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Sad woh mazaar dhundhti hun... - 20th May 2003, 05:07 PM

aaj phir haazir hain aap sabhi liye ek aur ghazal.meri ghaltiyaan mujhe zarur bataiyega.


Dil ko jala jala kar tera pyaar dhundhti hun,
Bechain zindagi hai karaar dhundhti hun,

Loota mere chaman ko mere hi apno ne,
Lagkar gale khizake mein bahar dhundhti hun,

Kabhi saath saath dono chale the jahan se,
Baki ho shayad kahin woh nishan dhundhti hun,

Saye mein jiske beete the kabhi jo dilkash lamhe,
Yaadon ke safar ki woh khyaal dhundhti hun,

Meri toh zindagi ab bujhti hui shama hai,
Jaha dafan hui meri chahat woh mazaar dhundhti hun.


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Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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WAH - 20th May 2003, 05:35 PM

WAH WAH FARAHANA JI.

BAHOT HI DARD BHARA KALAAM LIKHA HE AAPANE. APANE DIL ME CHHUPE DARD KO AAPANE BILAKUL SAHI TARIKE SE BAYAN KIYA HE. KOI BHI SUN KE KHO JAYEGA MERI TARAH.
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Love thanx - 20th May 2003, 05:43 PM

diwana sahab aapka bahaut shukriya jo apne ise pasand kiya. aise hi mujhe apni raye se waqif rakhiye.


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20th May 2003, 05:58 PM

farhana waah bohot khub bade kariib se gujarii ye baat ap kii ....

Kabhi saath saath dono chale the jahan se,
Baki ho shayad kahin woh nishan dhundhti hun,

Saye mein jiske beete the kabhi jo dilkash lamhe,
Yaadon ke safar ki woh khyaal dhundhti hun,

Meri toh zindagi ab bujhti hui shama hai,
Jaha dafan hui meri chahat woh mazaar dhundhti hun.....
   
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hi - 20th May 2003, 06:10 PM

Dear Ferhana,

mujhe bahoot pasand aapki yah shayri aur likhe bina nahi rah saka. eske her sher mein dard ki chubhan aur bebasi ki chhuvan hai. esi tarah likhate rahiye.


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hi - 20th May 2003, 06:49 PM

hi farhana g
how r u?
bohat hi acha likha hay ne
JAHAN DAFN HUI MERI CHAHAT WOH MIZAR DHONDTI HON
bohat khob andazebiyan hay
or khiyal bhi bohat acaha hay
ab itne kabil to hain nahin
is khobsorat koshish se bhi koi
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waah - 20th May 2003, 09:10 PM

dost farhana,

Kabhi saath saath dono chale the jahan se,
Baki ho shayad kahin woh nishan dhundhti hun,

aisa laga jaise tumhari nazam mere man ka aaina ban gayi ho
   
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gr8 - 20th May 2003, 10:05 PM

Wah Wah farhana ji,
Maja aa gaya kasam se padh ke...
likhte rahiye.
Golabo


Humein kisi se koi gila nahi...
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Love thanx - 21st May 2003, 02:17 PM

sanjooji,
aapka bahaut bahaut shukriya mera likkha pasand karne ke liye.inshallah aise hi likhti rahungi


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Love thanks - 21st May 2003, 02:37 PM

mujhe khushi hui apka reply padhke banjara sahab. apka bahaut shukriya ke apne mujhe kabile tarif samjha


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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thx - 21st May 2003, 02:39 PM

thx akant sahab,
apne meri ghazal ko tareef ke kabil samjha iske liye apki shukarguzaar hun


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thanx - 21st May 2003, 02:40 PM

meenaji,
yeh toh hum sabhi ke dil ka haal hai jo lafzon mein dhalke ke samne aaya hai.khushi hui ke apne meri ghazal pasand ki.


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thx - 21st May 2003, 02:42 PM

gulaboji,
shukriya meri ghazal ko pasand karne ke liye. ummeed karti hun ke aage bhi aap isi tarah mujhe apni raye se waqif karayengi.


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
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Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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Re: woh mazaar dhundhti hun... - 9th April 2006, 11:36 AM

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aaj phir haazir hain aap sabhi liye ek aur ghazal.meri ghaltiyaan mujhe zarur bataiyega.


Dil ko jala jala kar tera pyaar dhundhti hun,
Bechain zindagi hai karaar dhundhti hun,

Loota mere chaman ko mere hi apno ne,
Lagkar gale khizake mein bahar dhundhti hun,

Kabhi saath saath dono chale the jahan se,
Baki ho shayad kahin woh nishan dhundhti hun,

Saye mein jiske beete the kabhi jo dilkash lamhe,
Yaadon ke safar ki woh khyaal dhundhti hun,

Meri toh zindagi ab bujhti hui shama hai,
Jaha dafan hui meri chahat woh mazaar dhundhti hun.
Farhana JI
wah, aapki ghazal kabil e tarif hei. pasand hei muje aapko padna. yuhi liktet rahiyga.

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