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Nazm : Raat bhar ......... - 22nd August 2013, 11:45 PM

raat bhar thandi thandi hawa jo chalee
soz-e-gham se charaaghaaN ye dil ho utha
lab pe aane lagee khud-ba-khud tishnagee
koyee naghma bhi hothoN pe khulne laga
kis qadar ghaibat-e-yaar khalne lagee

(soz = burning, ghaibat = absence)


yaad aaye puraane naye kuchh rafeeq
haadse kuchh puraane bhi yaad aa gaye
kuchh nayee ranjishoN ke naye waaqye
ab shikaayat bhi kis se kahaaN tak kareiN
jab puraane hoN khanjar naye haathoN meiN
dhooNdhtee reh gayeeN aaNkheiN chehra shafeeq

(rafeeq = companions, shafeeq = compassionate)


kis ke hone ka ehsaas hota hai ye
kis ko deti hai aawaaz tanhaaiyaaN
kis ke qadmoN ki aahat sunaayee si de
kaNpkapaatee si kis ki ye sargoshiyaaN
nak’hat-e-zulf kis ki hawa meiN urhe
kaun haule se hai uNgliyoN se chhuwe
paas kya door bhi tum naheeN ab rahe
ho raha phir hamaare ye kya darmiyaaN


(sargoshiyaaN = whisperings, nak’hat = fragrance)



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23rd August 2013, 09:32 PM

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bahut khoob zarraa bhai dili daad hazir hai............radhe radhe


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Masha Allaah mere bhai........... waaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

awwal to takheer se pesh hone ke liye nacheez muafi ka talabgaar hai.. baad iske gar is nazm ki taraf ayeN to uff taubaa qayaamat hai qayaamat saahab......... Wallaaah aise alfaaz aise ehsaas ke barbas hi muh se waahhh nikal jaae.... kisi saagar kinaare thandi hawa ke jhonke saa mehsoos karaati hai aapki nazm.....

aur is kaam me to aap maahir hain... beshaq har baar ki tarah is baar bhi dil jeet liya hai aapne bhai.. hame mureed kar liyaa hai..... likhte rahiye... kalam ka jaadu chalaate rahiye...

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Bohot khoob... Dil ko lage seed he ehsaas aapke...

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Masha Allaah mere bhai........... waaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

awwal to takheer se pesh hone ke liye nacheez muafi ka talabgaar hai.. baad iske gar is nazm ki taraf ayeN to uff taubaa qayaamat hai qayaamat saahab......... Wallaaah aise alfaaz aise ehsaas ke barbas hi muh se waahhh nikal jaae.... kisi saagar kinaare thandi hawa ke jhonke saa mehsoos karaati hai aapki nazm.....

aur is kaam me to aap maahir hain... beshaq har baar ki tarah is baar bhi dil jeet liya hai aapne bhai.. hame mureed kar liyaa hai..... likhte rahiye... kalam ka jaadu chalaate rahiye...

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Shaad mere bhai ... Jis ehsaas mohabbat aur apnepan se apne is nazm ko mehsoos kiya aur samjha ...tab ja ke ye nazm kisi bhi laayak huee .. wo jitni
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9th November 2014, 02:05 AM

Zarraa bhai, aadaab aur namaste

BGM saahab ne aapki is nazm ki farmaayish ki thi to maiN dhooNdhte hue idhar aa gaya aur yaqeen kijiye mujhe apni qismat aur masroofiyat donoN par itna gussa aa raha hai ke maiN is baab par haaziri pehle kyoN na de paaya aur aapka shukurguzaar bhi na ho saka

bhai kya kamaal ka takkhayyul aur taGhazzul ataa kiya hai aapko uupar waale ne aur kya hi kamaal ki pakaD hai aapki zabaan-o-lehje par, khuda kare qalam, zehan aur dil ka taal-mel yooN hi banaa rahe aur hum aapke in nageenoN ke husn ka lutf yooN hi uThaate raheN

daad "Tikaa" lijiyega, yaad se.

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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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Zarraa bhai, aadaab aur namaste

BGM saahab ne aapki is nazm ki farmaayish ki thi to maiN dhooNdhte hue idhar aa gaya aur yaqeen kijiye mujhe apni qismat aur masroofiyat donoN par itna gussa aa raha hai ke maiN is baab par haaziri pehle kyoN na de paaya aur aapka shukurguzaar bhi na ho saka

bhai kya kamaal ka takkhayyul aur taGhazzul ataa kiya hai aapko uupar waale ne aur kya hi kamaal ki pakaD hai aapki zabaan-o-lehje par, khuda kare qalam, zehan aur dil ka taal-mel yooN hi banaa rahe aur hum aapke in nageenoN ke husn ka lutf yooN hi uThaate raheN

daad "Tikaa" lijiyega, yaad se.

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10th November 2014, 07:33 AM

Zarra bhai ..bahut acha nibhaya pure kalam ko aapne ...Yaar apse tau dil ke taar jure haiN.Aaplo perna yaqeenan bahut achcha kagta hai mujhe .

Bhai thora keemti waqt humlogon ko bhi de diya karo bazm mein shirkat ho kar .

Baki.khuda khair kare , aapke naye kalam ka intezar rahega.

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raat bhar thandi thandi hawa jo chalee
soz-e-gham se charaaghaaN ye dil ho utha
lab pe aane lagee khud-ba-khud tishnagee
koyee naghma bhi hothoN pe khulne laga
kis qadar ghaibat-e-yaar khalne lagee

(soz = burning, ghaibat = absence)


yaad aaye puraane naye kuchh rafeeq
haadse kuchh puraane bhi yaad aa gaye
kuchh nayee ranjishoN ke naye waaqye
ab shikaayat bhi kis se kahaaN tak kareiN
jab puraane hoN khanjar naye haathoN meiN
dhooNdhtee reh gayeeN aaNkheiN chehra shafeeq

(rafeeq = companions, shafeeq = compassionate)


kis ke hone ka ehsaas hota hai ye
kis ko deti hai aawaaz tanhaaiyaaN
kis ke qadmoN ki aahat sunaayee si de
kaNpkapaatee si kis ki ye sargoshiyaaN
nak’hat-e-zulf kis ki hawa meiN urhe
kaun haule se hai uNgliyoN se chhuwe
paas kya door bhi tum naheeN ab rahe
ho raha phir hamaare ye kya darmiyaaN


(sargoshiyaaN = whisperings, nak’hat = fragrance)



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11th November 2014, 05:45 AM

Zaraa ji adaab or tasleem pesh karta hoo.n aapki nazam sach me bhut lajawaab hai mai.n hamesha aapki likhi huii shayri ke intezaar mei.n rehta hoo.n bhut khub likhte ho aap...Raj...


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