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23rd May 2005, 07:17 PM
ishq me bewafai ka sabab.. kis kis ko samjhayein
dil ki hazaar majburiyaan.. inhe kahaan lekar jayein Gudiya humne tumko chahne ki galtiyaN sau baar ki, aaj bhi dil chahta hai woh khata dohrayein. Talib humne inteezar tera Qayamat tak kiya Aur kitna is dil ko teri yaadon se Behlayein Rohin khatawaar nahin tum, jo kiya qatl-e-armaan ….. aaj bhi is dil ko hum yeh samjhayein..... Aman_rahi sochakar baithe hai ki too laut aayega ek din us pal ke intezaar me hai nazare bichaayein Garima 6th Sher... wo unki wafayein, haaye unki adaayein Jee kaise bhula de *ahl-e-dil ki khataayein [color=dark brown]dil mein rehne wala[/color] paras garima, apne ek achi ghazal ka agaazh kiya hai...haan, kaafiya aur radeef ka der tak sochte huye kuch samajh mein aaya hai...woh yeh ki dono ek hi lafz mein hain... samjhayein dohraayein bichayein khatayein behlaayein see kafiya hua 'aa' aur radeef 'yein' sabke liye apni samajh likh di hai...koyi mujhe bhi samjhayein... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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23rd May 2005, 08:42 PM
Lets start a fresh....
(1) dil ke taar ko yoon nahi chedo haal bura ho jaata hai, bahalaate bahalaate thake hum yeh aur rootha jaata hai. (Paplupopat) it becomes more and more universal. |
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23rd May 2005, 11:02 PM
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dil ke taar ko yoon nahi chedo haal bura ho jaata hai, bahalaate bahalaate thake hum yeh aur rootha jaata hai. (Paplupopat) (2) aksar sabko kahte dekha hamko pyar hua tumse lekin jab ye lagta hai dil to bekaar bada ho jata hai. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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24th May 2005, 01:14 AM
(1)
dil ke taar ko yoon nahi chedo haal bura ho jaata hai, bahalaate bahalaate thake hum yeh aur rootha jaata hai. (Paplupopat) (2) aksar sabko kahte dekha hamko pyar hua tumse lekin jab ye lagta hai dil to bekaar bada ho jata hai. (sakhi) (3) jo roothte ho to ham bhi khoye huay se rehte hain rusvaai me dekho khushiyo ka ye daman choota jaata hai Gudiya |
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24th May 2005, 04:28 AM
Dekhiye ...
main aap sab shayri seekhne walon se iltijaa karti hoon ki aap pls. is thread ke niyamon ko dhyaan se padhein aur samjhein...aur phir thoda sa waqt lagakar sher theek se post karein...hum iss kuuche mein hi nahin seekheinge, tau it defeats the purpose of this thread... aap khud hee sochiye...radeef, kaafiya ya behr ka kisi ne bhi socha...nahin na...well........ i will refresh this thread...plz chk everything...before posting...lagta hai niyam dhuul mitti mein peeche ke pages mein reh gaye hain... (1) dil ke taar ko yoon nahi chedo haal bura ho jaata hai, bahalaate bahalaate thake hum yeh aur rootha jaata hai. (Paplupopat) (2) aksar sabko kahte dekha hamko pyar hua tumse lekin jab ye lagta hai dil to bekaar bada ho jata hai. (sakhi) (3) jo roothte ho to ham bhi khoye huay se rehte hain rusvaai me dekho khushiyo ka ye daman choota jaata hai Gudiya gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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24th May 2005, 12:31 PM
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Aappki ye koshish bohot acchi haiy, aur kaafi had tak kaamyaab bhi, haan magar yahaan kahee jaane waali koee bhi ghazal mukammal hone ke baad behar me nahi haiy, balqi shayad hi koee sheyr beher me ho. Aur jis ghazal ka aapne uper zikr kiya haiy, isme radeef aur kaafiyaa EK nahi haiy, Ghazal me kaafiyaa zaroori haiy, magar radeef zaroori nahi haiy, voh Ghazal jis meiN radeef kaa ehtimaam kiyaa jaaye :muraddaf: Ghazal kehlaatee hai. Ghazal meiN radeef kaa istaimaal Laazmee naheeN hai, HaalaaN.k beshtar log is kee paabaNdee karte haiN. aisee Ghazal jis meiN radeef kaa ehtimaam na ho :Ghair muraddaf: kehlaatee hai. umeed karti hoon ke aap logh is koshish ko jaari rakhenge magar saath hi saath ise behter bhi banaane ki koshish karenge. Safiya... |
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1st July 2005, 02:59 PM
HI Paras, Safiya, Manoj, Banno, Sanju, Shimul, Chand and all subscribers.
Aap shayad jaante hi honge ki meri 'Shayri.com' mein Shuruat isi thread yani ki 'KUCHA-E KALAM' se hui thi. Aaj main phir se jab is thread par aata to maine paaya ki bahut se naye log bhi isme shirkat kar rahe hain. Dekhkar achcha laga. Doston, jaisa ki aap jaante hi hain, aur jiske liye main badnaam bhi hoon yahan par, woh yeh ki hum sabhi ko koshish karni hai ki hum apni Shayari main sudhar kar sakein. Isliye meri guzarish hai, sabhi se ki please Agar koi suggestions deta hai, to gussa na karein , na hi bura mane aur na hi thread par likhne band karien. OKIE????? Once again i m inviting all the subscribers to join kucha-e-kalam and lets make huge collection of ghazals that will be a common wealth of all of us at Shayri.com Happy Writing..................... Take care to get what you like, Or you will be forced to like what you get. |
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6th July 2005, 09:58 AM
Kayi roz se ye kadi thami hui thi.....aaj kisi ko iska link dene ke liye dhoonda.....to socha ise phir ek naye kalaam ka agaaz kiya jaaye.....
to lijiye ye aapki nazar kar raha hoon suna tha ke mehfil *ekhtemaami lagi hai.... dekha to pyar ke apne hi nilaami lagi hai....... *ekhtemaami = aakhiri **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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6th July 2005, 10:39 AM
Suna tha ke mehfil *ekhtemaami lagi hai....
Dekha to pyar ke apne hi nilaami lagi hai....... --Aman Rahi Dekhne bade shauq se aaye thhe ek nazar unko Yahan to hone mere pyaar ki badnaami lagii hai --Pulkit *ekhtemaami = aakhiri Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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6th July 2005, 10:59 AM
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suna tha ke mehfil *ekhtemaami lagi hai.... dekha to pyar ke apne hi nilaami lagi hai....... last --aman rahi 2nd sher Dekhne bade shauq se gaye thhe ek nazar unko Yahan to hone mere pyaar ki badnaami lagii hai --pulkit gupta 3rd sher nahin gawaara hamein apni tabaahi ka dhuaan ke yahan *ahal-e-junnoon mein hi khaami lagi hai crazy people(lovers) --paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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6th July 2005, 12:32 PM
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suna tha ke mehfil *ekhtetaami lagi hai.... dekha to pyar ke apne hi nilaami lagi hai....... *ekhtetaami = aakhiri --aman rahi 2nd sher Dekhne bade shauq se gaye thhe ek nazar unko Yahan to hone mere pyaar ki badnaami lagii hai --pulkit gupta 3rd sher nahin gawaara hamein apni tabaahi ka dhuaan ke yahan *ahal-e-junnoon mein hi khaami lagi hai crazy people(lovers) --Parastaar 4th sher le chalo pyar ko us mehfil main saudagaroon.... jahan kharidaroon ki bheed naami- giraami lagi hai..... --aman rahi **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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6th July 2005, 02:16 PM
HI all!
Very happy to see you all here! I will not comment on any sher but i am posting one from mine to continue the Ghazal.... ====================================== 1st sher suna tha ke mehfil *ekhtetaami lagi hai.... dekha to pyar ke apne hi nilaami lagi hai....... *ekhtetaami = aakhiri --aman rahi 2nd sher Dekhne bade shauq se gaye thhe ek nazar unko Yahan to hone mere pyaar ki badnaami lagii hai --pulkit gupta 3rd sher nahin gawaara hamein apni tabaahi ka dhuaan ke yahan *ahal-e-junnoon mein hi khaami lagi hai crazy people(lovers) --Parastaar 4th sher le chalo pyar ko us mehfil main saudagaroon.... jahan kharidaroon ki bheed naami- giraami lagi hai..... --aman rahi 5th Sher...... Sunte the mil jate hain khuda bhi dua se, Hath apne to lekin yahan nakami lagi hai ================================== Take care to get what you like, Or you will be forced to like what you get. |
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6th July 2005, 02:20 PM
And its good to see u around Gumnaam bhai...Keep Coming...
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Re: 5th Sher -
6th July 2005, 04:27 PM
HI all!
Very happy to see you all here! I will not comment on any sher but i am posting one from mine to continue the Ghazal.... ====================================== 1st sher suna tha ke mehfil *ekhtetaami lagi hai.... dekha to pyar ke apne hi nilaami lagi hai....... *ekhtetaami = aakhiri --aman rahi 2nd sher Dekhne bade shauq se gaye thhe ek nazar unko Yahan to hone mere pyaar ki badnaami lagii hai --pulkit gupta 3rd sher nahin gawaara hamein apni tabaahi ka dhuaan ke yahan *ahal-e-junnoon mein hi khaami lagi hai crazy people(lovers) --Parastaar 4th sher le chalo pyar ko us mehfil main saudagaroon.... jahan kharidaroon ki bheed naami- giraami lagi hai..... --aman rahi 5th Sher...... Sunte the mil jate hain khuda bhi dua se, Hath apne to lekin yahan nakami lagi hai ================================== aaj aa gaya hoon main bhi der se hi sahi mahfil mein... 6th sher likh raha hoon... bahut koshise ki ki jinda rahu jameer per apane wakt ne kervat badali naam sirf...badnami lagi hai Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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8th July 2005, 07:53 PM
HI all!
Very happy to see you all here! I will not comment on any sher but i am posting one from mine to continue the Ghazal.... ====================================== 1st sher suna tha ke mehfil *ekhtetaami lagi hai.... dekha to pyar ke apne hi nilaami lagi hai....... *ekhtetaami = aakhiri --aman rahi 2nd sher Dekhne bade shauq se gaye thhe ek nazar unko Yahan to hone mere pyaar ki badnaami lagii hai --pulkit gupta 3rd sher nahin gawaara hamein apni tabaahi ka dhuaan ke yahan *ahal-e-junnoon mein hi khaami lagi hai crazy people(lovers) --Parastaar 4th sher le chalo pyar ko us mehfil main saudagaroon.... jahan kharidaroon ki bheed naami- giraami lagi hai..... --aman rahi 5th Sher...... Sunte the mil jate hain khuda bhi dua se, Hath apne to lekin yahan nakami lagi hai ================================== aaj aa gaya hoon main bhi der se hi sahi mahfil mein... 6th sher likh raha hoon... bahut koshise ki ki jinda rahu jameer per apane wakt ne kervat badali naam sirf...badnami lagi hai Akant... 7th sher likh raha hoon..... itney abaad they ke khatm nukta-e-asiri thi humse itney barbaad hain ke dil main ghum ki ghulami lagi hai Wo zindagi kabhi merey naam thi hi nahi |
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19th July 2005, 09:17 AM
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suna tha ke mehfil ekhtetaami lagi hai.... dekha to pyar ke apne hi nilaami lagi hai....... --aman rahi 2nd sher Dekhne bade shauq se gaye thhe ek nazar unko Yahan to hone mere pyaar ki badnaami lagii hai --pulkit gupta 3rd sher nahin gawaara hamein apni tabaahi ka dhuaan ke yahan ahal-e-junnoon mein hi khaami lagi hai --Parastaar 4th sher le chalo pyar ko us mehfil main saudagaroon.... jahan kharidaroon ki bheed naami- giraami lagi hai..... --aman rahi 5th Sher Sunte the mil jate hain khuda bhi dua se, Hath apne to lekin yahan nakami lagi hai --gumnaam 6th sher bahut koshise ki ki jinda rahu jameer per apane wakt ne kervat badali naam sirf...badnami lagi hai --akant 7th sher itney abaad they ke khatm nukta-e-asiri thi humse itney barbaad hain ke dil main ghum ki ghulami lagi hai --saqib_sahili 8th sher khudaaya ro ro ke sabke chehre takte rahe hum haath jo lagi tau, haaye...! khud kalami lagi hai ---paras aur issi last sher se yeh ghazal mukkammal huyi...ab aage nayi ghazal ka aaghaaz kijiey... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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19th July 2005, 09:49 AM
To Lijiye ek naye sher se Ek nayi Ghazal ka Aghaz karte hain.....
1st Sher ====== "Aaj kyon aankhon mein khamoshi utar aayi hai? Aaj kyon phir teri tasweer ubhar aayi hai?" Take care to get what you like, Or you will be forced to like what you get. |
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19th July 2005, 10:26 AM
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====== "Aaj kyon aankhon mein khamoshi utar aayi hai? Aaj kyon phir teri tasweer ubhar aayi hai?" Guman..... 2nd Sher ======= bhool gaya tha tera masoom, dilkash sa chehra….. aaj kyon mere hothon pe vo hansi nikhar aayi hai……? Aman Rahi.... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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19th July 2005, 06:00 PM
1st Sher
====== "Aaj kyon aankhon mein khamoshi utar aayi hai? Aaj kyon phir teri tasweer ubhar aayi hai?" Guman..... 2nd Sher ======= bhool gaya tha tera masoom, dilkash sa chehra?.. aaj kyon mere hothon pe vo hansi nikhar aayi hai??? Aman Rahi.... 3rd Sher ======= badi siddat se sajaayi thi tasavoor ki jindagi aaj kyo phir mujhe khaamosi najar aayi hai Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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21st July 2005, 09:14 AM
2nd Sher ======= bhool gaya tha tera masoom, dilkash sa chehra?.. aaj kyon mere hothon pe vo hansi nikhar aayi hai??? Aman Rahi.... Aman Rahi Ji! Aapne to mera naam hi badal diya sahab, GUMNAM se GUMAN kar diya... Khair sahab aapne bahur hi Achche se Sher likha hai jo ki Ghazal ke first sher se Match karta hai.. Lekin zanab, muafi chahunga ki aapka sher Thora sa beher se Bahar nikal raha hai. So i would like to make a bit modification in it if you allow................. 3rd Sher ======= badi siddat se sajaayi thi tasavoor ki jindagi aaj kyo phir mujhe khaamosi najar aayi hai Akant... Akant ji aapne bilkul maakool Sher likha hai..... Take care to get what you like, Or you will be forced to like what you get. |
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21st July 2005, 09:19 AM
Lijiye Ghazal ka 4th Sher pesh kar raha hoon..
4th Sher ======= Yun to koshish hazaar- lakh kari na aaye, par teri yaad mujhe Sham-o-seher aayi hai To ghazal is tarah se ban gayi ab tak.............. 1st Sher ====== "Aaj kyon aankhon mein khamoshi utar aayi hai? Aaj kyon phir teri tasweer ubhar aayi hai?" Gumnam..... 2nd Sher ======= bhool gaya tha tera masoom, dilkash sa chehra?.. aaj kyon mere hothon pe vo hansi nikhar aayi hai??? Aman Rahi.... 3rd Sher ======= badi siddat se sajaayi thi tasavoor ki jindagi aaj kyo phir mujhe khaamosi najar aayi hai Akant... 4th Sher ======= Yun to koshish hazaar- lakh kari na aaye, par teri yaad mujhe Sham-o-seher aayi hai Take care to get what you like, Or you will be forced to like what you get. |
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24th July 2005, 10:03 AM
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Aaj kyon aankhon mein khamoshi utar aayi hai? Aaj kyon phir teri tasweer ubhar aayi hai? --Gumnam 2nd Sher bhool gaya tha tera masoom, dilkash sa chehra?.. aaj kyon mere hothon pe vo hansi nikhar aayi hai??? --Aman Rahi 3rd Sher badi siddat se sajaayi thi tasavoor ki jindagi aaj kyo phir mujhe khaamosi najar aayi hai --Akant 4th Sher Yun to koshish hazaar- lakh kari na aaye, par teri yaad mujhe Sham-o-seher aayi hai --gumnaam 5th sher yoon na murjha ki aankhein chalak aayein meri dekh phir tere pyaar ki lehar pe lehar aayi hai --paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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24th July 2005, 11:07 AM
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Aaj kyon aankhon mein khamoshi utar aayi hai? Aaj kyon phir teri tasweer ubhar aayi hai? --Gumnam 2nd Sher bhool gaya tha tera masoom, dilkash sa chehra?.. aaj kyon mere hothon pe vo hansi nikhar aayi hai??? --Aman Rahi 3rd Sher badi siddat se sajaayi thi tasavoor ki jindagi aaj kyo phir mujhe khaamosi najar aayi hai --Akant 4th Sher Yun to koshish hazaar- lakh kari na aaye, par teri yaad mujhe Sham-o-seher aayi hai --gumnaam 5th sher yoon na murjha ki aankhein chalak aayein meri dekh phir tere pyaar ki lehar pe lehar aayi hai --paras 6th sher aaye aahaT koi ya phir koi khushbu ki lehar mujhko lagta hai meri jaan-e-jigar aayi hai. Talib. |
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28th July 2005, 10:24 AM
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Aaj kyon aankhon mein khamoshi utar aayi hai? Aaj kyon phir teri tasweer ubhar aayi hai? --Gumnam 2nd Sher bhool gaya tha tera masoom, dilkash sa chehra?.. aaj kyon mere hothon pe vo hansi nikhar aayi hai??? --Aman Rahi 3rd Sher badi siddat se sajaayi thi tasavoor ki jindagi aaj kyo phir mujhe khaamosi najar aayi hai --Akant 4th Sher Yun to koshish hazaar- lakh kari na aaye, par teri yaad mujhe Sham-o-seher aayi hai --gumnaam 5th sher yoon na murjha ki aankhein chalak aayein meri dekh phir tere pyaar ki lehar pe lehar aayi hai --paras 6th sher aaye aahaT koi ya phir koi khushbu ki lehar mujhko lagta hai meri jaan-e-jigar aayi hai. 7th sher palkon ki thee jumbish, ke hothon ki tere mauhar tere amad ki khushbu se laga, ke sehar aayi hai --paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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28th July 2005, 02:22 PM
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Aaj kyon aankhon mein khamoshi utar aayi hai? Aaj kyon phir teri tasweer ubhar aayi hai? --Gumnam 2nd Sher bhool gaya tha tera masoom, dilkash sa chehra?.. aaj kyon mere hothon pe vo hansi nikhar aayi hai??? --Aman Rahi 3rd Sher badi siddat se sajaayi thi tasavoor ki jindagi aaj kyo phir mujhe khaamosi najar aayi hai --Akant 4th Sher Yun to koshish hazaar- lakh kari na aaye, par teri yaad mujhe Sham-o-seher aayi hai --gumnaam 5th sher yoon na murjha ki aankhein chalak aayein meri dekh phir tere pyaar ki lehar pe lehar aayi hai --paras 6th sher aaye aahaT koi ya phir koi khushbu ki lehar mujhko lagta hai meri jaan-e-jigar aayi hai. 7th sher palkon ki thee jumbish, ke hothon ki tere mauhar tere amad ki khushbu se laga, ke sehar aayi hai --paras 8th sher Shukra hai Khuda ki, wo hamein bhouli nahin Douaein dene ke liye, wo idhar aksar aayi hai --Mushkil Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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2nd August 2005, 11:05 AM
Chaliye ek nayi ghazal ka aaghaaz karte hain....
1st Sher mere mehboob tera aakhiri payaam baaki hai iss dil-e-ghareeb se tera inteqaam baaki hai --paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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2nd August 2005, 01:59 PM
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mere mehboob tera aakhiri payaam baaki hai iss dil-e-ghareeb se tera inteqaam baaki hai --paras 2nd Sher tham gaya hai intezaar mein tera aagaz-e-ishq..... is sham-e-naseeb se tera ajaam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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2nd August 2005, 03:23 PM
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mere mehboob tera aakhiri payaam baaki hai iss dil-e-ghareeb se tera inteqaam baaki hai --paras 2nd Sher tham gaya hai intezaar mein tera aagaz-e-ishq..... is sham-e-naseeb se tera ajaam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi and the 3rd sher laash ban gaya hoon tumhare entjaar mein dhadakano ka abhi aakhiri salaam baaki hai ----Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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2nd August 2005, 06:34 PM
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mere mehboob tera aakhiri payaam baaki hai iss dil-e-ghareeb se tera inteqaam baaki hai --paras 2nd Sher tham gaya hai intezaar mein tera aagaz-e-ishq..... is sham-e-naseeb se tera ajaam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi 3rd sher laash ban gaya hoon tumhare entjaar mein dhadakano ka abhi aakhiri salaam baaki hai ----Akant... 4th Sher kabhi seene pe to kabhi peeth mein utara...... ek dafa aa jaao ki tera ehtraam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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2nd August 2005, 07:35 PM
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mere mehboob tera aakhiri payaam baaki hai iss dil-e-ghareeb se tera inteqaam baaki hai --paras 2nd Sher tham gaya hai intezaar mein tera aagaz-e-ishq..... is sham-e-naseeb se tera ajaam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi 3rd sher laash ban gaya hoon tumhare entjaar mein dhadakano ka abhi aakhiri salaam baaki hai ----Akant... 4th Sher kabhi seene pe to kabhi peeth mein utara...... ek dafa aa jaao ki tera ehtraam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi 5th sher 'KASAK' to apni rooh lekar chaldi hai yaaron, uska jism jalane ka aakhri kaam baaki hai.... ---kasak Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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2nd August 2005, 07:44 PM
dd koshis ki hai do lines likhne ki bataiyega ki theek hain ki nahi,
itne door se aaya tha main doston se milne par, ab bhi kyon sunai nahi de rahi hai aahat mehfil ki. aapka LUCKY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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3rd August 2005, 09:20 AM
ek lafz likhne mein galti ho gayi thi......
1st Sher mere mehboob tera aakhiri payaam baaki hai iss dil-e-ghareeb se tera inteqaam baaki hai --Paras 2nd Sher tham gaya hai intezaar mein tera aagaz-e-ishq..... is sham-e-naseeb se tera anjaam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi 3rd sher laash ban gaya hoon tumhare entjaar mein dhadakano ka abhi aakhiri salaam baaki hai ----Akant... 4th Sher kabhi seene pe to kabhi peeth mein utara...... ek dafa aa jaao ki tera ehtraam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi 5th sher 'KASAK' to apni rooh lekar chaldi hai yaaron, uska jism jalane ka aakhri kaam baaki hai.... ---Kasak **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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4th August 2005, 08:08 PM
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mere mehboob tera aakhiri payaam baaki hai iss dil-e-ghareeb se tera inteqaam baaki hai --Paras 2nd Sher tham gaya hai intezaar mein tera aagaz-e-ishq..... is sham-e-naseeb se tera anjaam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi 3rd sher laash ban gaya hoon tumhare intezaar mein dhadakano ka abhi aakhiri salaam baaki hai ----Akant... 4th Sher kabhi seene pe to kabhi peeth mein utara...... ek dafa aa jaao ki tera ehtraam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi 5th sher 'KASAK' to apni rooh lekar chaldi hai yaaron, uska jism jalane ka aakhri kaam baaki hai.... ---Kasak 6th sher Jhulasta raha jo, to pareshaan tumhe bhi karega..... fook do ise, ki badan ka bad-anjaam baaki hai........... ---Aman_rahi **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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11th August 2005, 05:29 PM
Es nu aage taan vadao....Meri HB GB behna.....
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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11th August 2005, 05:51 PM
1st Sher
mere mehboob tera aakhiri payaam baaki hai iss dil-e-ghareeb se tera inteqaam baaki hai --Paras 2nd Sher tham gaya hai intezaar mein tera aagaz-e-ishq..... is sham-e-naseeb se tera anjaam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi 3rd sher laash ban gaya hoon tumhare intezaar mein dhadakano ka abhi aakhiri salaam baaki hai ----Akant... 4th Sher kabhi seene pe to kabhi peeth mein utara...... ek dafa aa jaao ki tera ehtraam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi 5th sher 'KASAK' to apni rooh lekar chaldi hai yaaron, uska jism jalane ka aakhri kaam baaki hai.... ---Kasak 6th sher Jhulasta raha jo, to pareshaan tumhe bhi karega..... fook do ise, ki badan ka bad-anjaam baaki hai........... ---Aman_rahi 7th sher Kuchh yaade simat rahi hai shole ban-banke In bhadakate sholo ka kohraam baaki hai --- Garima |
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11th August 2005, 07:38 PM
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mere mehboob tera aakhiri payaam baaki hai iss dil-e-ghareeb se tera inteqaam baaki hai --Paras 2nd Sher tham gaya intezaar mein tere aagaz-e-ishq..... is sham-e-naseeb se tera anjaam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi 3rd sher laash ban gaya hoon tere intezaar mein dhadhkano ka abhi aakhiri salaam baaki hai ----Akant 4th Sher kabhi seene pe to kabhi peeth mein utara...... aaon tujhse milne ki tera ehtraam baaki hai..... ---Aman_rahi 5th sher 'KASAK' to apni rooh lekar chaldi hai yaaron, badan phoonkne ka abhi kaam baaki hai.... ---Kasak 6th sher Jhulasta raha jo, to pareshaan tumhe bhi karega..... phuunk do ise, ki badan ka bad-anjaam baaki hai........... ---Aman_rahi 7th sher Kuchh yaade simat rahi hai shole ban-banke In dabbe sholon ka abhi koharaam baaki hai --- Garima 8th sher rasm-e-duniya ke liye rishton ki tijaarat kar doon pesha-e-ishq mein bik jaaon, yeh kaam baaki hai --paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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11th August 2005, 07:40 PM
Once again getting the honour of starting a new ghazal in the Kuucha...here it goes...
================================= Roz Dastak mere dil par aakar ek ladki de jaati hai Khushbu se saanson ki mera tan-man mehkaati hai Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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11th August 2005, 07:53 PM
1st Sher
Roz Dastak mere dil par aakar ek ladki de jaati hai Khushbu se saanson ki mera tan-man mehkaati hai --Pulkit 2nd Sher Dooba rahta hai dil mera bas oonhi ke khayalon mai saansen meri ab sirf oohi ka naam liye jaati hain --Palak =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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11th August 2005, 08:02 PM
1st Sher
Roz Dastak mere dil par aakar ek ladki de jaati hai Khushbu se saanson ki mera tan-man mehkaati hai --Pulkit 2nd Sher Dooba rahta hai dil mera bas oonhi ke khayalon mai Dharkane meri ab sirf oosi ka naam liye jaati hain --Palak 3rd Sher Kar di hai naam uske maine apni zindagaani Cehre par khushi ab bas uski yaad hi laati hai -- Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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13th August 2005, 12:57 PM
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Roz Dastak mere dil par aakar ek ladki de jaati hai Khushbu se saanson ki mera tan-man mehkaati hai --Pulkit 2nd Sher Dooba rahta hai dil mera bas oonhi ke khayalon mai Dharkane meri ab sirf oosi ka naam liye jaati hain --Palak 3rd Sher Kar di hai naam uske maine apni zindagaani Cehre par khushi ab bas uski yaad hi laati hai -- Priya 4th Sher Jaan chali jaati hai unse 1 din na miloon to, aankhen unki 1 jhalak paane ko taras jaati hai, --Kasak Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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