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kis se izhaar-e-muddaa kiije
aap milte nahiiN haiN, kyaa kiije
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jeete bhi hai marte bhi hain
pal pal tujhe yaad karte bhi hain
jane kis ghari aae tu milne mujhe
sotey bhi hai jagtey bhi hain
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10th March 2008, 01:27 PM
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jeete bhi hai marte bhi hain
pal pal tujhe yaad karte bhi hain
jane kis ghari aae tu milne mujhe
sotey bhi hai jagtey bhi hain
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hai justajuu ke Khuub se hai Khuubtar kahaa.N
ab dekhiye Thaharatii hai jaa kar nazar kahaa.N
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18th March 2008, 09:22 PM
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hai justajuu ke Khuub se hai Khuubtar kahaa.N
ab dekhiye Thaharatii hai jaa kar nazar kahaa.N
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naam gumm gaya pehchan gumm gayi
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naam gumm gaya pehchan gumm gayi
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ufff kuhu tum bhi na.....tumhe "N" se nahin likhna tha ...last word jo tumhe lena hain woh hindi script ka lena hain urdu ka nahin......isisliye tumhe "H" lena tha..samjhi..
is dil ke dariidaa-daaman ko dekho to sahii, socho to sahii
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23rd March 2008, 06:57 PM
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ufff kuhu tum bhi na.....tumhe "N" se nahin likhna tha ...last word jo tumhe lena hain woh hindi script ka lena hain urdu ka nahin......isisliye tumhe "H" lena tha..samjhi..
is dil ke dariidaa-daaman ko dekho to sahii, socho to sahii
jis jholii meN sau chhed hue us jholii ko phailaanaa kyaa
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yaa>>>
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yaa>>>
yaade.n chalii.n Khayaal chalaa ashk-e-tar chale
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lechala dil jahan ban gaya rasta wahan
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lechala dil jahan ban gaya rasta wahan
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haath aaNkhoN pe rakh lene se Khatraa nahiiN jaataa
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24th March 2008, 01:17 PM
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haath aaNkhoN pe rakh lene se Khatraa nahiiN jaataa
diivaar se bhuuchaal ko rokaa nahiiN jaataa
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takte hain raaste pyar ke
dil laga baithe hain yaar se
aayeinge kisi roz milne wo
aas lagaye baithein hai yaar se
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sehraa hii Ghaniimat hai jo ghar jaaoge logo
vo aalam-e-vahshat hai ke mar jaaoge logo
(aalam-e-vahshat : state of loneliness)
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sehraa hii Ghaniimat hai jo ghar jaaoge logo
vo aalam-e-vahshat hai ke mar jaaoge logo
(aalam-e-vahshat : state of loneliness)
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go zaraa sii baat par baraso.n ke yaaraane gaye
lekin itanaa to huaa kuchh log pahachaane gaye
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>>go
go zaraa sii baat par baraso.n ke yaaraane gaye
lekin itanaa to huaa kuchh log pahachaane gaye
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ye husn teraa ye ishq meraa, rangiin to hai bad_naam sahii
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ye husn teraa ye ishq meraa, rangiin to hai bad_naam sahii
mujh par to ka_ii ilzaam lage ,tujh par bhii ko_ii ilzaam sahii
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hijr kii raat kaaTane vaale
kyaa karegaa agar sahar na hu_ii
[Aziz Lucknawi]
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ibn-e-mariyam huaa kare koii
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ibn-e-mariyam huaa kare koii
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[Ghalib]
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ik intazaar saa thaa ab nazar me.n vo bhii nahii.n
safar me.n marane kii fursat thii ghar me.n vo bhii nahii.n
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ik intazaar saa thaa ab nazar me.n vo bhii nahii.n
safar me.n marane kii fursat thii ghar me.n vo bhii nahii.n
[Mahashar Badayuni]
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ham ko to gardish-e-haalaat pe ronaa aayaa
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yaad karanaa har gha.Dii us yaar kaa
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yaad karanaa har gha.Dii us yaar kaa
hai vazifaa mujh dil-e-bimaar kaa
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kaash tuu bhii kabhii aajaaye masiihaa_ii ko
log aate hai.n bahut dil ko dukhaane mere
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kaash tuu bhii kabhii aajaaye masiihaa_ii ko
log aate hai.n bahut dil ko dukhaane mere
----ahmad faraaz
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riyaz-e-dahr meN na-aashna-e-bazm-e-ishrat huN
Khushii rotii hai jisko, maiN vo maHroom-e-masarrat huN
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riyaz-e-dahr meN na-aashna-e-bazm-e-ishrat huN
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miT gayaa jab miTne-vaalaa, phir salaam aayaa to kyaa!
dil kii barbaadii ke ba'd unkaa payaam aayaa to kyaa!!
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miT gayaa jab miTne-vaalaa, phir salaam aayaa to kyaa!
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mukhlis ji....yeh baitbaazi wali post hain:sher ke jawab sher wali nahin ...........apne "M"se kaise start kiya last word chaluuN hain to aapko "L" se start karna tha..............
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miT gayaa jab miTne-vaalaa, phir salaam aayaa to kyaa!
dil kii barbaadii ke ba'd unkaa payaam aayaa to kyaa!!
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mukhlis ji....yeh baitbaazi wali post hain:sher ke jawab sher wali nahin ...........apne "M"se kaise start kiya last word chaluuN hain to aapko "L" se start karna tha..............
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koi baat nahii in ki bhuul mai sudhaar leta hoon
lutf vo ishq me.n paaye hai.n ki jii jaanataa hai
ra.nj bhii itane uThaaye hai.n kio jii jaanataa hai
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koi baat nahii in ki bhuul mai sudhaar leta hoon
lutf vo ishq me.n paaye hai.n ki jii jaanataa hai
ra.nj bhii itane uThaaye hai.n kio jii jaanataa hai
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ham pa.Dh rahe the Khvaab ke purzo.n ko jo.D ke
aa.Ndhii ne ye tilism bhii rakh Dalaa to.D ke
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hai>>
ham pa.Dh rahe the Khvaab ke purzo.n ko jo.D ke
aa.Ndhii ne ye tilism bhii rakh Dalaa to.D ke
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Gam-e-aashiqii se kah do raah-e-aam tak na pahu.Nche
mujhe Khauf hai ye tohamat mere naam tak na pahu.Nche
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Gam-e-aashiqii se kah do raah-e-aam tak na pahu.Nche
mujhe Khauf hai ye tohamat mere naam tak na pahu.Nche
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chaa.Ndanii ko rusuul kahataa huu.N,baat ko baa_usuul kahataa huu.N
jagamagaate hue sitaaro.n ko,tere pairo.n kii dhuul kahataa huu.N
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chaa.Ndanii ko rusuul kahataa huu.N,baat ko baa_usuul kahataa huu.N
jagamagaate hue sitaaro.n ko,tere pairo.n kii dhuul kahataa huu.N
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un kii beruKhii me.n bhii iltefaat shaamil hai
aaj kal merii haalat dekhane ke qaabil hai
[iltefaat=kindness, courtesy]
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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aaj kal merii haalat dekhane ke qaabil hai
[iltefaat=kindness, courtesy]
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di....hi...di aaapko uN se nahin likhna hain "H" se likhna hain...apko roman script nahin hindi script use karni hain...................
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di....hi...di aaapko uN se nahin likhna hain "H" se likhna hain...apko roman script nahin hindi script use karni hain...................
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haadase kyaa kyaa tumhaarii beruKhii se ho gaye
saarii duniyaa ke liye ham ajanabii se ho gaye
[haadasaa=incident]
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jo hukam mohtarma.........
aapka har hukam sar aankho.n par .......
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mukhlis ji....yeh baitbaazi wali post hain:sher ke jawab sher wali nahin ...........apne "M"se kaise start kiya last word chaluuN hain to aapko "L" se start karna tha..............
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oops!!! sorry!!!!! my mistake!!!
Acharya ji aapkaa shukria k apne sudhar di meri laGhzish
gulzaar-e-hast-o-bood na deevaana-vaar dekh
hai dekhne kii cheez use baar baar dekh!
hast o bood means existence and non-existence
allaamah Iqbal
tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz
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oops!!! sorry!!!!! my mistake!!!
Acharya ji aapkaa shukria k apne sudhar di meri laGhzish
gulzaar-e-hast-o-bood na deevaana-vaar dekh
hai dekhne kii cheez use baar baar dekh!
hast o bood means existence and non-existence
allaamah Iqbal
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are fir se galti........"G" se start kaise kiya...uparwale post pe to "G" ka namonishan bhi nahin hain.........
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oops!!! sorry!!!!! my mistake!!!
Acharya ji aapkaa shukria k apne sudhar di meri laGhzish
gulzaar-e-hast-o-bood na deevaana-vaar dekh
hai dekhne kii cheez use baar baar dekh!
hast o bood means existence and non-existence
allaamah Iqbal
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chaliye koi baat nahi mukhlis jee is baar bhi mai.N aap kii ghalti sudhaar leta hoon, magar aap ko itelaah karna chahata hoon ki aap is baat ka khayaal rakhe is thread me ke, jab aaap sher ka jawaab sher me de to sher ka starting us letter se hona chaahiye kii jis par aap ke aagewaale insaan ka sher khatma hota hai, yaani aap ki aagewaale insaan ne jo sher kaha hai us ki last line me last letter ko lekar us par aap ko sher kehna hai.yaha sunitaa jee ne jo sher kaha hai us ka last letter "ye" hai ab dekhiye mai jawab de raha hoon, Ummid karta hoon ki aap ko samajh aa gaya hoga, meri kisii baat ka boora hargheeze na maane
ye aarazuu hai ki jab bhii gale lagaa_uu.N use
hisaar-e-zaat se baahar nikaal laa_uu.N use
himayat ali shayar
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29th April 2008, 08:06 PM
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chaliye koi baat nahi mukhlis jee is baar bhi mai.N aap kii ghalti sudhaar leta hoon, magar aap ko itelaah karna chahata hoon ki aap is baat ka khayaal rakhe is thread me ke, jab aaap sher ka jawaab sher me de to sher ka starting us letter se hona chaahiye kii jis par aap ke aagewaale insaan ka sher khatma hota hai, yaani aap ki aagewaale insaan ne jo sher kaha hai us ki last line me last letter ko lekar us par aap ko sher kehna hai.yaha sunitaa jee ne jo sher kaha hai us ka last letter "ye" hai ab dekhiye mai jawab de raha hoon, Ummid karta hoon ki aap ko samajh aa gaya hoga, meri kisii baat ka boora hargheeze na maane
ye aarazuu hai ki jab bhii gale lagaa_uu.N use
hisaar-e-zaat se baahar nikaal laa_uu.N use
himayat ali shayar
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sehmi si ankhon mein khwaab sajte hain
jab jab nind khulti hai moti se bikharte hain
SHWETA
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
duniya mein kitna gam hai
apna gam phir bhi kam hai
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30th April 2008, 01:58 PM
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sehmi si ankhon mein khwaab sajte hain
jab jab nind khulti hai moti se bikharte hain
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hai bas ki har ik unake ishaare me.n nishaa.N aur
karate hai.n muhabbat to guzarataa hai gumaa.N aur
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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4th May 2008, 03:36 PM
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Originally Posted by mausam
hai bas ki har ik unake ishaare me.n nishaa.N aur
karate hai.n muhabbat to guzarataa hai gumaa.N aur
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raat ki khamoshi ne bayan ki mohabbat-e-tanhayi
subah jab aankh khuli toh huyi dil ki tabahi
SHWETA
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
duniya mein kitna gam hai
apna gam phir bhi kam hai
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
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5th May 2008, 06:34 PM
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Originally Posted by kuhulika
raat ki khamoshi ne bayan ki mohabbat-e-tanhayi
subah jab aankh khuli toh huyi dil ki tabahi
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hijr kii pahalii shaam ke saaye duur ufaq tak chhaaye the
ham jab us ke shahar se nikale sab raaste sa.Nvalaaye the
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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5th May 2008, 06:53 PM
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Originally Posted by mausam
hijr kii pahalii shaam ke saaye duur ufaq tak chhaaye the
ham jab us ke shahar se nikale sab raaste sa.Nvalaaye the
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thehre hain yeh aansoun ab ki beh na paayeinge
jab tum paass aaoge toh khushi se chalak jayeinge
SHWETA
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
duniya mein kitna gam hai
apna gam phir bhi kam hai
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
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5th May 2008, 07:02 PM
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Originally Posted by kuhulika
thehre hain yeh aansoun ab ki beh na paayeinge
jab tum paass aaoge toh khushi se chalak jayeinge
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