ab hum jaate hain...!!

[karan q]

Ab hum jaate hain

ek shahar aisa bhee hai, tumko hum btaate hain
jahaan log mujhe rind samajh-ker,apna muh chupaate hain
sochte hain ki aaj phir hum usska naam len,
bahoot keh chuke yaaron, ab hum jaate hain,

her mehfil me jaaker,hum usske kisse sunaate hain
jo kabhee nahi bann sakta, aisa ghar bnaate hain
phir sochte hain ki aaj usska naam le he len,
bahoot keh chuke yaaron , ab hum jaate hain,

mere naam se na jud jaaye, wo apna naam chupaate hain
hum kasoorwaar hoker bhee, sabse nazren milaate hain
aaj to sochte hain ki usska naam le he len
ufff bahoot keh chuke sabse ab hum jaate hain,

hum itne badnaam hue ki may-khaane sharmaate hain
her roz tanhaai ki kabr me apna jism dafnaate hain
phir khyaal aata hai ki usska naam le he len
haan bahoot keh chuke , ab hum jaate hain,

karan.q

[Sanskruti]

karan.............i liked this lines a lot


hum itne badnaam hue ki may-khaane sharmaate hain
her roz tanhaai ki kabr me apna jism dafnaate hain

specially the last line.....
"her roz tanhaai ki kabr me apna jism dafnaate hain"

its so meaningful n touchy...........

~*~ Sanskruti ~*~

[karan q]

hiii sweets, hum itne badnaam hue ki maikhaane sharmate hain
waise...apko kab se maikhaane jaane ki jaroorat pad gayi... waise maikhaane to hum bhee nahi jaate, you know iss line ka meaning? maikhaana when ever i use in my poetrys i use this word for woman's eyes
har shabh mud( sharaab) ke nashe me jhoomta houn mai

harr shabh mud ke nashe me jhoomta houn main
mai nahi peeta mujhko tera husn pilaata hai

hum inte badnaam hue ki maikhaane sharmaate hain,
mean shahar ki harr husn waali ne hume paaro ka perwana samjhaa or usski nazar se utar ker kissi ki nazar me jagah na rahee kissi ne jagah na di...itne badnaam ho gaye ki kissi ne pyaar ke laayak na samjha,
roz tanhaai ki kabr me apna jism dafnaate hain
roz roz aane waali tanhaai... ab kabr ki tarah ho gayi hai, or koi raasta nahi.... tanha rehne ke siva ....phir ye sochte hain ki usska naam le he len. means jisske kaaran ye sab huaa , hum barbaad hue, kitna sochte hai ki usska naam sabko btaa ker usse bhee badnaam karen,
uuuffffff bahoot ho chuka ab hum jaate hain,
izzazat
karan.q

[Parul]

Great!

[karan q]

hii parul
this is again .. mine old one but very fav. one
I worte this to read in mushaira---
i wanted to read this like a drunkerd
But then i worte many after this
acchi poerty ki yaad kerwai
izzajat
karan.q

[naina_cooleyes]

Karan...

Zindagi hum tujhko aazmaate hain...
apna gham sabko hum sunaate hain...
teri khaamosh nigaahon ke afsaane...
lekin hum sab se hi chupaate hain...

uuuffffff bahoot ho chuka ab hum jaate hain...

Waah!

Mohabbat...
Naina

[farhana]

Originally posted by karan q
Ab hum jaate hain

ek shahar aisa bhee hai, tumko hum btaate hain
jahaan log mujhe rind samajh-ker,apna muh chupaate hain
sochte hain ki aaj phir hum usska naam len,
bahoot keh chuke yaaron, ab hum jaate hain,

her mehfil me jaaker,hum usske kisse sunaate hain
jo kabhee nahi bann sakta, aisa ghar bnaate hain
phir sochte hain ki aaj usska naam le he len,
bahoot keh chuke yaaron , ab hum jaate hain,

mere naam se na jud jaaye, wo apna naam chupaate hain
hum kasoorwaar hoker bhee, sabse nazren milaate hain
aaj to sochte hain ki usska naam le he len
ufff bahoot keh chuke sabse ab hum jaate hain,

hum itne badnaam hue ki may-khaane sharmaate hain
her roz tanhaai ki kabr me apna jism dafnaate hain
phir khyaal aata hai ki usska naam le he len
haan bahoot keh chuke , ab hum jaate hain,

karan.q

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kya baat hai karan.....bada accha likkha hai aapne...
saare sher behad umda hain......
dil se daad kubul karein...
take care.bye