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21st October 2007, 12:19 PM
Aadab Dosto... Ek lambe arse baad aaya hun aaj... Umeed hai aapko meri yeh koshish pasand aayegi... Aapki keemti raaye ke muntazir... Abrar... Khwaishon ko jalati kabhi, kabhi bujhati hai, Ek umeed hi to hai jo aage badna sikhati hai, Mohabbat mein kabhi jo tum khao thokar kisi ki, Sacchi agar ho mohabbat to bas umeed kaam aati hai, Kahin bhi jist-o-jaan duniya ki musibaton mein, Ho gar giraftaar use umeed wapas le aati hai, Khayal-e-umeed ke kabhi dil laga paunga main, Gaur kiya ke jhat se dil mein koi aur umeed ajati hai, Tanhai ki umeed na rakh kabhi mehfil se tu, Ye umeed aksar bewaja bekaar chali jaati hai, Dil jalon ke aashiyane jab jale the kahin, Zindagi ki umeed unhe khudaai yaad aati hai, Zamane ke zulm sahe kitne is umeed ke saath, Ke har kaali raat ke baad ek subeh zarur aati hai, Kuch khayaal dil ke aaj bahekne lage hai, Umeed thi kuch aur likhne ki par umeed likhi jaati hai, Ek daastan-e-mohabbat ki umeed bhi dekhlo logon, Mar gayi mohabbat par umeed milne ki baaki hai, Khayal-e-guzar me ek khayal yeh bhi aaya, Umeed karte hai yeh nazm aapke khayal chhu jaati hai, Hum mohabbat ka kaarwan khatm nahi karte yaaron, Umeed hi ise mitati hai umeed hi badati hai, Bas ab kitni umeed lagaoge is umeed se "Abrar" umeed jagate,Umeed mitate hue tujhe mitati jaati hai...  Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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22nd October 2007, 11:33 AM
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abrar ji namaskaar aapki gazal + ahsaas bahut pasand aaye.......har sher dil ke kareeb raha....yu hi likhtey rahiye haan humey aapse shikayat bhi hai....aap mahfil se bahut dino tak gayab rahtey ho...aisa mat kiya kijiye...rotuine meiN aatey raha kijiye aur humey mokka diya kijiye ki hum aapko pad sakeN  god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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22nd October 2007, 11:40 AM
Bahut khub abraar bhaii
janab kese ho aap?? Bara achchha laga aapki is rachna ko padhke, ehsaas bhi bahut achchhe lage hamien... bhaii aajke jamane mein agar koi aashiq ko ek baar har milti hai to wo devdaas ya fir kisi aur saksh ki pahchaan banane lagta hai par aapki is rachna ko padhne ke baad hamein yu bhi lagta hai ki kash aaj dunia ka hara hua har aashiq aapko padh pata, unlogo ko bhi fir se dunia mein rang bharne ki ummid aap jaga dete.. Abraar bhai mehfil ko yuhi sajate rahiyega aapka dost MErul  Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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22nd October 2007, 01:23 PM
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Bohot khushi hui aapko hamare kalaam par dekh kar, Yunhi saath dete rahe... Aur aapki shikayat ki baat se main sehmat hun par kareeb 1 mahine pehle mera accident hua tha to main complete bed rest par tha, Us wajeh se zyada aa nahi paya ab chal phir raha hun to fir mehfil mein aajata hun... Maafi ka talabgaar hun is tareh bina bataye jaane ke liye... Ainda Aisa nahi hoga... khair Mujhe bohot khushi hui aapko yahan dekh kar... yunhi aate rahe... aur is nacheez ke chand ehsaason ko pasand karne ke liye Bohot bohot shukriyah.... Yunhi saath dete rahe... Duaon ke saath Ijazat... Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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