Baitbaazi

[ajay nidaan]

is kadar roouth gaya vo kabhi meri hasti tak na aaya
ye kwahish kaa saahil aaj tak is kashti tak na aayaa.

[Ravi]

Hi Me yaha pahli baar likh raha huu<< Galti ho jaaye to maaf Karna::



Yaad Mat Kar Un Lamho Ko Wo Ab Taarikho Me Dubb Chuke He,,
Kiiye Itne Jshnn Humne Ke Ab Hum Udhaari Me Dub Chuke he,,

[ajay nidaan]

Originally Posted by Ravi"Jaalim"

Are Ajay Sir AApko HE se Suru KArna tha Rule ke Mutabik,, Aap Rules KO nahi Maante Kyaa SIR???

maante hai lekin bhool gaya tha.

[Ravi]

Originally Posted by ajay nidaan

maante hai lekin bhool gaya tha.

Are Thankyu AJAY Sirr,,, Aap Kamal Ke Shayar HE Aapki hi Preranase Hum Yaha likhte he<<<<

[ajay nidaan]

Kya likhe kaise likhe kis kadar ho bayaan wajood -e-dard
Alfaazo me sama nahi pata aur cheharo pe thahar nahi pata.

[Ravi]

Tamannao Ki Aarzoo Me Kahi Kho Gaye Hum Aaj,,
To Fir Unse Milne Ki Tamanna Kyuu Kare Hum Aaj,,

[kwahish]

Originally Posted by Ravi"Jaalim"

Tamannao Ki Aarzoo Me Kahi Kho Gaye Hum Aaj,,
To Fir Unse Milne Ki Tamanna Kyuu Kare Hum Aaj,,

Jab bhi milta hia, koyi naya wada kar jaata hai
Yeh baat aur hai woh koi wada nibhata nahi hai

[ajay nidaan]

Nibhane waale vaade karte nahi hai janaab
Jo karte hai vaade vo nibhate nahi hai .

[Ravi]

Hai Agar Saraab Ki Baat To Wo Kyuu Me Piuu,,
Ab Tum Hi Nahi Mere Saath To Bataao Ab Kaise Me Jiuu,,

Sir Is Thread Ka Rule He Ki Aap Ko Agali Shayri Ke Last Word Se Hi Apni Shayri Ko Suru Karna Padata He,,

[ajay nidaan]

Jiye to aise ke zindagi ko ki mout aakar thahar jaaye dar me
apne aagosh me lene ka haque ka waqt nikal jaaye tere pal se.

[kwahish]

Originally Posted by ajay nidaan

Jiye to aise ke zindagi ko ki mout aakar thahar jaaye dar me
apne aagosh me lene ka haque ka waqt nikal jaaye tere pal se.

Nidaan Sahab Aadaab!

Shayad aap is thread ka rule thik se samjhe nahi, is thread mein sher ke last word se hume sher kahna hai...... ab main yahaN "Se" yani " S" wale word se sher kahunga.......

Sangdil hai to sang E marwar sa kyuN lagta hai
Woh Zalim hai to motebar sa kyuN lagta hai

[ajay nidaan]

Hai hamko bada hi afsos ki samjhne me khata ho gayi
Ye teri kwahish ka saath hai dosti apni bhi adaa ho gayi.

[Ravi]

Ye Kashti Kinaaro Se Nikal Kar Saahil Se Mil Gayi Aaj,,
Ke Ab Kyaa Pata Ise Apni Manzil Milgi Ke Nahi Aaj,,

[ajay nidaan]

Aaj gar mile rashte to saahil bhi talash kar lenge
Teri dosti ki khaatir har umeed talash kar lenge.

[Ravi]

Guzaarish Kar Di Har Iraado Ki Mene Uske Aage,,
Ye Aur Baat He Ki Shaayad Unho Ne Suni Nahi Meri Koi Baate,,

[ajay nidaan]

Baato me teri har ada ki ek jhalak mile jaayegi
Ek teri aawaaz uske zameer talak chali jaayegi.

[Ravi]

Gunj Rahi He Abhi Har Baat Mere Kaano Me,,
Ab Akela Hu Ke Koi Aata Hi Nahi Meri Mahfilon Me,,

Good Evening Sirjii,, is thread me antaaxari ki tarah he,, agar aapka last word jaayegi he to mujhe Ga se hi next shayri suru karni padti he,, aap pure last word se chalu karte he apni shayri_

[ajay nidaan]

Originally Posted by Ravi

Gunj Rahi He Abhi Har Baat Mere Kaano Me,,
Ab Akela Hu Ke Koi Aata Hi Nahi Meri Mahfilon Me,,

Good Evening Sirjii,, is thread me antaaxari ki tarah he,, agar aapka last word jaayegi he to mujhe Ga se hi next shayri suru karni padti he,, aap pure last word se chalu karte he apni shayri_

mai ab me se shru kar sakta hu na good evening

[kwahish]

Originally Posted by Ravi

Gunj Rahi He Abhi Har Baat Mere Kaano Me,,
Ab Akela Hu Ke Koi Aata Hi Nahi Meri Mahfilon Me,,

Good Evening Sirjii,, is thread me antaaxari ki tarah he,, agar aapka last word jaayegi he to mujhe Ga se hi next shayri suru karni padti he,, aap pure last word se chalu karte he apni shayri_

Main aur meri Tanhai aksar yeh baateN karte hai
Tum hoti to kaisa hota, tum yeh kahti tum woh kahti
Tum is baat pe kitna hairaaN hoti, Tum us baat pe kitna hasti
Tum hoti to aisa hota, Tum hoti toh waisa hota,,,,,,,,, NM

[ajay nidaan]

Ta umar mai tuj se hi dosti ki fariyaad karta hu
ek yah apraadh mai teri nazar me baar-2 karta hu.

[kwahish]

Originally Posted by ajay nidaan

Ham kaha tak teri kasouti par kahr utar paayege
jara waqt pe saare raaz rishto kekhul jaayege.

NidaaN sahab aapko yahaN "Ta" sher khana tha so pLz aap samjhiye iske rule's ko to maza aayeNga.......

Gar tere chahane wale mere samne aayeNge
Sach kah raha huN Jaan wo jaan se jayeNge

[ajay nidaan]

Originally Posted by kwahish

NidaaN sahab aapko yahaN "Ta" sher khana tha so pLz aap samjhiye iske rule's ko to maza aayeNga.......

Gar tere chahane wale mere samne aayeNge
Sach kah raha huN Jaan wo jaan se jayeNge

thik hai ji koshis kar raha hu

[hasrat]

Originally Posted by kwahish

NidaaN sahab aapko yahaN "Ta" sher khana tha so pLz aap samjhiye iske rule's ko to maza aayeNga.......

Gar tere chahane wale mere samne aayeNge
Sach kah raha huN Jaan wo jaan se jayeNge

Ghar Se Nikal Raat Mein Aa Zaao Bhi,
Meri Tarah Zazbat Mein Aa Zaao Bhi.
Yun To Mile Hain Dhoop Chhawon Mein Bahaut,
Ab Barsat Mein Aa Zaao Bhi. ..................................NM

[Taish]

bhor bhayi,par aNhiyaN me ab bhi neeNdiya samaayi hai,
na jane kyuN apna yauvan dikhane pratah bela aayi hai....

[ajay nidaan]

Hai tu hi meri kashti kaa ek akela saahil mere yaar
ab tere bina is kashti me koi aur sawaar nahi hai.

[kwahish]

Originally Posted by ajay nidaan

Hai tu hi meri kashti kaa ek akela saahil mere yaar
ab tere bina is kashti me koi aur sawaar nahi hai.

Hota nahi hai aksar dil jaise chahta hai mera
Yehi kismat kah ker dil ko samjhata huN maiN

[Taish]

mohabbat ka junuu.N baaqii nahii.n hai
musalamaano.n me.n Khuun baaqii nahii.n hai


-Iqbal

[kwahish]

Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar

mohabbat ka junuu.N baaqii nahii.n hai
musalamaano.n me.n Khuun baaqii nahii.n hai


-Iqbal

Har khawaab tut jata hai sone se pahele
Mayoos ho jata huN main rone se pahele

[hasrat]

Originally Posted by kwahish

Har khawaab tut jata hai sone se pahele
Mayoos ho jata huN main rone se pahele

La-e-ilaz hai ye ishq ki bimaari,
tumpar bhi chad gayi iski khumari,

[Taish]

rago.n me.n lahuu baaqii nahii.n hai
wo dil, wo aawaaz baaqii nahii.n hai


-Iqbal sahab....!!

[hasrat]

Hansi Hansi Mein Kitno Ko Hassa Diya,
Hansi Hansi mein Kitne Gamon Ko Chhupa Liya,
Hanskar Gaya Koi Ham Par Is Kadar Ki,
Umar Bhar Ke Liye Hamein Hasna Bhula Diya

"NM"

[Taish]

ajab vaa_iz kii diin-daarii hai yaa rab
adaavat hai ise saare jahaa.N se

ko_ii ab tak na ye samajhaa ki i.nsaa.N
kahaa.N jaataa hai aataa hai kahaa.N se


--Iqbal sahab

[hasrat]

Sirf Do Kadam Dur Kinara Hoga,
Socho Tab Kya Khubsurat Nazara Hoga,
Bas Dil Jo Kahe Use Karna Dimag Se,
Fir Tum Jise Chaho Wo Tumhara Hoga. NM

[Taish]

giraa.N_bahaa hai to hifz-e-Khudii se hai warnaa
gauhar me.n aab-e-gauhar ke siwaa kuchh aur nahii.n


---Iqbal sahab

[Mujeeb]

na samaatooN maiN tapish ghuley na nazar ko waqf-e-azaab ker
jo sunaaii day usse chup sikhaa , jo dikhaai day usse khaab ker

moHsin naqvi

[kwahish]

Originally Posted by Mujeeb

na samaatooN maiN tapish ghuley na nazar ko waqf-e-azaab ker
jo sunaaii day usse chup sikhaa , jo dikhaai day usse khaab ker

moHsin naqvi

Rabte humare ab aise ho gaye
Baat falak hoti hai pani ke liye

[Ravi]

Ye Mat Puchh Ke Mera Haal Kaisa He,,
Abhi Zinda Hu Ke Ye Teri Hi Duaa He,,

[kwahish]

Originally Posted by Ravi

Ye Mat Puchh Ke Mera Haal Kaisa He,,
Abhi Zinda Hu Ke Ye Teri Hi Duaa He,,

Hota wohi hai aksar jo bus Khuda chahta hai
Bande ki kya jurrat kar de woh jo chahta hai

[Ravi]

Originally Posted by kwahish

Hota wohi hai aksar jo bus Khuda chahta hai
Bande ki kya jurrat kar de woh jo chahta hai

He Aaj Bhi Aass Milne ki Par Ye Kwahish Adhuri Hi Sahi,,
Bas Yaad Karle Istaraah Se Fir Bhale Hi Hum Me Ye Duri Hi Sahi,,

[Taish]

har sahar, har gal, har ghar pe tera nishaaN dikha,
bas tu hi dikhi hume, humne jab, jahaaN dekha....