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Teri nazaron se augar jo gir jaayen -
8th December 2004, 02:54 PM
Teri nazron se augar
Teri nazron se agar jo gir jaayen To bata de hume ‘kidhar jaayen Zinda rahe to paas aate rahenge Itna kar sakte hain ki marr jaayen Hum to marz hai jo jaan ke saath chutega koi bukhaar nahi jo do din me utar jayen Teri nazron se agar jo gir jaayen To bata de hume ‘kidhar jaayen’ Aankhen raaton me kaise khwaab buune Jo ujala hote he ‘ bikhar jaayen Teri nazron se agar jo gir jaayen To bata de hume ‘ kidhar jaayen Her ik shakhs me tera chehra dhoondh lete hain Tu he bata hume ab kaun se nagar jaayen Teri nazaron se agar jo gir jaayen To bata de hume kidhar jaayen Jaise utthti ho koi maiyyat usske darwaje se Hum usske kooche se iss kadar jaayen Teri nazaron se agar jo gir jaayen To bata de hume kidhar jaayen Safar-e-vafaa me karan maikhane tak aa gaye, Sochte hain yaheen thahar jaayen, Teri nazron se augar jo gir jaayen To bata de hume kidhar jaayen Karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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Pyaar mein aise hi hota hain :) -
8th December 2004, 04:48 PM
Aadab, Ummeed karti houn Aap theek honge(health I ment)
 Wo ek gana post ki hain maine, Title: Ham Banjaron ki Baat...Wo yaad aa gaayi hain...Ham jo karte hain Tum wo kehte ho*gehraaiyan...(short reply kar rahi houn...hope You will understand*Dil se Daad aur shukriya quboul kijiyega. Kuch lines yaad aayi jo kuch youn hain: Jaaye tou jaaye kahan Samjhega-kaun yeaha Dard bhare dil ki zuban~Talat Mahmood Jee ki aawaaz mein hain lekin Duet song*Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi. Take care...God Bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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adaab -
9th December 2004, 06:59 PM
Shayri showk hai ...
Mausiki rog hai likhna aadat hai or ussper tera jawab qayamat hai huzoor iss khayal se aapke zehan ki jamee per paanv rakhte hain, ki aapke dil me baharon ka mausam aaye.. aap nahi jaante aapka replly apne qalaam per dekh ker kitna khush huaa karta houn... Bas you samajhiye ki shayri mukammal ho gayi aapke jawaab ke saath...aap jiss gehrai se shayri se tallukaat rakhti hain.......humara kayaash ke augar aap manzil ho to phir muntazir shayri hai... aap youn he aate rahiye humari mehfil me Or humare her qalaam ko mukammal banate rahiye Hum marr gaye to kaun jaanega karan kaun thaa Magar jamane ko bataiyega... Bura he sahi...magar shayar thaa izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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10th December 2004, 10:16 PM
Hi Karan
Good shayri Dushmani jam kar karo magar ye gunjayish rahe jab kabhi hum dost ho jaye to sharminda na ho sochti hoon gar koi aisa raasta hota, ki har haseen ko samajhna kuch aasan hota to hota har shaksh aashique, sabka hota fasana aur fir isque ki keemat na samajhta ye zamana Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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I do read all of Your writings** |
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I do read all of Your writings** -
11th December 2004, 12:45 AM
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Iss waqt main theek tarah se likh nahin paaoungi lekin phir kabhi sahi Ab ye keya keh rahe hain Aap~Maarne ki baat kyoun? God only Knows, right? Aayenda aisi baat na kijiyega, please**Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi...Take care...God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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Hiiiii nidhi |
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Hiiiii nidhi -
14th December 2004, 06:02 PM
Tum to sach me nazmo ka khazana ho
bahoot acche replly likhti ho Meri her nazm me tumhari shirkat.. Kya baat hai Keep writing like this only izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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14th December 2004, 08:40 PM
Thanks Karan,
If it was for me even if was not for me, u really write too good ek sher arz hai bahut puarana hai kehte hain Duniya se jo dare use kayar kehte hain duniya jisse dare use shayar kehte hain par kya apko pata hai Duniya shayar se darti kyon hai??????/ Shayra ne jo likha sach hi likha hai apne khayalaton ko bayan karke liha hai jo sach hota hai woh sach hi par sach to kadwa hota hai Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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Baat marne ki thee ya ishq kerne ke...kya fark padta hai |
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Baat marne ki thee ya ishq kerne ke...kya fark padta hai -
14th December 2004, 10:58 PM
Dil se likhi meri tehreer ke nicche tera naam..
Mere mehmaan tujhe tere her lafz per salaam Shimul.....Dariya si duniya ..Kitni badi or kitni gehri ek kinare per tum or ek kinare per hum Kabhee aisee shaam jaroor aati.. jab tumse baith ker guftgu kerte Tujhse khud apni justju kerte Baat to marne ki kar he di hai .. kyunki baat sacchi hai maine suna hai sach bolna gunaah hai Humesha khush raha kijiye Gumnaam galiyon ke badnaam shayar ke paas Aapke diye kuch nahi siwaye duaaon ke unhi Ruh se nikalti duaaon ke Saath izzajat maangta hai karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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Re: Teri nazaron se augar jo gir jaayen -
16th December 2004, 03:52 PM
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good one karan ji mrinal |
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Thankx mrinal -
17th December 2004, 12:02 AM
Well. meri her shayri me ek paigaam dilon ke liye
muhobbat ke liye aapne uss paigaam ko samjha ....ye inayat bhee iss shayar per khoob rahee aate rahiye mehfil ko sajaate rahiye izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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hiiiiiii nidhi |
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hiiiiiii nidhi -
31st March 2005, 03:49 AM
hmmmmm sach kaha
duniya jisse dare use shayar kehte hain or kitne log darte hain humse??? or logon ki chodo apni batao tum darrti ho humse? izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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31st March 2005, 07:22 AM
Main tumse dartii hoon,,,,,,,,kisne keh diyya yeh tumse.............haha ha ha ha joe of the day aaj morning mein yeh padha to itni hasi aa rahi hai
thanks for making my day  Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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hii nidhi -
17th April 2005, 10:50 PM
ye kya cum hai ki aapki hansi ke kaam aaye hum?
gayab he ho gayi ho contest ke baad Khair I m inspired by Your style of writing Soon you will find me writing in same manner Poore contest se maine kuch he cheezen seekhi Magar Tumhara andaaz seekha .. Issliye meri mehnat wasool ho gayi .. Shayad jyada kuch thaa nahi seekhne ke liye izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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19th April 2005, 10:32 PM
Hi Karan,
Well mere exams hain abhi jis ki wajah se main gayab hoon....abhi bhi exams 2nd may tak hain online ana bhaut mushkil hai par han ek thread zaroor aaj hi post kiya hai shayri-dard mein time mile to padh lena......aur contest ki to baat hi na karo itna gussa aa raha hai...sare replies padhe aisa lag raha tha jaise ki shabdon ka jung ka maidan hai yeh....is liye maine udhar reply bhi nahi kiiya.....na karna chahti thi................. isliye maine apna likha hua post bhi nahi post kiya ab tak...woh to maine tumhe pm karte hue hi likha tha na kuch socha na kuch kilha apka msg padha ki maine contest mein part nahi liya to jaldi se shayri tumhe post kar di......... par tumhe mere style mein kya acha lagta hai yeh nahi samjh aya main koi shayra nahi hoon bas udas jab hoti hoom to apne khayalon ko shabond mein likh de deti hoon shayra banne ka shauk bhi nahi bas koi hai nahi jisse apni batein kahoon is liye yahan post kar deti hoon... Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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