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DostoN ki mehfil meiN -
14th October 2011, 12:20 PM
DostoN ki mehfil meiN, bulaaya nahiN zamane ko
bekhudi meiN itni pee, nasha ho gaya paimane ko
Gir bhi gaya agar maiN to, yaaroN ki rehnumayee hai
kaun pagal darta hai ab,.......... yaha'N ladkhadane ko
Ek tu hai ek main hu'n, faqat jahaaN ke samne
dekh le hasti wo apni, aa jaye........ aajmane ko
Kehta hai mujhko badjubaaN, sara jahaan ye..... nasamajh
maine dard hai itna saha, naqaabil hu.............. farmane ko
Chal bhool karke rangteN haiN, tasveer hum khayaloN ki
Rangeen aaj banayenge.........., is be-rang se paimane ko
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14th October 2011, 04:57 PM
[QUOTE=AnjAAn!!!;431565][CENTER]DostoN ki mehfil meiN, bulaaya nahiN zamane ko
bekhudi meiN itni pee, nasha ho gaya paimane ko
waah bhayeee .
Qatl kar diyaaa bhayeee
nasha ho gaya paimaane ko..... ye huee shayri ...............!!!
dher si daad..!!!!!!
Gir bhi gaya agar maiN to, yaaroN ki rehnumayee hai
kaun pagal darta hai ab,.......... yaha'N ladkhadane ko
yaaro ki rahnumaayee hai...... bahut acha laga ye bhi sher......
acha khyaal hai ek bahut naya sa adaa kiya hai
Ek tu hai ek main hu'n, faqat jahaaN ke samne
dekh le hasti wo apni, aa jaye........ aajmane ko
hmm acha hai
Kehta hai mujhko badjubaaN, sara jahaan ye..... nasamajh
maine dard hai itna saha, naqaabil hu.............. farmane ko
ye nahi zama kuch............
baduzban............. means buri zubaan walaa
ap doosre misre main....... kah rahe hai naqabil hun farmane ko means aap bol nahi sakte hai..... to badzubaan kaise....
uski jagah... bezubaan hotaa to poora rabt aa jataa ....
Chal bhool karke rangteN haiN, tasveer hum khayaloN ki
Rangeen aaj banayenge.........., is be-rang se paimane ko
bhayee is ghazal mai feel hua.... ki apke pas khyaal hai aur aap adaa bhi apne tareeke se karte hai.........
bas behr pe dhyaan deN ......... apne aas pas kisi ko dhoond le jo aapko sikhaa sake...... 5-7 din ka kaam hai ye bas ....
net pe bhi bahut kuch mil jayega
nahi to hum bhi yahi hain.........
magar zaroor 5-7 din behr pe dhyaandeN...
sab laye mai aa jayega ............!!
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14th October 2011, 09:30 PM
[QUOTE=janumanu;431579]
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
[CENTER] DostoN ki mehfil meiN, bulaaya nahiN zamane ko
bekhudi meiN itni pee, nasha ho gaya paimane ko
waah bhayeee .
Qatl kar diyaaa bhayeee
nasha ho gaya paimaane ko..... ye huee shayri ...............!!!
Shukriya Vikas bhai, aapne apna keemti waqt mujh na-cheez ke liye nikala iske liye main bahut shukraguzar hu aapka.
dher si daad..!!!!!!
Aapki daad sir aankho par bhai
Gir bhi gaya agar maiN to, yaaroN ki rehnumayee hai
kaun pagal darta hai ab,.......... yaha'N ladkhadane ko
yaaro ki rahnumaayee hai...... bahut acha laga ye bhi sher......
acha khyaal hai ek bahut naya sa adaa kiya hai
shukriya bhai ek baar fir
Ek tu hai ek main hu'n, faqat jahaaN ke samne
dekh le hasti wo apni, aa jaye........ aajmane ko
hmm acha hai
Kehta hai mujhko badjubaaN, sara jahaan ye..... nasamajh
maine dard hai itna saha, naqaabil hu.............. farmane ko
ye nahi zama kuch............
baduzban............. means buri zubaan walaa
ap doosre misre main....... kah rahe hai naqabil hun farmane ko means aap bol nahi sakte hai..... to badzubaan kaise....
uski jagah... bezubaan hotaa to poora rabt aa jataa ....
Bhai theek samjha aapne badzubaan se matlab yahi hai mera. badzubani se yaha nashe ki halat meiN hone wale ghalat vyavahaar se hai. Ab thodi sheyr pe fir se roshni dalna chahunga:
Duniya peene ke baad main jo kuch bhi bolta huN usey badzubaan samajhti hai par meri samajh mein ye duniya hi nasamajh hai. Maine itna bura waqt dekha hai ki usey fir bhi bayaan kar pane meiN bhi main poori tarah saksham nahi hu.
Aasha hai aap samajh gaye honge. Agar ab bhi koi kami lagi ho to zaroor batayein. Fir koshish karunga apne khayaloN ko GRAMMER meiN pirone ki.
Chal bhool karke rangteN haiN, tasveer hum khayaloN ki
Rangeen aaj banayenge.........., is be-rang se paimane ko
bhayee is ghazal mai feel hua.... ki apke pas khyaal hai aur aap adaa bhi apne tareeke se karte hai.........
bas behr pe dhyaan deN ......... apne aas pas kisi ko dhoond le jo aapko sikhaa sake...... 5-7 din ka kaam hai ye bas ....
net pe bhi bahut kuch mil jayega
nahi to hum bhi yahi hain.........
magar zaroor 5-7 din behr pe dhyaandeN...
sab laye mai aa jayega ............!!
Bhai jaankar behad khushi hui ki aapne meri ghazal hi nahiN mere khayaloN ko padhne ki koshish ki. Aapne bilkul theek pehchana bhai Main Beher se kareeb-kareeb anjaan hi hu Aap agar sikhana chaheiN to banda khush-kismat hai.
Jawab talab hai sahab
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Bhai aapne itna samay diya aapne main bahut shukrguzaar hu. lekin bhai aapki ek baat mujhe achhi nahi lagi
Ye jo post ke neeche "Last edited by janumanu" aa raha hai ye bhai dil ko chubhta hai. kripya apne khule vicharoN se hameiN awgat hone ka awsar pradaan kareiN
Ek baar fir dhanyawaad.......
Aate rahiye
Apna khayaal rakhiye
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15th October 2011, 09:35 AM
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bhayee likhte time typo ho jati hai,,,,,,,,, isliye use dowabara padh kar sahi kar detaa hun..... isme kya chubnaa . jo hai uspe dhyaan de .... jo nahi hai use dil se na lagayeN..............
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15th October 2011, 11:17 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
DostoN ki mehfil meiN, bulaaya nahiN zamane ko
bekhudi meiN itni pee, nasha ho gaya paimane ko
Gir bhi gaya agar maiN to, yaaroN ki rehnumayee hai
kaun pagal darta hai ab,.......... yaha'N ladkhadane ko
Ek tu hai ek main hu'n, faqat jahaaN ke samne
dekh le hasti wo apni, aa jaye........ aajmane ko
Kehta hai mujhko badjubaaN, sara jahaan ye..... nasamajh
maine dard hai itna saha, naqaabil hu.............. farmane ko
Chal bhool karke rangteN haiN, tasveer hum khayaloN ki
Rangeen aaj banayenge.........., is be-rang se paimane ko
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Bahut khoob, AnjAAn Sahab...! Achaa lagaa yaha shayri paDhkar...!
Matlaa khaas pasand hai hameiN
YuNhi likhte raheiN, ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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16th October 2011, 12:33 AM
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Bahut khoob, AnjAAn Sahab...! Achaa lagaa yaha shayri paDhkar...!
Matlaa khaas pasand hai hameiN
YuNhi likhte raheiN, ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
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Arrey chacha jaan
Aapne is bazm mein aakar sachmuch mujhe naya hausla diya hai. Maine to socha bhi nahi tha ki aap kabhi mera likha kuch padhenge bhi....
Bahut Bahut shukriya
Agar waqt mile to aghe be aate rahiye
Apna khayal rakhiye.
Duaon ke saath Izaazat.....
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16th October 2011, 07:46 PM
hmmmmmmmm....kya nasheeli nasheeli pesh-kash hai....hame bhi nasha ho gya aapki yeh pesh-kash padkar !
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th October 2011, 12:19 AM
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hmmmmmmmm....kya nasheeli nasheeli pesh-kash hai....hame bhi nasha ho gya aapki yeh pesh-kash padkar !
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Behad Shukriya Sunita ji is bazm mein tashreef laane ke liye. Ye hamari khushnaseebii hai ki aapko ye aashaar pasand aa sake...
Maafi chahunga MOD sahebaa agar nasha jyada ho gaya ho to. Bus agar aap ke qadam ladkhadayein to apne aap ko akela na samjhein.
Khush rahein khyaal rakhein
ho sake to hamara bhi
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20th January 2012, 07:07 PM
kyaa baat .... kya baat ... kya baat ....
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Bahut bahut shukriya Naren ji aapka. Aapka SDC mei'n haardik swaagat karta hoo'n. Aapka pehla comment mere liye hai ye to mere liye bahut hi saubhagya ki baat hai. Aise hi saath banaye rakhiyega.
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3rd February 2012, 10:40 AM
wah, bahut ahche, bahut kam log ho paate hain jo ki sharab me umda shayri kar paayeN, kaafi umda likha hai aapne aur umeed rahegi ki aage v aap yuNhi mehfileN sajaate rahiyega...
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wah, bahut ahche, bahut kam log ho paate hain jo ki sharab me umda shayri kar paayeN, kaafi umda likha hai aapne aur umeed rahegi ki aage v aap yuNhi mehfileN sajaate rahiyega...
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Behad shukriya Taish bhaii. Kaafi arse baad aapne sdc ka rukh kiya hai. Aapki zarranawaazi hai jo naacheez ke chand aashaar aapko pasand aaye.
Saath banaye rakhiye
Namaste
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6th February 2012, 08:40 PM
kya baat hai anjaan sahab... bhot khoob aaj bade din baad aapki nazam padhne ka mouka mila, bhot khoob janab
aise hi likhte rahiye...
Aur To Kuch Nahi Chaiye Mujhe aye zindagi Tujhse...
Bas Wo Ek Shakhs Lota De Jo Mujhe Tujhse Bhi Pyaara Hai...
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kya baat hai anjaan sahab... bhot khoob aaj bade din baad aapki nazam padhne ka mouka mila, bhot khoob janab
aise hi likhte rahiye...
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Shukriya janaab. Aapko ye qalaam pasand aaya, mere liye behad khushi ki baat hai. Yaqeen jaaniye aapko bazm mein dekhkar hamesha hi khushi hoti hai. Aise hi saath banaye rakhiyega. Deri se jawaab dene ke liye mazaarat khwaah hu. Kuch taqneeki kharaabi hai yahaan. Jis wajah se reply karne mein mushkilaat pesh aa rahi hain. Ek baar fir se shukriya
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23rd March 2012, 07:50 PM
wah sumit jee. . . Doston se aapke in panktiyon ko salam.
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wah sumit jee. . . Doston se aapke in panktiyon ko salam.
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Salaam Krishna bhai. Qalaam par nazar karne ke liye tahe dil se mashkoor hoon
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26th July 2012, 04:20 PM
Usne chudwa di apni kasam dekar,
dosto ne pila di uski kasam dekar,
pi to itni pi ki ladkhada kar gir gaye,
dosto ne socha hum to mar gaye,
le ja rahe the hume kabristan,
raste mai padi ek sarab ki dukan,
maine kaha dosto do-char botal aur le lo apni kabra par baith kar piyenge,
khuda mangega jindgi ka hisab use bhi ek peg bana kar de denge.
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