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30th March 2001, 09:21 PM
Kadam aaj ek uthaya hai maine
Raah nayi kuch bula rahi hai Manzil to abhi door bahut hai Aasha ki kiran jhilmila rahi hai. Sapne kuch sach honge mere Armaano ki manzil hogi Lambi is jindagi ke safar main roshan ek Aasha ki kiran jhilmila rahi hai. Aage mujhe kuch bad jaana hai Raah main nishan anpe chode jaana hai usi ki aur badte jaane hai Aasha ki jo kiran jhilmila rahi hai. Taarikho ke kuch panne palte hai kismat karvat badal rahi hai Door se kuch ishaara kar rahi hai Aasha ki kiran jhilmila rahi hai... I have learned, Joy is not in things, it is in us. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?&threadid=104 |
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15th February 2005, 07:46 AM
subodh ji yr words are fantastic i must say
Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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15th February 2005, 08:39 AM
Subodh, Very well written!
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15th February 2005, 09:35 AM
Sapne kuch sach honge mere
Armaano ki manzil hogi Lambi is jindagi ke safar main roshan ek Aasha ki kiran jhilmila rahi hai. Tooo goood Brother.. just classic.. loved reading it.. Do keep the good work up.. keep writing TC  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Hi -
15th February 2005, 10:38 PM
Thanks a lot all of you..
Subodh Gupta. I have learned, Joy is not in things, it is in us. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?&threadid=104 |
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16th February 2005, 01:21 AM
subhodh ji
bahut hi khoobi se likha hai aapne ek aasha ki kiran hi to hai jo himmat deti hai jo pichli baaton ko bhoolne ki himmat deti hai sonal |
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