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Romantic 1st lines ....and deadly 2nd ones -
19th May 2009, 03:25 PM
A local newspaper ran a competition asking for a rhyme with the most romantic first line... but the least romantic second line. Here are some of the entries they received.
Oh loving beauty you float with grace If only you could hide your face Kind, intelligent, loving and hot; This describes everything you are not I want to feel your sweet embrace But don't take that paper bag off of your face I love your smile, your face, and your eyes - Damn, I'm good at telling lies! I thought that I could love no other Until, that is, I met your brother. Roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and so are you. But the roses are wilting, the violets are dead, the sugar bowl's empty and so is your head. My darling, my lover, my beautiful wife: Marrying you screwed up my life I see your face when I am dreaming. That's why I always wake up screaming My love, you take my breath away. What have you stepped in to smell this way My feelings for you no words can tell, Except for maybe "go to helll"    Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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19th May 2009, 03:29 PM
LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thnx 4 sharing  _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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19th May 2009, 04:58 PM
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19th May 2009, 06:50 PM
ek choti koshish mai bhi kar leta hu....................ijazat dijiye
durse dekha to haseena zulfen bana rahi thi pas jakar dekha to gai(cow) pucnh hila rahi thi |
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21st May 2009, 09:21 PM
dur se dekha to ande ubal rahe the,
paas jaakar dekha to ganje uchaal rahe the |
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30th June 2009, 03:13 PM
Thanks frnds for liking this post.....
waise "duur paas" waale couplets se mujhe bhi kuch yaad aa gaya......... Door Se Dekha To Airport Pe Plane Nazar Aa Raha Tha... Door Se Dekha To Airport Pe Plane Nazar Aa Raha Tha.... Jab Tak Pas Gaye ,tab Tak Ud Gaya ... Wah ...wah ...wah ..wah... Isi Wah..wah... Par Ek Aur Arz Hai Ki Door Se Dekha To Sher Nazar Aa Raha Tha.... Ki Door Se Dekha To Sher Nazar Aa Raha Tha... Bas Door Se Hi Dekha Aur Wapas Aa Gaye..... .....................Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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1st July 2009, 07:12 PM
dur se dekha to baarish ho rahi the
dur se dekha to baarish ho rahi the paas jaakar dekha to bheeg gaye...............lol |
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1st July 2009, 07:26 PM
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hahaha........nice one nick.......... heres another one... dur se dekha to santra nazar aa raha tha dur se dekha to santra nazar aa raha tha paas jaaker dekha to santra hi tha......... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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1st July 2009, 09:57 PM
here is another one......
door se dekha to sher tha door se dekha to sher tha isliye pass gaye hee nahin....... एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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3rd July 2009, 08:01 PM
bakri chadi pahaad pe
bakri chadi pahaad pe aur kya dahaadti??? ghaans kha ke utar gayi.... |
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