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ek koshish aap ke naam.. - 6th May 2015, 10:50 PM
mahfil ko madhu ka adaab pahunche...
yoon to sdc me kai umda shayar huye hain par kyon ki main sabko nahi padh saki is baat ka afsos hai mujhe..
par is baat ki khushi hai kuch behtareen shayar aaj bhi yahaan par hain..jjinka sath milne se yakeenan hausla bhi milta raha hai mujhe....
Hassan ji ki farmaish par aap sab ke naam par kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...koi gustakhi ho to mafi ki talabgaar hoon........


Andaaz e bayaan jinka sabse he nirala hai.
Un 'shaad'ki ghazlon se mahfil me ujala hai.

Hai 'mast' ka jadu dilkash hain tarane bhi
Jisne bhi padha dil ko mushkil se sambhala hai.

Ho ishq ki baatein ya koi dard ki ho mahfil
'Hsn' Dil me sama jaye har sher he aala hai.

Kuch aur sama khilta ek vo jo chali aayein
ham sab ke liye 'dii' ne haan vaqt nikala hai.

Jazbaat se bhari ye kavitayein 'aru ji'kii.
Hai inka nasha gahra koi jadu jo kala hai.

Har nazm me muhabbat jo mahkati dilon ko hai.
kya baat ki hairat me 'masti'ne bhi daala hai.

'Hamdam' hai takhallus aur shokhi bhi hai baton me
Ashaar hasiin jaise kamsin si koi bala hai.

Kahte hain 'sagar'ke nagmo me rawani hai.
Jazbaat pirote hain ya moti ki mala hai.

Sab shauk karein poore mumkin he kahaan aisa.
Padhti hai 'madhu' sab ko bas shauk ye pala hai.


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mahfil ko madhu ka adaab pahunche...
yoon to sdc me kai umda shayar huye hain par kyon ki main sabko nahi padh saki is baat ka afsos hai mujhe..
par is baat ki khushi hai kuch behtareen shayar aaj bhi yahaan par hain..jjinka sath milne se yakeenan hausla bhi milta raha hai mujhe....
Hassan ji ki farmaish par aap sab ke naam par kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...koi gustakhi ho to mafi ki talabgaar hoon........


Andaaz e bayaan jinka sabse he nirala hai.
Un 'shaad'ki ghazlon se mahfil me ujala hai.

Hai 'mast' ka jadu dilkash hain tarane bhi
Jisne bhi padha dil ko mushkil se sambhala hai.

Ho ishq ki baatein ya koi dard ki ho mahfil
'Hsn' Dil me sama jaye har sher he aala hai.

Kuch aur sama khilta ek vo jo chali aayein
ham sab ke liye 'dii' ne haan vaqt nikala hai.

Jazbaton se bhari ye kavitayein 'aru ji'kii.
Hai inka nasha gahra koi jadu jo kala hai.

Har nazm me muhabbat jo mahkati dilon ko hai.
kya baat ki hairat me 'masti'ne bhi daala hai.

'Hamdam' hai takhallus aur shokhi bhi hai baton me
Ashaar hasiin jaise kamsin si koi bala hai.

Kahte hain 'sagar'ke nagmo me rawani hai.
Jazbaat pirote hain ya moti ki mala hai.

Sab shauk karein poore mumkin he kahaan aisa.
Padhti hai 'madhu' sab ko bas shauk ye pala hai.
Madhu ji aapne to wakaai hairaan kar diya humhe...kya khoob alfaazon mein har shaa.iraa.n ki adaa piroyii hai aapne..bhai waah maan Gayee..sar jhukakar adaab karta hoon

khaaksaar ko aapne apne is beshqimti kalaam mein shirkat di mamnooN hooN...aage kuch kehne ko lafz nahi hai mere paas..

Dua rahegi ki aap salamaat raheiN aur yunhi likhti raheiN.


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mahfil ko madhu ka adaab pahunche...
yoon to sdc me kai umda shayar huye hain par kyon ki main sabko nahi padh saki is baat ka afsos hai mujhe..
par is baat ki khushi hai kuch behtareen shayar aaj bhi yahaan par hain..jjinka sath milne se yakeenan hausla bhi milta raha hai mujhe....
Hassan ji ki farmaish par aap sab ke naam par kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...koi gustakhi ho to mafi ki talabgaar hoon........


Andaaz e bayaan jinka sabse he nirala hai.
Un 'shaad'ki ghazlon se mahfil me ujala hai.

Hai 'mast' ka jadu dilkash hain tarane bhi
Jisne bhi padha dil ko mushkil se sambhala hai.

Ho ishq ki baatein ya koi dard ki ho mahfil
'Hsn' Dil me sama jaye har sher he aala hai.

Kuch aur sama khilta ek vo jo chali aayein
ham sab ke liye 'dii' ne haan vaqt nikala hai.

Jazbaton se bhari ye kavitayein 'aru ji'kii.
Hai inka nasha gahra koi jadu jo kala hai.

Har nazm me muhabbat jo mahkati dilon ko hai.
kya baat ki hairat me 'masti'ne bhi daala hai.

'Hamdam' hai takhallus aur shokhi bhi hai baton me
Ashaar hasiin jaise kamsin si koi bala hai.

Kahte hain 'sagar'ke nagmo me rawani hai.
Jazbaat pirote hain ya moti ki mala hai.

Sab shauk karein poore mumkin he kahaan aisa.
Padhti hai 'madhu' sab ko bas shauk ye pala hai.
Kya baat kya baat kya baat!

Madhu. Aap paas hoti to gale se lagaa leti iss pyari si koshish ke liye. in sab bade naamo mujh nacheez ko jagah dene ke liye tumhara shukriya.

Kuch tumhare liye
Woh kalam ki shokhi se dil mein utar si gayi
Har sher hai misri sa aur naam madhubala hai

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mahfil ko madhu ka adaab pahunche...
yoon to sdc me kai umda shayar huye hain par kyon ki main sabko nahi padh saki is baat ka afsos hai mujhe..
par is baat ki khushi hai kuch behtareen shayar aaj bhi yahaan par hain..jjinka sath milne se yakeenan hausla bhi milta raha hai mujhe....
Hassan ji ki farmaish par aap sab ke naam par kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...koi gustakhi ho to mafi ki talabgaar hoon........


Andaaz e bayaan jinka sabse he nirala hai.
Un 'shaad'ki ghazlon se mahfil me ujala hai.

Hai 'mast' ka jadu dilkash hain tarane bhi
Jisne bhi padha dil ko mushkil se sambhala hai.

Ho ishq ki baatein ya koi dard ki ho mahfil
'Hsn' Dil me sama jaye har sher he aala hai.

Kuch aur sama khilta ek vo jo chali aayein
ham sab ke liye 'dii' ne haan vaqt nikala hai.

Jazbaton se bhari ye kavitayein 'aru ji'kii.
Hai inka nasha gahra koi jadu jo kala hai.

Har nazm me muhabbat jo mahkati dilon ko hai.
kya baat ki hairat me 'masti'ne bhi daala hai.

'Hamdam' hai takhallus aur shokhi bhi hai baton me
Ashaar hasiin jaise kamsin si koi bala hai.

Kahte hain 'sagar'ke nagmo me rawani hai.
Jazbaat pirote hain ya moti ki mala hai.

Sab shauk karein poore mumkin he kahaan aisa.
Padhti hai 'madhu' sab ko bas shauk ye pala hai.

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww i am speechless Madhu ji.......... simply superb and mind blowing..... behad gahraai se aapne sabhii doston ke hunar ko bayaan kiyaa hai.... aur meri khushkismatii jo aapne mujh nakaara ko bhi apni khoobsurat ghazal me panaah dii........ main jiske laayaq bhi nahi samjahta khud ko......

duaa hai rab se ke aap accha aur acchaa likhtii rahen, khush rahen salaamat rahen.. likhtiii rahiyegaa.....

Shaad........

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mahfil ko madhu ka adaab pahunche...
yoon to sdc me kai umda shayar huye hain par kyon ki main sabko nahi padh saki is baat ka afsos hai mujhe..
par is baat ki khushi hai kuch behtareen shayar aaj bhi yahaan par hain..jjinka sath milne se yakeenan hausla bhi milta raha hai mujhe....
Hassan ji ki farmaish par aap sab ke naam par kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...koi gustakhi ho to mafi ki talabgaar hoon........


Andaaz e bayaan jinka sabse he nirala hai.
Un 'shaad'ki ghazlon se mahfil me ujala hai.

Hai 'mast' ka jadu dilkash hain tarane bhi
Jisne bhi padha dil ko mushkil se sambhala hai.

Ho ishq ki baatein ya koi dard ki ho mahfil
'Hsn' Dil me sama jaye har sher he aala hai.

Kuch aur sama khilta ek vo jo chali aayein
ham sab ke liye 'dii' ne haan vaqt nikala hai.

Jazbaton se bhari ye kavitayein 'aru ji'kii.
Hai inka nasha gahra koi jadu jo kala hai.

Har nazm me muhabbat jo mahkati dilon ko hai.
kya baat ki hairat me 'masti'ne bhi daala hai.

'Hamdam' hai takhallus aur shokhi bhi hai baton me
Ashaar hasiin jaise kamsin si koi bala hai.

Kahte hain 'sagar'ke nagmo me rawani hai.
Jazbaat pirote hain ya moti ki mala hai.

Sab shauk karein poore mumkin he kahaan aisa.
Padhti hai 'madhu' sab ko bas shauk ye pala hai.
Madhu jee...

Meri baat rakhne ky liye manoon hooN!

aur waaah .. kia khoobsorat ashaaroN sy ghazal sajaayi hy ...
dilkash o dil-nasheeN...

kisi musawwir ki mussawari ki jhalak hy ...
aap kii khoobsorat rooh ki tasveer hy ....

yeh andaaz-e-bayaaN aap ka dil chu gaya ...
aur kia kahooN..

likhte rahiye..
khush rahiye ..

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khaaksaar ko aapne apne is beshqimti kalaam mein shirkat di mamnooN hooN...aage kuch kehne ko lafz nahi hai mere paas..

Dua rahegi ki aap salamaat raheiN aur yunhi likhti raheiN.

are mast jii aap itni tareef na karein..maine to bas koshish hee kee hai...apko pasand aayi is baat se bahut khushi huyi.......

SalaMat rahein.......


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Kya baat kya baat kya baat!

Madhu. Aap paas hoti to gale se lagaa leti iss pyari si koshish ke liye. in sab bade naamo mujh nacheez ko jagah dene ke liye tumhara shukriya.

Kuch tumhare liye
Woh kalam ki shokhi se dil mein utar si gayi
Har sher hai misri sa aur naam madhubala hai
Aapka jawaab padhkar jo khushi huyi vo gale lagne se kam nahi sarika dear..kabhi aapke shahar aana hua to ye hasrat bhi poori ho jayegi.......
Aur kya khoob sher kaha hai aapne itni izzat afzai ka behad shukriya...
muskurati rahiye..
aati rahiye...


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mahfil ko madhu ka adaab pahunche...
yoon to sdc me kai umda shayar huye hain par kyon ki main sabko nahi padh saki is baat ka afsos hai mujhe..
par is baat ki khushi hai kuch behtareen shayar aaj bhi yahaan par hain..jjinka sath milne se yakeenan hausla bhi milta raha hai mujhe....
Hassan ji ki farmaish par aap sab ke naam par kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...koi gustakhi ho to mafi ki talabgaar hoon........


Andaaz e bayaan jinka sabse he nirala hai.
Un 'shaad'ki ghazlon se mahfil me ujala hai.

Hai 'mast' ka jadu dilkash hain tarane bhi
Jisne bhi padha dil ko mushkil se sambhala hai.

Ho ishq ki baatein ya koi dard ki ho mahfil
'Hsn' Dil me sama jaye har sher he aala hai.

Kuch aur sama khilta ek vo jo chali aayein
ham sab ke liye 'dii' ne haan vaqt nikala hai.

Jazbaton se bhari ye kavitayein 'aru ji'kii.
Hai inka nasha gahra koi jadu jo kala hai.

Har nazm me muhabbat jo mahkati dilon ko hai.
kya baat ki hairat me 'masti'ne bhi daala hai.

'Hamdam' hai takhallus aur shokhi bhi hai baton me
Ashaar hasiin jaise kamsin si koi bala hai.

Kahte hain 'sagar'ke nagmo me rawani hai.
Jazbaat pirote hain ya moti ki mala hai.

Sab shauk karein poore mumkin he kahaan aisa.
Padhti hai 'madhu' sab ko bas shauk ye pala hai.



oye hoye meri MADHU BALA bahut pyara pyara likha hai...sach meiN SDC par aik se badkar aik shayar hai, Madhu aapne bahut bareeki se pada hai sabko, tabhi to sahi sahi likha hai sabke liye, par maiN to ab likhti hi nahi hu phir bhi meri maujoodgi aapko sakoon deti hai...yeh padkar accha lga.

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wowwwwwwwwwwwwww i am speechless Madhu ji.......... simply superb and mind blowing..... behad gahraai se aapne sabhii doston ke hunar ko bayaan kiyaa hai.... aur meri khushkismatii jo aapne mujh nakaara ko bhi apni khoobsurat ghazal me panaah dii........ main jiske laayaq bhi nahi samjahta khud ko......

duaa hai rab se ke aap accha aur acchaa likhtii rahen, khush rahen salaamat rahen.. likhtiii rahiyegaa.....

Shaad........
Behad shukriya...adna sii koshish ko pasand karne ke liye...
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Madhu jee...

Meri baat rakhne ky liye manoon hooN!

aur waaah .. kia khoobsorat ashaaroN sy ghazal sajaayi hy ...
dilkash o dil-nasheeN...

kisi musawwir ki mussawari ki jhalak hy ...
aap kii khoobsorat rooh ki tasveer hy ....

yeh andaaz-e-bayaaN aap ka dil chu gaya ...
aur kia kahooN..

likhte rahiye..
khush rahiye ..
Shukriyaaaaaa hassan jii is khoobsoorat farmaish liye....sabke bare me apne ehsaas jatane ka mauka roz kahaan milta hai.....apki vajah se ye arzoo bhi poori huyi........

Aapko koshish pasand aayi achcha laga.....
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oye hoye meri MADHU BALA bahut pyara pyara likha hai...sach meiN SDC par aik se badkar aik shayar hai, Madhu aapne bahut bareeki se pada hai sabko, tabhi to sahi sahi likha hai sabke liye, par maiN to ab likhti hi nahi hu phir bhi meri maujoodgi aapko sakoon deti hai...yeh padkar accha lga.

dil se chahti hu ki yeh aapsi pyar har member ka yu hi bana rhe....ameen

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aapko koshish pasand aayi shukriya...aap likhti bhale hee na hon ab ya yoon kahe ki maine hee kam padha hai aapko...par jitna padha hai..apke ehsaas hamesha dil me utarne wale hote hain..aur beshak aapki maujoodgi mujhe bahut sukoon deti hai.....
bas yahi dua hai aap khush raheinn aur aapka sath hame hamesha milta rahe.....

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Madhoo jee

Aik achhii koshish.dil se daad


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mahfil ko madhu ka adaab pahunche...
yoon to sdc me kai umda shayar huye hain par kyon ki main sabko nahi padh saki is baat ka afsos hai mujhe..
par is baat ki khushi hai kuch behtareen shayar aaj bhi yahaan par hain..jjinka sath milne se yakeenan hausla bhi milta raha hai mujhe....
Hassan ji ki farmaish par aap sab ke naam par kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...koi gustakhi ho to mafi ki talabgaar hoon........


Andaaz e bayaan jinka sabse he nirala hai.
Un 'shaad'ki ghazlon se mahfil me ujala hai.

Hai 'mast' ka jadu dilkash hain tarane bhi
Jisne bhi padha dil ko mushkil se sambhala hai.

Ho ishq ki baatein ya koi dard ki ho mahfil
'Hsn' Dil me sama jaye har sher he aala hai.

Kuch aur sama khilta ek vo jo chali aayein
ham sab ke liye 'dii' ne haan vaqt nikala hai.

Jazbaton se bhari ye kavitayein 'aru ji'kii.
Hai inka nasha gahra koi jadu jo kala hai.

Har nazm me muhabbat jo mahkati dilon ko hai.
kya baat ki hairat me 'masti'ne bhi daala hai.

'Hamdam' hai takhallus aur shokhi bhi hai baton me
Ashaar hasiin jaise kamsin si koi bala hai.

Kahte hain 'sagar'ke nagmo me rawani hai.
Jazbaat pirote hain ya moti ki mala hai.

Sab shauk karein poore mumkin he kahaan aisa.
Padhti hai 'madhu' sab ko bas shauk ye pala hai.

Madhu ji, aapki creativity ki daad deta huN.
Bohot baRhiya, sirf ek cheez ko chhod kar: MaiN iss laayaq nahi samajhta khud ko, k itne azeem sho'ra ke saath aaapne mujhe shaamil kiya hai. Aur jiss rawani ki baat aapne kahi hai mere baare meiN, shayad wohi sabse kam paayi jaati hai meri kaavishoN meiN . Khair..

Baaki aapki rachna to kamaal ki hai. Hasb-e-ma'mool, kamaal he kamaal hai. Tah-e-dil se aapko mubaarakbaad.
Likhte rahiye. khush rahiye.

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Madhu ji, aapki creativity ki daad deta huN.
Bohot baRhiya, sirf ek cheez ko chhod kar: MaiN iss laayaq nahi samajhta khud ko, k itne azeem sho'ra ke saath aaapne mujhe shaamil kiya hai. Aur jiss rawani ki baat aapne kahi hai mere baare meiN, shayad wohi sabse kam paayi jaati hai meri kaavishoN meiN . Khair..

Baaki aapki rachna to kamaal ki hai. Hasb-e-ma'mool, kamaal he kamaal hai. Tah-e-dil se aapko mubaarakbaad.
Likhte rahiye. khush rahiye.
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Bohot baRhiya, sirf ek cheez ko chhod kar: MaiN iss laayaq nahi samajhta khud ko, k itne azeem sho'ra ke saath aaapne mujhe shaamil kiya hai. Aur jiss rawani ki baat aapne kahi hai mere baare meiN, shayad wohi sabse kam paayi jaati hai meri kaavishoN meiN . Khair..

Baaki aapki rachna to kamaal ki hai. Hasb-e-ma'mool, kamaal he kamaal hai. Tah-e-dil se aapko mubaarakbaad.
Likhte rahiye. khush rahiye.
Shukriya janaab sagar saheb. jo aapne apna beshkeemiti vaqt meri koshish ko diya...aur aapki kavish ki jafugari se yo mahfil khud hee wakif hai...ye aur baat hai ki aapka badappan hai jo aap aisa nahi mante....

Yoon hee sath banaye reakhein.rakhein....aaate rahein...


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Madhu jee...bahut hee sundar koshish kee hai aapne......

Bhar de nasha apne ehsason se madhu
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bahut bahut shukriya ishq ji....achcha laga aapko koshish pasand aayi....
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Madhu jee...bahut hee sundar koshish kee hai aapne......

Bhar de nasha apne ehsason se madhu
shayri mein milati kya ye haala hai.....
khushi huyi aru ji ki apko koshish pasand aayi...
sher ke liye bahut shukriya...

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