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Love likhne ki zaroorat kya... - 11th March 2015, 10:58 AM

Likhne ki zaroorat kya kahne ka matlab.kya hai
Vo aNkheiN samajh leNgi aaNsoo ka sabab.kya hai

Nam hoti aNkhon ki raNgat bhi nirali hai..
Sharmaye se chehre par muskaan gazab.kya hai

PalkeiN jhuk jati haiN lab sath nhii dete..
Jazbaat bayaan hee nhii to shikwa bhi ab.kya hai

Jis par dil haar gaye aur chain bhi jata raha..
Uski hee manaye khair ye ishq ajab.kya hai

Har saaNs pe yaad karooN har jagah tujhe dekhooN..
Bin bole samajh lo na mere dil meN sab.kya hai

Dil se rishta iska meethi sii madhu sargam..
ye ishq nahii jane kya dharm mazhab.kya hai.



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11th March 2015, 12:11 PM

Har saaNs pe yaad karooN har jagah tujhe dekhooN..
Bin bole samajh lo na mere dil meN sab.kya hai


waaaaaaaaaaaaah... kamaal hii kamaal hy .. Madhu jee..

lagta hy .. kisi khanjar kii tez nok sy lafz likhe haiN... bohat asar-daar haiN...

kia kehny...... iss khoobsorat peskhash ky liye aap ko dherooN daad o mubarakbaad! ..

likhty rahiye...


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11th March 2015, 01:14 PM

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Likhne ki zaroorat kya kahne ka matlab.kya hai
Vo aNkheiN samajh leNgi aaNsoo ka sabab.kya hai

Nam hoti aNkhon ki raNgat bhi nirali hai..
Sharmaye se chehre par muskaan gazab.kya hai

PalkeiN jhuk jati haiN lab sath nhii dete..
Jazbaat bayaan hee nhii to shikwa bhi ab.kya hai

Jis par dil haar gaye aur chain bhi jata raha..
Uski hee manaye khair ye ishq ajab.kya hai

Har saaNs pe yaad karooN har jagah tujhe dekhooN..
Bin bole samajh lo na mere dil meN sab.kya hai

Dil se rishta iska meethi sii madhu sargam..
ye ishq nahii jane kya dharm mazhab.kya hai.


waah waaah waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Madhu ji maine kalpana bhii nahi ki thii ke is baar aapki kalam se itnaa haseen karishmaa janm legaa....... wallah kyaa rawaani hai, kya andaaz hai, kyaa qaafiya ki nakkashii hai...... bahot pyaar se taraashi huii ghazal hai Madhu ji....... merii taraf se aapke liye dher saarii daad aur mubaarakbaad....

aatii rahiyegaa , likhtiii rahiyegaa......

Aur jaisaa ke Hassan bhai ne kahaa..... yun lag raha hai ke keisi khanjar ki tez nok se likhaa hai... chubhan mahsoos hame bhi ho rahii hai...

likhti rahiye.. khush rahiye

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14th March 2015, 11:58 AM

waah waah....madhu jee..kya baat hai....is baar bhi aapke ehsaason ne kamaal kiya hai.....great work..



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Aap itna acha likti haiN ki dil ke taar jhanjana uthte haiN apka Kalam per ke,
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Har saaNs pe yaad karooN har jagah tujhe dekhooN..
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waaaaaaaaaaaaah... kamaal hii kamaal hy .. Madhu jee..

lagta hy .. kisi khanjar kii tez nok sy lafz likhe haiN... bohat asar-daar haiN...

kia kehny...... iss khoobsorat peskhash ky liye aap ko dherooN daad o mubarakbaad! ..

likhty rahiye...
Adaab hassan saheb...
Kya andaaz hai tareef karne ka waaah....behad khushi hoti hai aapko apne kalaam par dekh kar...apko likha hua pasand aaya jankar achcha laga..hausla afzai ka bahut shukriya...
yoon he aapke sath ki ummeed rahegi..
khush rahein...



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waah waaah waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Madhu ji maine kalpana bhii nahi ki thii ke is baar aapki kalam se itnaa haseen karishmaa janm legaa....... wallah kyaa rawaani hai, kya andaaz hai, kyaa qaafiya ki nakkashii hai...... bahot pyaar se taraashi huii ghazal hai Madhu ji....... merii taraf se aapke liye dher saarii daad aur mubaarakbaad....

aatii rahiyegaa , likhtiii rahiyegaa......

Aur jaisaa ke Hassan bhai ne kahaa..... yun lag raha hai ke keisi khanjar ki tez nok se likhaa hai... chubhan mahsoos hame bhi ho rahii hai...

likhti rahiye.. khush rahiye

Shaad.....
Adaab shaad jee...
sabse pahle to main dil se shukraguzar hoon ki aap meri koshishon ko itne dil se padhte hain aur mere ehsason ko samjhte hain.....
ye aap sab ke saath aur hausle ka sila hai ki thoda bahut likh leti hoon main...
yoon hee aage bhi aate rahein...
sath dete rahein...
duaon ke sath..



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Likhne ki zaroorat kya kahne ka matlab.kya hai
Vo aNkheiN samajh leNgi aaNsoo ka sabab.kya hai

Nam hoti aNkhon ki raNgat bhi nirali hai..
Sharmaye se chehre par muskaan gazab.kya hai

PalkeiN jhuk jati haiN lab sath nhii dete..
Jazbaat bayaan hee nhii to shikwa bhi ab.kya hai

Jis par dil haar gaye aur chain bhi jata raha..
Uski hee manaye khair ye ishq ajab.kya hai

Har saaNs pe yaad karooN har jagah tujhe dekhooN..
Bin bole samajh lo na mere dil meN sab.kya hai

Dil se rishta iska meethi sii madhu sargam..
ye ishq nahii jane kya dharm mazhab.kya hai.
Madhu ji - ek umdaa si ghazal meri nazar se chook gayi thi, shukr hai nazar padhi. Mein bhi sabhi doston ki kahi baat doobara kehna chahunga par ek sher mein

kiye jaate kyun ho apni ghazlon se humko ghayal
'Madhu' yeh gaur talab silsila gazab kya hai

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Adaab shaad jee...
sabse pahle to main dil se shukraguzar hoon ki aap meri koshishon ko itne dil se padhte hain aur mere ehsason ko samjhte hain.....
ye aap sab ke saath aur hausle ka sila hai ki thoda bahut likh leti hoon main...
yoon hee aage bhi aate rahein...
sath dete rahein...
duaon ke sath..


aapki inaaayyat aur zarraa nawaazi hai madhu saahibaa jo aap aisaa samajhtii hain... ummeed hai hame aapke aur bhii haseen kalamaat padhne ko milte rahenge......khush rahiye

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waah waah....madhu jee..kya baat hai....is baar bhi aapke ehsaason ne kamaal kiya hai.....great work..
arvind jii.....
aapke sath ke liye abhari hoon main...
dhanywaad.. aate rahein....



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Likhne ki zaroorat kya kahne ka matlab.kya hai
Vo aNkheiN samajh leNgi aaNsoo ka sabab.kya hai

Nam hoti aNkhon ki raNgat bhi nirali hai..
Sharmaye se chehre par muskaan gazab.kya hai

PalkeiN jhuk jati haiN lab sath nhii dete..
Jazbaat bayaan hee nhii to shikwa bhi ab.kya hai

Jis par dil haar gaye aur chain bhi jata raha..
Uski hee manaye khair ye ishq ajab.kya hai

Har saaNs pe yaad karooN har jagah tujhe dekhooN..
Bin bole samajh lo na mere dil meN sab.kya hai

Dil se rishta iska meethi sii madhu sargam..
ye ishq nahii jane kya dharm mazhab.kya hai.

hmmmm Madhu Bala ji, bahut khoobsurat gazal kahi hai aapne, sabhi ashiyaar tareef ke kabil hai...dua hai ki aapki kalam aise hi chalti rhe.

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Likhne ki zaroorat kya kahne ka matlab.kya hai
Vo aNkheiN samajh leNgi aaNsoo ka sabab.kya hai

Nam hoti aNkhon ki raNgat bhi nirali hai..
Sharmaye se chehre par muskaan gazab.kya hai

PalkeiN jhuk jati haiN lab sath nhii dete..
Jazbaat bayaan hee nhii to shikwa bhi ab.kya hai

Jis par dil haar gaye aur chain bhi jata raha..
Uski hee manaye khair ye ishq ajab.kya hai

Har saaNs pe yaad karooN har jagah tujhe dekhooN..
Bin bole samajh lo na mere dil meN sab.kya hai

Dil se rishta iska meethi sii madhu sargam..
ye ishq nahii jane kya dharm mazhab.kya hai.

lajwaad madhu jee wah wah hi nikal rahi hi padhkar
likhti rahen

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Madhu ji - ek umdaa si ghazal meri nazar se chook gayi thi, shukr hai nazar padhi. Mein bhi sabhi doston ki kahi baat doobara kehna chahunga par ek sher mein

kiye jaate kyun ho apni ghazlon se humko ghayal
'Madhu' yeh gaur talab silsila gazab kya hai

Bahut khoob, yunhi bazm roshan karte rahiYee
Aapke sath aur daad ka bahut shukriya anu..
bahut khoob sher kaha aapne....bas sath banayein rakhein taki ye likhne aur padhne ka silsila yoon hee chalta rahe...



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Madhu ji,

Aapka likha hua hamesha hi bahaut acacha hota hai...bahaut khoobsoorti se likha hai aapne...padhkar acacha laga...yeh 2 sher dil ke kareeb rahe.

Har saaNs pe yaad karooN har jagah tujhe dekhooN..
Bin bole samajh lo na mere dil meN sab.kya hai

Dil se rishta iska meethi sii madhu sargam..
ye ishq nahii jane kya dharm mazhab.kya hai.

Shukriya share karne ke liye.


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saare sher bahut achhe hain bahut achhaa lagaa apdh ke
Bahut bahut shukriya...
Masoom ji......khushi huyi kalaam pasand aa saka aapko...

Aate rahiyega.....



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hmmmm Madhu Bala ji, bahut khoobsurat gazal kahi hai aapne, sabhi ashiyaar tareef ke kabil hai...dua hai ki aapki kalam aise hi chalti rhe.

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Aap sab ko pasand aaye aisa likhti rahoon yahi koshish rahti hai....

Aati rahiyega...
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Madhu jee

Namaste

Dilkash aur umdaah koshish par dil se daad

Likhte rahiye aage bhee


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lajwaad madhu jee wah wah hi nikal rahi hi padhkar
likhti rahen

radhe radhe
Aapke sath aur asheerwaad ki abhari hoon...rajinder ji...

Aate rahiyega...

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Bohut khoob.......madam!!

Maine kaise miss kar diya!!

Bohut pasand aaya aur dil ko choo gaya.
Bahut thank u dear...chaliye der se sahi aapki nazar e inayat huyi....aati rahiyega...
Aapke dil ko chhoo payi khushi huyi....

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Madhu ji,

Aapka likha hua hamesha hi bahaut acacha hota hai...bahaut khoobsoorti se likha hai aapne...padhkar acacha laga...yeh 2 sher dil ke kareeb rahe.

Har saaNs pe yaad karooN har jagah tujhe dekhooN..
Bin bole samajh lo na mere dil meN sab.kya hai

Dil se rishta iska meethi sii madhu sargam..
ye ishq nahii jane kya dharm mazhab.kya hai.

Shukriya share karne ke liye.
Hi jiya...har baar tumhara sath pakar bahut khushi hoti hai...
Aise hee hausla badhati rahna aur aati rahna..
Bahut dino se aapne kuch share nahi kiya...jaldi aana sdc par .

Takecare..
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aapko is ghazal par daad dane ki zaroorat hai madhu ji
Aapne ghazal ko daad ke kabil samajh.khushi huyi sabaji....

Shukriya aapka..

Aate rahiyega....

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Madhu jee

Namaste

Dilkash aur umdaah koshish par dil se daad

Likhte rahiye aage bhee


Aapka

Dhaval
Shukriya dhaval sahab.....

Aate rahiyega.....

Take care
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Madhu ji,

Aapka likha hua hamesha hi bahaut acacha hota hai...bahaut khoobsoorti se likha hai aapne...padhkar acacha laga...yeh 2 sher dil ke kareeb rahe.

Har saaNs pe yaad karooN har jagah tujhe dekhooN..
Bin bole samajh lo na mere dil meN sab.kya hai

Dil se rishta iska meethi sii madhu sargam..
ye ishq nahii jane kya dharm mazhab.kya hai.

Shukriya share karne ke liye.

Bahot bahot shukriya......deri k liye mazrat kwaah hun...aapki daad ka Dil se shukriya..aate rahiye.

Salamat rahein🙂



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