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4th February 2008, 07:33 AM
namaste, adab sas ria kaal
aaj bahut dino k baad, hum mehfil mein kuch pesh karne jah rahein hain. ek aarse k baad kuch likha....jo dil mein aaya...bass likh diya.....kuch yaadein nahi jaati....kuch ehsaas nahi jaate.....bass unhi kuch ehsaason par kuch likha hai..... umeed hai aapko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humari galtyion ko app humein batayeinge. Mohabaat mein fanna hona aabi baaki hai Aansuon ka hisab karna aabi baaki hai Dhundte hai usse hum andheron mein b Uski ghalyion mein khona abbi baaki hai Dard-e-dil sunkar kaamp uthe badal bi Dard se inka rona abbi baaki hai Zikr to kiya sirf unki bewaffai ka Unki beruki se niqaab uthana aabi baaki hai Inzehaar kiya zindagi saath bitane ka unse Par unka inkaar karna aabi baaki hai Chup reh kar shehi saaja humne Bewaffai ka zurm karna aabi baaki hai kyun chahta hain sab k hum duniya chod de seene mein ek saans abbi baaki hai pee liya humne zehar unki bewaffai kai uski baahon mein girna abbi baaki hai Nah samaj paye wo humara dard is ghazal mein Iss ghazal ka aahkir sher abbi baaki hai Kaise chod dun main iss duniya ko… Bewaffa se aakri mulakat aabi baaki hai…... .................................................. .................................................. ............................ Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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4th February 2008, 01:25 PM
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Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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4th February 2008, 04:44 PM
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manish bohat hi acha likha haimujhe bohat ache lage tumhare ahsasaat magar kai jaga spellings aesi hain ke parrhne main diqqat hoi maslan ye sher Inzehaar kiya zindagi saath bitane ka unse Par unka inkaar karna aabi baaki hai Chup reh kar shehi saaja humne Bewaffai ka zurm karna aabi baaki hai izhaar main n likha hai woh galat hai doosra sahi ki spelling bhi kuch mushkil samajh aye ..... kyun chahta hain sab k hum duniya chod de seene mein ek saans abbi baaki hai yahan chahta nahi chahtay hona chahiye theek na ...... baqi poetry to bohattttt zaberdast lagi khas ker jo dard ka ahsas chupa hai wo bakhubi bayan kia likhte raho khush raho apna khayal rakhna  apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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13th February 2008, 06:06 AM
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kashif bhaii kaise hain aap? aapko humari ghazal pasand aayi, humein bahut khushi hui. hum aab rozana aane ki koshish karenge. yuhin saath dete raheiyga. aapka manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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13th February 2008, 10:02 AM
mere pyarey munna.........kahaN thy etne din....kaya bahut busy thy?????
humne tumhe bahut miss kiya.....  aapki shayri acchi lagi...aur mani (koi to ho) ke sujao bhi theek lage....ahsaas acchey haiN, yu hi likhtey raho...kush raho aur aatey raha karo.... bahut sare pyar ke saath aapki diiiii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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13th February 2008, 10:07 AM
Manish bhaiii,, kese hai aap??
aapko merul ka sadar pranaam... manish bhai bahut hi behtareen aur dard bhare alfaazon se aaj rubaru karwaya hai aapne hamein... aaj kai dino baad ki wapasi ke baad aapke itne khub ehsaason ko merul ka salam.... ek jita jagta chitra samne rakh diya manish bhai aapne.. ese hi mehfil ko sajate rahiyega aaapka dost Merul  Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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13th February 2008, 01:21 PM
kafi accha likha hain apne................
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14th February 2008, 01:32 PM
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realli nice to read u, many time when we chat i never imagine that u have such wonderful poet in side u hiding ur creativity and potential. just let it come out. keep it up the good work regards manu |
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16th February 2008, 02:07 PM
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Manish ji der se reply kr rahi hu uske liye maafi chahungi lekin apki yeh ghazal mujhe bahut pasand aayi hai aap dusron ki tarreef karte hai yahan toh apki tarreef karne ko mere paas shabd nahi hai... kafi tym baad apka likkha padhne ko mila per behad khoobsoorat likkha hai...umeed hai aage bhi aise hi padhne ka mauqa denge aap... Inzehaar kiya zindagi saath bitane ka unse Par unka inkaar karna aabi baaki hai yeh sher mujhe bahut pasand aaya... aap biti laggii is sher mein aap u hin likhte rahiye taek caer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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Aadab manish ji, kaise hai aap? janab hame kuch kehna baaki hai wah janab kya baat hain, itni umda nazm,MASHA ALLAH, bohot khoob, ALLAH or tarakki de aapko. khush rahiye apna khayal rakhiye Allah hafiz Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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26th February 2008, 06:11 AM
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diiiiiiiiii............................ kaise hain aap? thanku for pin pointing my mistakes. next i will keep these little things in mind. aage b yuhin ghaltyion k baare mein please batate raheiyga. and also.....thanku sooooo much for your wonderful words and kind support. aapka manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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9th March 2008, 05:49 AM
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kaise hain aap? aaapko yaahan dekh-kar bahut khushi hui. di humein khud par bahut gussa aaya...humein yeh mistakes khud pick karni chahiye thi. par hum aapka shukriya aada karte hain k aapne humein humari ghaltyion k baare mein bataya. thanku . hum next time zaruur dayaan denge.humari koshish ko padne aur sarhane k liye bahut bahut shukriya. umeed hai aap aage bi ess nacheez ko padte rahenge. Thanku for you support. Gud bless u manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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9th March 2008, 10:11 AM
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namaskaaR..! be-Had KhuShii hu'ii bazm meN aapkii tehreer deKh ke.. aur la-jawaab aNdaaz-e-bayaaN hay aapka.. duaa hay zor-e-qalaam aur baRheN zeyaadaah..! daad..!! KhuSh raheN. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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9th March 2008, 08:23 PM
bahut khoob !!! bas likhte jayiye !! all the best !!
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20th April 2008, 10:33 PM
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didiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii aap kaise hain? aapko yahan dekh-kar bahut khushi hui. main b manni di k diye hue sujawo k saath sehmat hun. i have learnt my lesson. agli bar galti nahi hogi. thank you for your kind words. aage b yuhin saath dete raheiyga.aapka Munna Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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sabhi ka dard sabke liye bada hota hai, aur aapne bahut khuubsoorti se aapne in ehssaso ko sabdon mein ukera hai, sach much aapka kalam daad k kabil hai,
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