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mehfil mein............................... - 15th August 2002, 06:12 AM

Aadaab badoon aur dostoon

Yeh ek din likhee thi aur aaj haath lagee hai to isse aapki nazar ke saamne rakh raha hoon. aapki raay ka muntazir hoon.


mehfil mein wo humse nazar churaate rahe
idhar udhar dekhkar nazar milaate rahe

na thi unme himmat na huii humse jurrat
kursee pe baithe ungliyaan chabaate rahe

unki zulfoon ke pech o kham main uljhe rahe
adaa pe adaa wo hume dikhaate rahe
(pech o kham=complexity, curls in hair)

kahoon komal phool ya kaanch ki gudhiya
wo sharm se apni hume tadpaate rahe

itna bhoolapan itni saadgee thi unme
baat bhi wo humse karne ghabraate rahe

ghamza ya ishwa ki koee adaa to na thi
jaane kyon wo humara dil dhadkaate rahe
(ghamza=amorous glance/plsyful galnce, ishwa=coquetry, flirting)

kab hogi mulaqaat kab bade ye baat
beech ke khaar intezaar karvaate rahe

shamma e bazm to bemout na thi /moin\
laash e armaan ko kyon jagaate rahe


raay ka intezaar rahega.


Fail afTer trYing But Dont bE DooMeD bY Not tryinG
   
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8th September 2002, 08:05 AM

its beautiful cleatus
its very emotional and guess every one goes through these emotions.

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8th September 2002, 08:07 AM

this is beautiful

there's a lot of emotion in it and guess everyone goes through the same emotions atleast once.

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