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kagaz jal raha hai lafzon main tapish kiyon hai.....(gazal) - 7th August 2006, 11:33 AM
dosto app sab ko raj ki taraf se bhut sara pyar.....apni nai gazal ke saath hazir hoon....umeed hai appko pasand zaroor aiyegi....


kagaz jal raha hai lafzon main tapish kiyon hai,
mere majboot iradon main ajj larzish kiyon hai........

ek muddat huie jab pathar ho gai aankhain,
tere chhune se ajj inme yeh barish kiyon hai......

wo janta hai sanso ke bina jeena nahi mumkin,
phir mujhe bhoolne ki karta koshish kiyon hai.......

wo chaand hai or main tara hume saath chalna hai,
phir har raat usme or mujhme ranzish kiyon hai......

mere honto pe laga ke khamoshi ka tala aksar,
baat baat par bolne ki karta guzarish kiyon hai......

mera har zakhm darz hai tere dil ki kitaab main,
har aah pe aansuon ki karta tu numaish kiyon hai........

zamana janta hai mumkin nahi badal ko qaid karna,
phir mere khyalon par lagata tu bandish kiyon hai........

dil jalake roshan kar dee 'veer' ne teri raahain,
phir bhee tere qadam qadam par gardish kiyon hai.........

appke dil main thori c or jagha milne ki umeed main.....appka......raj........

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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kagaz jal raha hai lafzon main tapish kiyon hai..........(gazal) - 8th August 2006, 08:47 PM
bahot pyari gazal hai
lekin mein wah wah nahi kahungi aapko dukh hoga isi liye. kaya sach me aapko dukh hota hai jab koi wah wah karta hai.
waise aapki gazal to mujhe........................................achi. ............................lagi.
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8th August 2006, 09:13 PM
dil jalake roshan kar dee 'veer' ne teri raahain,
phir bhee tere qadam qadam par gardish kiyon hai.........

nice words raj ji,bahut acha likha aapne

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Re: kagaz jal raha hai lafzon main tapish kiyon hai..........(gazal) - 10th August 2006, 08:29 PM
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bahot pyari gazal hai
lekin mein wah wah nahi kahungi aapko dukh hoga isi liye. kaya sach me aapko dukh hota hai jab koi wah wah karta hai.
waise aapki gazal to mujhe........................................achi. ............................lagi.
aapki dost
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hi - 17th August 2006, 10:41 AM
bahot pyari gazal hai
lekin mein wah wah nahi kahungi aapko dukh hoga isi liye. kaya sach me aapko dukh hota hai jab koi wah wah karta hai.
waise aapki gazal to mujhe........................................achi. ............................lagi.
aapki dost
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pooja appko meri gazal pasand i so main appka tahe dil se shukria aada karta hoon maine appko bhee para hai app bhee bhut umda likhti ho.....yu likhti rehna or mujhe parti rehna.....raj.......

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hi - 21st August 2006, 11:00 AM
dil jalake roshan kar dee 'veer' ne teri raahain,
phir bhee tere qadam qadam par gardish kiyon hai.........

nice words raj ji,bahut acha likha aapne


jaan ji app meri har post par aati ho mera har qalaam dil se lagtai ho......na jane phir bhee kiyon anjani kehlati ho......appko meri gazal pasand i main apka bhut bhut shukarguzaar hoon.....umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath hamesha bana rahega......raj.....

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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hi - 1st September 2006, 11:38 AM
Shayrian dard hoti hain aur Ghazal lahooo,
wo dard hi kya ya wo chot hi kya jisse lahoo na bahe...
wah wah karne se dard to hota hain par dil main tasalee rehti hain ki koi aur to nahi jise humne dard diya

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aman ji appka main tahe dil se khair maqdam karta hoon jo app pehli daffa meri post par aiye....appne meri gazal ko pasand kiya main appka bhut bhut shukria aada karta hoon......umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath milta rahega......raj.......

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6th May 2011, 03:42 PM
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dosto app sab ko raj ki taraf se bhut sara pyar.....apni nai gazal ke saath hazir hoon....umeed hai appko pasand zaroor aiyegi....


kagaz jal raha hai lafzon main tapish kiyon hai,
mere majboot iradon main ajj larzish kiyon hai........

ek muddat huie jab pathar ho gai aankhain,
tere chhune se ajj inme yeh barish kiyon hai......

wo janta hai sanso ke bina jeena nahi mumkin,
phir mujhe bhoolne ki karta koshish kiyon hai.......

wo chaand hai or main tara hume saath chalna hai,
phir har raat usme or mujhme ranzish kiyon hai......

mere honto pe laga ke khamoshi ka tala aksar,
baat baat par bolne ki karta guzarish kiyon hai......

mera har zakhm darz hai tere dil ki kitaab main,
har aah pe aansuon ki karta tu numaish kiyon hai........

zamana janta hai mumkin nahi badal ko qaid karna,
phir mere khyalon par lagata tu bandish kiyon hai........

dil jalake roshan kar dee 'veer' ne teri raahain,
phir bhee tere qadam qadam par gardish kiyon hai.........

appke dil main thori c or jagha milne ki umeed main.....appka......raj........
ji bhaut sunder......................


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4th June 2011, 10:58 AM
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dosto app sab ko raj ki taraf se bhut sara pyar.....apni nai gazal ke saath hazir hoon....umeed hai appko pasand zaroor aiyegi....


kagaz jal raha hai lafzon main tapish kiyon hai,
mere majboot iradon main ajj larzish kiyon hai........

ek muddat huie jab pathar ho gai aankhain,
tere chhune se ajj inme yeh barish kiyon hai......

wo janta hai sanso ke bina jeena nahi mumkin,
phir mujhe bhoolne ki karta koshish kiyon hai.......

wo chaand hai or main tara hume saath chalna hai,
phir har raat usme or mujhme ranzish kiyon hai......

mere honto pe laga ke khamoshi ka tala aksar,
baat baat par bolne ki karta guzarish kiyon hai......

mera har zakhm darz hai tere dil ki kitaab main,
har aah pe aansuon ki karta tu numaish kiyon hai........

zamana janta hai mumkin nahi badal ko qaid karna,
phir mere khyalon par lagata tu bandish kiyon hai........

dil jalake roshan kar dee 'veer' ne teri raahain,
phir bhee tere qadam qadam par gardish kiyon hai.........

appke dil main thori c or jagha milne ki umeed main.....appka......raj........


Rajveer ji , bahut khoob likhtey haiN aap, aik aik lafz meiN gahrai hai...bahut khoob...aapki poetry ko ham bahut miss karte haiN, aate raha kijiye bazm mei.

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