuN aapke dil ke haal ko .. bas KhuSh rahiYe..! aur haMeShaa muSkuraate rahiYe..!! aik achhii koShiSh !! daad!!

YuuNhi liKhate rahiye..! duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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24th April 2008, 02:15 AM
Hi Priya

apka qita paRha aur pasand aaya. is qit'e ka bunyadi Khayal achcha hai magar andaaz-e-bayaaN behtarii ka talabgaar hai. agar nazr-e-sani kar leN to kuchh muzaaiqa nahiiN. shukriya share karne ke liye

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hi aaj pehle baar apka share padha hai bahut acha likha hai share apne
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Dinesh ji!

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Priya didi:

maiN samjh saktaa huuN aapke dil ke haal ko .. bas KhuSh rahiYe..! aur haMeShaa muSkuraate rahiYe..!! aik achhii koShiSh !! daad!!

YuuNhi liKhate rahiye..! duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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Muskuraane ki koshish sach maano main har dam karti hun, kabhi kaamyaab hoti hun, aur kabhi haar bhi jaati hun...

Take Care..

~Priya


"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Hi Priya

apka qita paRha aur pasand aaya. is qit'e ka bunyadi Khayal achcha hai magar andaaz-e-bayaaN behtarii ka talabgaar hai. agar nazr-e-sani kar leN to kuchh muzaaiqa nahiiN. shukriya share karne ke liye

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Tumhare aane se hi zindagi khushnumah hai..
Tumhare jaaTe hi yeh bhi murjha jaayegi..
Na jaaya karo humein chodd ke Tum yun..
Ki Tanha zindagi na kaT paayegi..


~Priya


Dear Priya (Chaahat)

missing u alot..........kabhi to aao veeran hai sdc ki mehfil aapke bina...


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missing u alot..........kabhi to aao veeran hai sdc ki mehfil aapke bina...
Sahi kaha Di...

Priya kahan ho tum....Jaldi aao SDC parivaar ki yeh maang hai..


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