waaahh kya baat hai bhushan saahab........... khoobsurat rachna.
likhte rahen...
Shaad.....
Shaad bhai.....zarranawazi ka tahe dil se shukriya....muzhe ilm hai ki ye peshkash technically bohot galat hai...aage se aapko shikayat ka mauka nahi milega..
bhai main technically koi baat nahi kar raha hoon...... aap aisa mat sochiye...
doosri baat jo cheez niyam kanoon se jitnaa door rahe bandishon se jitnaa door rahe usme utnii hi masoomiyat aa jaatii hai aur wahi ehsaas hamaare dil ke andar tak utarte hain... yaqeen maniye bahot pasand aaye hame aapke jazbaat...... bas duaa karte hain ke aap aur accha likhte rahiye....
Na pooch "bhushan" kaise gira ishk-o-dariya-e-aag me
Dubenge ab ishk me k jal jayenge maloom nahi
Maar dala sanam tere ehsaas e ishq ne mujhe ...kya khoonb likha Bhushan joshi ji ..
Sanjay Sehgal
Sehgal ji namaskar
Aapko peshkash pasand aayi apki dariyadili hai....aur makhte me takhuulaas ki aapki hidayat ab acchi lagne lagi hai...
Hausala afzahi ka tahe dil se shukriya
Bohot bhari hai Dard-e-dil sah payenge maloom nahi
Girayenge ye boozh vo k uthaenge maloom nahi
Bateen to badi karte the vo saat janmo ki magar
Karenge yad bhi hamen k bool jayenge maloom nahi
Fitrat huzoor ki rahi hai badloon me chand si
Aayenge roo-ba-roo k chup jayenge maloom nahi
Khate rakhe habeeb ne kise gum or khushi kitni mili
Hasaenge ab ye hisaab k rulange maloom nahi
Nas nas se vakif hain unki ek umr sohbat thi magar
Pachtayenge dil tod vo k itrayenge maloom nahi
Sazish-e-husn se kab tak gafil rahe ishk-e-junoo
basaenge vo ghar mera k jalaenge maloom nahi
Wadaparast hain vo bade har haal milne aayenge
Aaenge bahana liye k gale lag jaenge maloom nahi
Aab-e-hayat se lagte hain paigam-e-yaar ab humen
Jagayenge fir aas k zehar de jayenge maloom nahi
Na pooch "bhushan" kaise gira ishk-o-dariya-e-aag me
Dubenge ab ishk me k jal jayenge maloom nahi
Bhushan Joshi
Bahut khoob Bhushan bhai - dilchasp khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne is rachnaa mein..Yun to har sher tasliim hua par ek sher jo do teen bar padha uspar khaaskar ke daad dena chahungaa
Sazish-e-husn se kab tak gafil rahe ishk-e-junoo
basaenge vo ghar mera k jalaenge maloom nahi
Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa..
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
Bahut khoob Bhushan bhai - dilchasp khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne is rachnaa mein..Yun to har sher tasliim hua par ek sher jo do teen bar padha uspar khaaskar ke daad dena chahungaa
Sazish-e-husn se kab tak gafil rahe ishk-e-junoo
basaenge vo ghar mera k jalaenge maloom nahi
Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa..
Mast bhai aadaab
Aapko ye peshkash pasand aayi ye aapki zarranawazi aur uparwale ka karam hai...