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10th December 2012, 03:07 PM
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Ab tou lagta hai jald se jald shuru se ,aapki purani kahaani padhni hi padegi, warna aagay ka khissa samajh me nahi aayega.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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11th December 2012, 11:57 AM
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bahot bahot shukriyaa jo nacheez ki is koshsih me aapki nazar padee... Muddat ke baad yahaan kisii ne dastak dee, to sach maaniye itni khushi ho rahi hai ke bayaaN nahi kiyaa ja saktaa.... Aur yaqeenan main chahunga ke ek baar fir se aap ise waapas padhna shuru kijiye... zaahir si baat hai aap ne saalon pehle ise padhaa hoga to ab to bhuul hi gai hongii... khair padhiyegaa zaroor... aapke feedback ka mujhe intzaar rahegaa.... Shukriyaa tahe dil se..... Shaad.... |
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19th December 2012, 11:42 AM
hmmmmm........Shoaib aaj bahut dino baad es kahani ko pada hai, bahut peeche reh gye thi padne meiN, aaj poora pad liya....yeh sirf kahani hai ya kisi ki asal zindgi ka khulasa hai...muje aik aik baat sacchi lag rhi hai...ya to yeh kahani sacchi hai ya phir aap bahut mahir writer ho...ki har character meiN jaan daal di hai....aage kya hoga intezaar rahega jaldi likho....vaise mukhtaar ki dubara shaadi ho jaani chahiye thi....!!
 .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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19th December 2012, 01:49 PM
sunita dee.. main kya kahun... waise to ye kisi ki sacchikahaaninahi hai.. magar mainitna zaroor jaanta hoon ke aapka itna keh denaa mere liye bahot badee uplabdhi hai... bahot khushi hui aaj apaka reply dekh kar.. ummeed karta hoon ye kahaani bahot jald khatam ho.. aap bhi pray karna.. tc
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19th December 2012, 02:20 PM
Dear bro....jiski bhi yeh kahani hai, ham yehi duaa karte ki jab bhi khatam ho dardnaak end na ho....kyuki dard pahle bahut hai apne paas...ham chahte ki hame yahan se bhi koi baat sunai de, khushi ki baat hi sunai de...vaise ab muje happy ending ki hi umeed hai kyuki Muktiyaar ki zindgi ka dard bhara daur nikal gya hai ab uski bitiya jawaan hai aur jab bacche jawaan hote hai to maa-baap apne dard bhool kar bachhoN ki khushiyoN meiN hi khoye rehte hai...aisa mera maan.na hai
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th December 2012, 03:58 PM
jee.. yahi duaa main bhi karta hoon baaji.. ke itnaa dukh jhelne ke baad Mukhtaar ko ab sukon mil jaae.. warna use taazindgi aur uske baad bhi uupar waale se kai shiqaayaten reh jaaengii..........
saath banaae rakhiye..... shukriyaa.... Shaad... |
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22nd December 2012, 03:58 PM
next episode plsssssssss.........................
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd December 2012, 11:00 PM
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Bahot jald aayegaa..... filhaal thodaa intzaar............... abhi na taaqat bachii hai na aur na hi kuch karne ka dil ho raha hai.... |
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24th December 2012, 02:59 PM
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 haan bhai.. Shamsheer-e- su£emani se fursat mile tab to likhenge story...!!!  Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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24th December 2012, 05:00 PM
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likhenge likhnge zara sabr karo.... ab jaakar to thoda fursat mili hai.....  Shaad... |
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24th December 2012, 08:54 PM
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na na bhai....agar story thode chotte break se chalti rhe to theek hai...agar break jayada ho jaaye to interest kam ho jata hai aur story bhi bhoolne lag jaati hai...so plsssssssssss .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th December 2012, 09:19 PM
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24th December 2012, 09:22 PM
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..........................................good.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th December 2012, 12:03 PM
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hehehe..! Sulemani ka kya kiya shaad ji Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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25th December 2012, 12:19 PM
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25th December 2012, 12:25 PM
ji bilkul intzaar he next episode ka
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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25th December 2012, 12:59 PM
ajee bahot bahot shukriyaaa............................
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10th January 2013, 01:24 PM
KhwaaboN ke Bagheechey meiN, khushboo ka safar dekhaa,
Saaqi jo tujhe humne..................... Be-parda-Nazar Dekha.. ~Shaad~ |
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10th January 2013, 02:20 PM
sirf sher likhne se kaam nahi chalega....next episode post kijiye bhai...!!
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th January 2013, 07:39 PM
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part 29 |
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part 29 -
10th January 2013, 10:59 PM
kehte hain kuch milta hai to kuch khotaa bhi hai.. Imran mamu ki shaadi ke baad jahaaN ek taraf kehkashaan apni pyaari si Mumanii ko ghar lekar aa gayee wahi dusri taraf wo us mehfil me kuch chhod aai thee aur yaqeenan wo uska
dil thaa.. jiske baghair ab uska jeena maano mushkil hi nahi namumkin sa ho gayaa thaa.. Ghar pe nai naveli dulhan ke aane se mehmano ka taanta lagaa hua thaa.. har koi us khoobsurat dulhan ki muh-dikhaai ko bechain ho raha thaa, wahin Imran ko to jaise apne muqaddar pe yaqeen hi nahi hota tha.. saatven aasmaan me udd rahe they janaab aaj kal... Har koi use chhedtaa rehtaa jisme se sabse zyaada kehkashaan hi thi jo apne mamu ko har waqt ye kehtii, "mamujaan.. ab kya kahen aap to naseeb waale hain.. chaand sa humsafar milaa hai aapko.. uff naseeb ho to aap jaisaa ho.. bin maange hi muraad poori ho gayee aapki" itnaa kehte hue wo thandii aahen bharaa kartee, magar Imraan me Allah ne itni aqqal to nahi dii thi ke is jumle ke peeche ka dard aur bekasi wo samjh paate... halaki har waqt patar patar karne waali is shokh ladki ki khamoshi ko ek shaksh zaroor bhaamp gayaa tha jo rishte me uski nai naveli mumaani thee... Idhar kuch din bitaane ke baad kehkashaan waapas apni dadi ke ghar lout aayee, udhar Gulnaar ne poore ghar ko badee zimmedaari se sambhaal liyaa thaa.. har koi uske aa jaane se jitnaa khush thaa aur saath hi khushgawaar wo ghar bhi ho gayaa tha.. beech beech me kehkashaan apne chachu ke saath kabhi kabhi apni nani ke yahaan chalii jaaya kartee thee... Apni Mumani se kaafi betakalluf bhi ho gayee thee wo, magar jo baat uske dil me ghar kar gayee thee. kehkashaan ki kabhi himmaat na huii ke wo Gulnaar se kehtii.. haan kabhi kabhi shaadi ke album palaTte waqt uske haaNth ruk se jaya kaarte they, jab wo shakhs album ke un pages pe aa jaata thaa.... Gulnaar kankhiyon se use dekhtii aur maajra samjhte unhe der na lagee... unhone sawaaldaag diyaa.."Kaisaa lag rahaa hai??" "NigaheN thaam le.. kuch aisaa.." itna jawaab dene ke baad hi kehkashaan ke maano hosh hi udd gaye, kya keh diyaa usne.. "Haaye Allah Mumaani... ye kaisaa sawaal tha" maaare ghabraahat ke uske haanthon me paseene aa gaye.. Mumaani ne fir muskuraate hue kahaa, "Are main to apne lahnge ki baat kar rahi hoon." itna kehte hi wo to haNs padeeN magar kehkashaan ki maano jaan hi halaq me atak gayee... khair baat to kisi ne bhi saaf nahi ki, magar us din ke baad dono ko ye gumaan ho gayaa tha ke ab dono ke seene me ek raaaz pal raha hai jo dono jaanti bhi hain, aur ek doosre se chupaae bhi hain... Nai nai Shaadi ke baad Daawaton ka silsilaa Aam ho jaata hai.. bas isi lihaaz se aaj yaani ke ittwaar ko Imraan aur Gulnaar ki daawat Obaid castle meiN thee... wo dono jaise hi ghar me tashreef laaye, sab khushi se jhoom uthey, "MAsha Allaah tum dono ki joDee khoob jamtii hai.. Allaah bad-nazar se bachaae" itna kehte hue Aamnaa bee dono ki balaaeN lene lageeN aur gulnaar ke maathe ko choom liyaa.. Gulnaar ki nazreN ko apni nai nai saheli yaani ke kehkashaan ko saare ghar me dhund rahi theen, magar wo kahin nazar nahi aa rahi thee.. poochne par maloom huaa ke mohtarmaa apne room me hi band rahaa kartii hain aajkal.. Gulnaar ne rukh kiyaa zeeno ki taraf jo seedha kehkashaan ke room tak jaate hain.. "Ahem ahem... agar mallikaa kehkashaan ke aaraam me khalal na pade to kya kaneez andar aa saktii hai.." darwaaze pe khade hokar gulnaar ne kahaa to kehkashaa bhaagte hue darwaae tak aaai aur badee muhabbat se unhe andar le aai... "Haaye mere Allaah, kya khoob Noor utar aata hai Mumani shaadi ke baad... Allah mere naseeb me bhi ye din dikhaae." itna kehkar usne thandii aahen bharee to Gulnaar hasne lagee aur kehtii hain,"Allaah nai dulhan ki muraaadeN jald poori karta hai, kahiye to kuch shifaarish karoon Allah se.." itnaa sunte hi maare hayaa ke kehkashaan ki gardan jhuktii chalee gayee aur wo mand mand muskuraane lagee... Aisi hi na jaane kitnii mulaaqaaten huin, aur in dono mumani bhanji ki dosti me musalsal izaafa hotaa chalaa gaya...Aur ab waqt wo aane ko hai jiski is baaar to qatai chaahat na thee kehkashaan ko, halaaki Mukhtaar ne yahii sochaa tha ke isi hafte wo rawaana ho leiN magar Aaamna ki zidd ke aage unki ek na chalee aur ek haftaa chuttiyaan aur bhdhaane kaa unhone iraada kar liyaa... Ek din subah se hi kehkashaan nani ke ghar pahoch gayee aur apni mumaani se zidd karne lagii shopping ke liye, ab uski zidd ke aage kaun thahar sakaa hai.. nani ne ijaazat de dii aur idhar jhatt se gulnaar pahoch gayee apne room meiN taiyaar hone.. dono ne saara din khoob shopping ki, aur jab thak haar gaye to dono pahoch gaye "Afghaani" jo wahaan ka kaafi mash'hoor restorent tha.. khaane peene ke saath saath aaj na jane kya huaa ke wo apni mumaani ke saamne khultee chalee gayee... aur har wo baat keh daali jo uske dil me thee.. wajah jo bhi rahi ho, magar wo hargiz nahi chaahti thee ke uski muhabbat yoon hi uske dil me Damm tod de.. Gulnaar ne bhi bas use hauslaa bandhaaya aur kahaa ke Allaah pe bharosa rakhey.. Asal me bandaa khud Gulnaar ka sagaa bhai tha, bhai kya thaa wahi uska baap bhi tha aur Maa bhi... bachpan me hi maa ke guzar jaane ke baad shadeed muhabbat umad aai thee shahzaad ke dil me apni choti bahen Gulnaar ke liye.. aur bade hote hote jab Abba ne bhi unka saath chhodaa to zimmedaariyon me aur bhi izaafa ho gayaa.. is lihaaz se gulnaar unki izzat apne waalid se kamm nahi kiyaa kartee thii.. asal me shahzaad ki umr to hogayee thee shaadi ki magar unka bhi ye faislaa tha ke jab tak apni chotii bahen ke haath peele na kar dein, wo khud bhi shaadi nahi karege.. Gulnaar ne kai baar apne Shehzaad bhai se shaadi ke baare me baat bhi ki magar wo taal gaye... Is baar apni bhanji ka ye haal dekhaa to usse rahaa na gayaa aur usne man hi man thaan liya, "chaahe jo bhi ho is baar Bhai se baat kar ke hi rahungii .. Kehkashaan ki muhabbat paak hai aur mujeh ummeed hai ke Allah uski Muhaabbat kaamyaab karegaa.." jaane ka waqt bhi aa gayaa, zor shor se packing chalu thi ghar me, Aamna ka to bas nahi chal raha thaa warna poora ghar lutaa detii apni masoom si potee par.. achaar, mithaiyaan aur na jaane kya kya khane peene ke samaan pack ho rahe they.. subah se Gulnaar bhi chalee aaye thee apni bhanji ka haath bataane.. aur uski masoom shaqal dekh kar use taras bhi aa raha thaa.. lekin kuch kahaa nahi jaa raha thaa... dono ki aankheN barbas chalak jaaya kartee theeN.. Jahaan ek taraf Gulnaar ko ye baat sharmindah kiye ja rahi thee ke usne ab tak ye baat apne bhai ke kaan tak mein na daal paai.. wahiN kehkashaan butt banee huii thee.. is maamle me aaj chaah kar bhi wo apni mumaani se kuch keh na paa rahi thii... Aisaa lagta tha ke usne sabkuch ab apne Rabb par chhhod diyaa ho.. aur lambe lambe kadam rakhte hue wo nikal padee un raahon par jo uske liye sakht aur bhi sakht hote chaley jaa rahe they.... to be continued........................................ |
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10th January 2013, 11:42 PM
hmmmmmmmmmmmm..........ab aage kya hoga ?????
jaldi post karna next part .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th January 2013, 09:01 AM
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is choto si koshish ke liye aapki itni utsuktaa dekh kar man bhaav vibhor ho gayaa hai.. aati rahen saath detii raheN..... shukriyaaShaad... |
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Part 30 |
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Part 30 -
11th January 2013, 11:02 AM
Dubai waapas aane ke baad jahaan ek taraf Mukhtaar apne hospital ke kaamo me masroof ho gaye wahin doosri taraf HOstel se rukhsat ho kar wo Ghar waapas aaa gayee thee.. Ab kehkashaan ki zindgi ka maqsad ye thaaa ke jis college me usne admission liyaa wahaaN top kare aur apne pairon pe khadi ho kar apne papa ka naam khoob roshan kare...
Allah ke shukar se kaafi zaheen aur nek ladki thi wo, Mukhtaar bhi uski taraf se kaafi befikr they.. unhe bahot Naaz thaa apni betii par aur jis tareeqe se unhone us Bin Maa ki bacchi ki parwarish ki thii wo khud me ik misaaal thii.. Wo har roz college jaya kartii aur ghar aakar saara din padhaai kartee, daadi ke ghar jaane ke baad wo jaisi shokh aur chanchal ho gayee thee, ab wo baat nazar na aati... bas khud ko sara din padhaai aur ghar ke kaamo me masroof rakhtii.. lekin Muhabbat to muhabbat hai, kisi ko bhi ho saktii hai, Kehkashaan ne bhi sab se chupaa ke us paudhe ko apne dil ke itnii andar chupaa liyaa thaa ke chaah kar bhi kisi ko nazar na aa saktaa... College me uski sabse acchi saheli thi MehjabeeN, usi ke saath wo sara din rehtii aur apnii padhaai ke alawa bhi baaki baateN share kartee, aur mehjabeeN bhi bas use itnaa kehtii, "Kehkashaan , kyaa haalat ho gayee hai tumhaari India se aane ke baad, kabhi dekho khud ko aaine me.." to wo kehtii, "kya insaan apne dil ke binaa jee sakta hai.. main to apna Dil wahin chhoD aai hoon." MehjabeeN bhi bechaari kya kartii bas use hauslaa bandhaya kartee.. Isi college me ek lecturer thi Miss Ahmed. yoon to wo kaafi sanjeedaa aur khamosh rehne waali aurat theeN, magar jab se kehkashaan ne is college me admission liyaa thaa, uski sabse favourite miss yahi Miss. Ahmed ban gayee theeN, unki class ko kehkashaan ne kabhi Miss nahi kiyaa, aur pooraa mann lagaa kar unki class me khamosh baith bas taktakee lagaae unhe dekhtii rahtee aur man hi man sochtii, "Kamaal ki personality hai Miss Ahmed ki.. Umr ke 35 ve paaydaan pe hongee magar jo intekhaabe pairhan aur jis andaaz se taiyaar hoteeN hain, jawaan ladkiyaan bhi sharmaa jaaen.. kaash ke meri bhi aisi personality ho jaae.." yahi sab sochaa kartee aur class ke baad mehjabeeN ke saamne unhi ke jaisi acting kartee aur wo dono haste haste lot pot ho jaateeN.. har roz un dono ki guftgoo ka sabab hotaa to bas yahii ke aaaj na jaaane kon sa suit pahen kar aaayengee miss Ahmed.. aaj na jaane kon si belly (shoes) ka colour hogaa... behad mutassir thee dono unsse, aur unke alawaa kai fashionable ladkiyaan to bas unse rashk kiyaa karteen... "HEllo Papa.. aaj shaaam jo jaldi aa jaaiyega hospital se.." kehkashaan ke itnaa kehne par Mukhtar thoda hairaan hote hue pooche. "Kyon betaa , sab kahiriyat to hai na.." "haan papa, sab theek hai bas aap jaldi aa jaaiyegaaa, mujhe shopping karne chalnaa hai.." itna sunte hi mukhtaar hasne lage aur kehne lage, "theek hai betaaa, theek hai aa jaaunga, tum taiyaar rehnaa.." "You are the best papa." itna kehte hi wo ucchal padee aur mukhtaar bhi muskuraate hue phone rakhte hain aur Allah se duaa karte hain ke unki betee ke chehre se ye khushi kabhi saath na chhoDe... Shaam ko Mall pahochne ke baad, jis tareeqe ke kapde wo dekh rahi thi, pasand kar rahi thii, mukhtraar ko thodaa shaq huaa , to poochne lage, "Kya baat hai betee, tum aise kapde kab se lene lagee, tumhaari umr se 10-15 saal badii auraton ke libaas aise hote hain, tum to hamesha fashionable..." beech me tokte hue wo kehne lagee, "Are papa, aap nahi samjhenge, aajkal ka yahi fashion hai, kapdoN me jitnii saadgi ho, utne hi accche lagte hain aur waise bhi Miss ahmed.." itna kehkar wo thoda khamosh huii aur halka sa sharmaai... "Miss Ahmed... kaun Miss ahmed betaa?" Mukhtaar ne pooch hi liyaa... "Koi nahi papa, wo hamaare college me proffesor hain.. mere jaisi kai ladkiyaaN unki deewani haiN, kis andaaz se baaten kiya kartee hain... kya kapde pahentii hain ufff... sadaaqat ki moorat." Mukhtar ko jab maajra samajh me aaya to wo bahot khush hue magar ek naseehat bhi de daali... "Betaa hum kisi ki naqal kar ke us ke jaise dikh to sakte hain, magar uske jaisaa ban na bahot mushkil hai.. insaan ki pehchaan khud uske wwajood se hai.. hame apni pehchaan alag banaani padtii hai, kisi ke jaisaa bannaa sahi hai, magar ek hadd tak.." "Offoo papa, aap bhi naa.. chaliye chhoDiye in sab baaton ko... ab main aapki pasand se ek dress loongi.." itna kehte hue wo log agli dukaaan me badh gaye, aur Mukhtaar ko apni betii ki is nadaani pe badaa pyaar aane lagaa.. kuch mahine yoon hi guzar gaye.. aur 1 mahine ke baaad exam shuru hone waaale they.. isiliye sab zor shor se padhaai me lag gaye, fir chaahe wo students hoN ya fir teachers... Extra classes ke daur chalne lage.. subah se shaam ab kehkashaaN college me rahaa kartee, aur shaam ko ghar aane ke baad apne kamre me band ho jaaaya kartee, padhaai me itnii zyaaada masroof ho gayee ke kai kai din apne papa se bas dinner ke waqt hi mil paati... Mukhtaar bhi use khoob duaaeN dete aur bahot Himmat bandhaate.. Ek shaam ko jaise hi extra class khatam huii, Kehkashaaan aur mehjabeeN lambe lambe kadam badhaate hue campus se baahar ki taraf nikalne lageeN, Miss Ahmed ki class thii, isliye thodaa late ho jaane ka bhi un dono ko koi gham na thaa.. magar haan ab khaayaal tha jaldi jaldi ghar bhaaga jaaye, maghrib ka waqt nikal rata thaa aur raat apnii chaadar failaa rahii thee... Un dono ne dekhaa ke Miss Ahmed ka koi baaahar bike pe intzaaar kar raha thaa.. wo musalsal kadam badhaae us taraf badhi ja rahi theeN... Halka andhera ho jaane ki wajah se un dono ne uski shaqal to na dekhii magar ye zaroor sochii ke jaate jaaate Miss Ahmed ko Allah hafiz keh aayeN.. aur yooN bhi to dono bahaane hi dhundaa karti theen unse baat karne ke... Jaise jaise kehkashaaN miss Ahmed ki taraf badhii chalii ja rahi thii, waise waise uski chaal dheere hoti ja rahi thii, muh khultaa chalaa ja raha thaa, aur jab thodaa paas aa gayee, to us shaksh ka chehraa yoon saaf huaaa ke Kehkashaan ke kadam yaqbayaq rukk gaye.. wo kinaare khisak gayee aur aur gate ke baaju me lage darakht ke neeche baith kar tikk gayee... MehjabeeN ko kuch samajh me na aayaa ke huaa kya hai... wo bas pooche ja rahi thii... "KehkashaaN, kya huaa?? ... aisaa kya dekh liyaa tum ne?? please meri baaton ka jawaab do..?? kyaa huaa tumhe..??" Aur wo bas taktakee lagaae aasmaan ko taaktee raheee, shaayad khudaa ki zaaat pe aaj use pehle se bhi zyaada yaqeen ho gayaa thaaa.... to be continued......................................... .. |
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hmmmmm....majja aa gya padkar...aur jayada accha yeh lga ki bahut jaldi next episode mil gya padne ko...kahani bahuttttttttttttt lambhi karna Shoaiab jaldi khatam nahi honi chahiye muje lag rha hai Ki uska Rajkumar pahunch gya hai dubai meiN....hai na .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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aaj subah subah maine sochaa ke aap sab ko surprise doon.. waise khushi hui ye dekh kar ke aapko ye surprise mil bhi gayaa aur pasand bhi aaya.. waise aapki baat padh kar merii hansii nahi rukk rahi hai dee... hahahahha poocho kyon..???? Arre wo isliye ke kal tak jo aap mujhe kahe kahe thakk jaati theeN ke kahaani jaldi khatam karo, aaj keh rahi haiN ke chqalti rahen do, jaldi khatam na karna..  now thats the biggest compliment for me... thanks alot... waise ab kahaani ke raaz main kya bataauN.. jaise jaise kahanai aage badhti jaaegi, raaz parat dar parat khulte chale jaaenge... Saath banaae rakhiyegaa... shukriyaa.... Shaad... |
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11th January 2013, 04:49 PM
teen (3) din beet gaye they aur kehkashaan ka koi pataa nahi.. College se louTte waqt MehjabeeN ne sochaa "aaj ho na ho main zaroor kehkashaan ke ghar jaaungi, dekhtii hoon maajra kyaa hai."
bas jaise hi class khatam hui MehjabeeN ne cab hire kar ke chal padee apni saheli ki haal khabar jaan'ne... Ghar pahoch ke usne dekhaa ke kehkashaan kitaabOn me muh chupaae baithii hai, "Aadaab... kaisi ho.??" Mehjabeen ko yoon achaanak ghar aate dekh pahle to wo chouk padee magar fir dheere se uthte hue boli.. "Are kuch nahi yaar bas zaraa tabiyat theek nahi lag rahi thee, isliye nahi aa saki college, tum bataao kaisi chal rahi hain classes?" "Are classses to chal hi rahi hain, tum aise achaanak gaayab ho gayee, mujhe to bechaini hone lagee thii, waise Miss. pooch rahi theeN aaj tumhe, keh rahi theen ke sab theek to hai na." Miss ka naam sunte hi ek pal ko uske honthoN pe haNsee tair gayee, magar na jaane kya soch kar kuch hi paloN me wo haNsee kisi soch me tabdeel ho kar reh gayee... KehakshaaN ka ye haal dekh Mehjabeen se rahaa na gayaa, usne keh daala, "tumhe Allah ka vaasta hai KehkashaaN, bataao ki kya baat hai, us din ke baad tumhe kya ho gayaa hai, kya main tumhaari bahen se kamm hoon, kya mujhse bhi chupaaogii.." Asal me Maa ke guzar jaane ke baad agar sabse zyaada kisi se uska lagaaw raha hai to bas Mehjabeen se rahaa hai, use apne dil ki har baat wo bataati aai hai, aaj usne apne gham dil me chupaane ki bahot koshish ki magar wo aaNsuoN ke saath phoot paDe, aur wo use sabkuch bataati chalee gayee.. "Haan MehjabeeN, ye wahi hai.. Allah ye kaisaa imtihaan le raha hai meraa.. Ek to main yahaan loutne ke baad use bhoolne ki lagaathaar koshish kiye jaa rahi hoon, aur jab ke lagbhag kaamyaab hotii Allaah ne use phir mere saamne bhej diyaa hai.. Ab kya hogaa MehjabeeN, aur sabse zyaada gambheer baat to ye ke wo Miss. Ahmed ka kaun hai.. kya rishta hai unka usse..??" usne aage kahaa.. "Yaqeen maano bahen , yahi sab soch soch ke sar phataa jaa raha hai.." aur itna kehkar MEhjabeean ko gale lagaa kar wo phoot phoot kar rone lagee.. Mehjabeen ne sochaa "jo bhi ho Kehkashaan ab tumhara gham ,mera gham hai, aur main tumhaare gham ko khushiyoN me tabdeel kar ke hi saans loongi.." Usne kehkashaaN se vidaa lii aur use kal collge aane ke liye bol gayee.. Kehkashaan ne bhi bas haami bhar dee aur use muskuraa ke Rukhsat kiyaa... Agle din collge chootne ke zaraa pahle MehjabeeN baahar nikal aayee aur jhat pahochi gate ke baahar, us bike sawaar ke paas, "Suniye..!!" Wo ek pal ko idhar udhar dekhne ke baad usse mukhaatib hua "kya, main??" "Jee aap!!" "Farmaaiye, kya kar sakta hoon main aapke liye" "Aap hi janaab Shehzaad hain naa" Wo shaksh ek pal ko chouNk gayaa aur kahaa "Jee Main hi Shehzaad hoon, farmaaiye.." Iske baad Mehjabeen ne use Imran mamu ki shaadi se leke ab tak ka waaqya lagbhag ek saaNs me sunaa dalaa, aur uski taraf is nigaah se dekhe jaa rahi thi maano apni saheli ki muhabbat ki bheekh maang rahi ho.. Uske kuch samajh me hi na aa raha tha ke ye sab ho kaya rahaa hai, shaayad usne tasavvur me bhi na socha hogaa ke koi yahaan uska muntazir hai... Usse kuch kahaa na gayaa, wo mahaz itna hi bol sakaa, "Maaf kijiyegaa, mujhe is muaamle me na to koi maalumaat hai, aur nahi main kuch kehnaa chahungaa.. haan aapki saheli ke liye mujeh behad afsos hai.." Badaa hi sard lahzaa thaa uskaa, Mehjabeen ka cheheraa utar gayaa, usne sochaa bekaar me hi mehnat ki, ise to sach me koi parwaah nahi.... Khair is muaamle me magar usne kehkashaan ko kuch na kahaa, magar usse zidd karne lagee ke ab college aana shuru kare, waise bhi exam ki dates kaafi nazdeek haiN.... Behad ajeeb sa lag raha tha use ab collge, jitni masti wo dono pahle kiyaa kartee theen, ab sab kuch rookha rookha sa ho gaya thaa... wo khamoshi se kitaab me sar daale saraa din nikaal detii.... use ye bhi hosh na rahaa ke pichle 3 din se Miss. Ahmed bhi college nahi aa rahi haiN, aur use is baat ka khayaal tab aaya jab Mehjabeen ne usse ye baat poochi... "Na jaane kya huaa hai Miss ko, kahiN tabiyat wagairah to kharaab nahi.." MehjabeeN ne lunch time pe kehkashaan se kahaa to wo bolee, "Allah kare sab theek ho, unke bina collge maano veeraan sa ho gaya hai.." Mehjabeen ne maze lete hue kahaa, "haan bhai , ab to kahogi hi aap, rishtedaar jo hone waali hain.." itna sunte hi kehkashaan ne apna Tiffin box uspe de maara... aur dono hasne lageen.. dheere dheere collge me ab fir se thodi pur-sukoon ho gayee thee kehkashaan, shaayad iski wajeh bhi yahi thi ke Miss. Ahmed se saamna na honaa.. Agli subah dono jab college pahochiiN, to class me Miss Ahmed daakhil huiN, sabne unhe dekh kar sukoon ki saans li, aur kehkashaan na jaane kyuN nazreN musalsal churaae ja rahi thee.. beech beech me jab uski nazar miss. pe padtee to wo kitaab ko padhaate waqt dheere dheere uski taraf dekh kar muskuraa detiiN, jaise sab samajh gai hon.. wo maare ghabraahat fir kitaabon me sar ghusaa detii... Jaise hi class khatam hui sab baahar nikalne lage to Miss Ahmed ne use aawaaz lagaai.. "Kehkashaan.. LUnch break pe class ke baahar aakar mujhse milo" itna sunte hi uske haath paaoN phool gaye, bas halak se bamushkil itnaa hi nikal sakaa.. "Jee Miss." unke jaane ke baad, kehkashaan ne ghoor kar mehjabeeN ki taraf dekhaa jaise pooch rahi ho, "Kya tumne is baare me miss se ya us shaksh se koi baat kahi" na jaane kaise mehjabeen uske sawaal se waakif ho gayee aur khud hi jawaab de gayee, "Maine kisi se kuch nahi kahaa" magar ekdam se use hansii aa gayee aur usne us din ki guftgoo ke baare me kehkashaan ko sab kuch bataa diyaa.... KehkashaaN ko maano ab kaato to khoon nahi........ to be continued................................. |
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11th January 2013, 07:18 PM
hmmmmmmm....aik din meiN teen episode....thoda thoda break lijiye bhai....aap to 2 din kahani khatam kar dogey.....hame kahani jaldi khatam nahi chahiye
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th January 2013, 07:35 PM
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Waise aap bataaeN filhaal aapko kaisi lag rahi hai kahaani.. kya khayaal aa raha hai ise ab tak padh kar... kahin bore to nahi kar rahi naa... aapke views ka is waqt mujeh intzaar rahegaa... saath banaae rakhieygaa.. shukriyaa Shaad... |
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11th January 2013, 09:21 PM
YooN to Miss. Ahmed ne use akelaa hi bulaaya thaa milne ko magar uski haalat aisii ho rahi thii ke maano jaan hi na bachhi ho, badii himmmat kar ke aur mehjabeeN ko kasam pe kasam dekar apne saath lekar wo pahoch gai college
canteen ke us kone pe jahaaN Miss. Ahmed kisi Novel me khoi hui shayad uska intzaar kar rahi theeN.. "Assalamoalakum Miss.. aapne hame yaad kiyaa thaa" Unhone unki traf muskuraate hue dekhaa aur novel ek taraf rakhte hue dheere se boleeN, "Haan! baitho kehkashaaN, ab bataaao tabiyat kaisi hai." Haal khabar lene ke baad daur wo aa gayaa jiskaa shaayad use Darr bhi tha aur intzaar bhi.. "Tum soch rahi hogii, ke main ye sab kaise jaantii hhoon, aur kyaaa rishta hai mera Shehzaaad se?? to suno, Shehzaad meraa mamuzaad bhai hai, aur jab mehjabeeN ne usse baat ki to bhai seedha mujh se milne aa gayaa aur har wo baaat bataai... gulnaar ki shaadi me to hum aa nahi sake, kyonki India jaaana ab lagbhag namumkin sa ho gayaa hai.. haaN shehzaad bhai kabhi kabhaar aa jaaate hain hum log se milne." Baat aage badhi to ye bhi maloom huaa ke shaayad Shehzaad ab Gulnaar ki shaadi ke baad kaafi mutmaeen hain aur shaadi ke liye kam se kam haami bhar diye hain.. Miss. ne aage kahaa. "Dekho kehkashaaN, jitna main tumhe jaanti hoon, mujhe ummeed hai tum shehzaad bhai ko khush rakkhogii.. bhai chaahte hain ke tum unse milo.. haan magar exams ho jaaane do" kehte hue wo muskura deeN. YE sun kar to maano use apne kaano pe yaqeen na huaa.. wo dil hi dil me Khudaa ko shukraane bhejne lag gayee.. Is sab ke baad kehkashaaN ko itna itminaan ho aaya ke wo padhaaai me aur bhi zyaaada zor shor se bhiD gayee.. exams over ho gaye, aur jis din last exam tha us din vaade ke mutaabik Miss. Ahmed Shehzaad ko lekar aaiN, aur idhar kehkashaan aur MehjabeeN bhi aaye.. Kaafi der tak sab ki baateN hoti raheeN.. aur idhar aankhon hi aankhon me shaayad un dono ne ek dusre ko qubool kar liyaa thaa.. Waqt beet'taa chalaa gayaa, aur idhar mulaaqaton ke silsile bhi badhte chale gaye.. Ab Shehzaad aur kehkashaaN ek doosre ko aur acchi tarah se jaan'ne samajhne lagey.. pyaar wafaaoN ki baateN hone lageeN.. aur wo dono apne aane waali zindgii yaani ke khwaaboN ki duniyaaa ki sair karne lagey... Miss. Ahmed ab kaafi pur sukoon thiiN, un dono ko dekh kar aur is kosshish me theeN ke ab jald se jald in dono ki baat pakki ho jaae... Is beech Shehzaad india bhi gaye aur kareeb mahiina bhar thaharne ke baad waapas bhi aa gaye they.. Aaj exam ka result aane waala thaa.. kehkashaaN kaafi khush thee, subah se hi.. India se aur baaaki dostOn ke calls pe calls aa rahe they use subah se hi.. sab use good luck keh rahe they.. Papa Mukhtar bhi bahot khush they ke aaj bacchi ke result khulne waale they.. unki to yahi tamanna thii ke betii College me aalaa muqaam haasil kare.. Hospital jaate jaate unhone kehkashan se kaha.. "betii, aaj tumhaara result aane wala hai, Allah kare Qaamyabi tumhaare qadam choome" "Jee papa bas duaaon me yaad rakhiyegaa.. Accha agar main 1st aai to mujeh gift me kyaa milegaa.." usne kaha to wo bole.. "jo tum kaho betii.. tumse badh kar kuch nahi hai mere liye" wo majeed itminaan me they... "theek hai papa, main aapse khud keh doongi meri kya chahat hai, ab aap chaliye aapko late ho raha hai." Usne Allah se duaae-taalab kii aur chal padee college ki taraf.. "Aur aaj hamaare saamne is college ki sabse honhaar student hai Miss KehkashaaN Aalam.. Jo pichli baar ki hi tarah is baar bhi apni class me sabse zyaada marks lekar pass huin hain, aur sath hi saath University me top kiyaa hai.." Principal saahab ke is jumle ke kehte hi Kehkashaan khushi se ucchal padee.. sab behad khush they uski qaamyaabi pe aur aage badh chadh kar use mubaarakbaad de rahe they.. Wahin Miss Ahmed aur Shehzaad bhi aaaye uski qaamyabi pe mubaarakbaad dene.. Miss. Ahmed boleeN, "Kyon na Hum aaj hi tumhaare ghar chaleN, is khushi ke mauqe pe agar hum tumhare Maa baap se tumhe maang leN, to unki khushiyon me chaar chaand lag jaaenge.." Wo thodee ghamzadaa hote hue kehne lagee, "Hamaari Ammi nahi hain Miss. wo hame chhod kar chalee gayeeN haiN Allah ke paas." "Ohh i am so sorry KehkashaaN , mujhe pata naahi thaa.." "Koi baat nahi Miss. Mere papa hi mere maa baap dono haiN, mujhe yaqeen hai ke unse milkar aap bahot khush hongii" ye kehte hue wo itraa gayee, aur jhatt se phone utha ke bolee, "Lo hum to papa ko bataana hi bhool gaye.." Miss. Ahmed ne is baar baDe hi pyaar se dekhaa use aur duaaeN dete hue shaam ko ghar aane ka Vaada kar gayeeN.. "PApa aap aaj jaldi ghar aa jaaiye, mujeh aapko kisi se milaana hai.." wo chahekte hue bolii to Mukhtar ne poocha, "Kisse meri betii, kaun hai wo shaksh jis se milwaane ke liye hamaari betii itnii pareshaan hai.." "Offo papa, pareshan nahi hain, asal me aaj shaaM me Miss. Ahmed ghar aa rahi haiN, wo aapse milnaa chahtii hain.." uske itna kehte hi Mukhtaar soch me padd gaye, "Mujhse milne, Miss Ahmed aa rahi haiN?? " "Arre papa aap pareshan na hoN, koi aisi waisi baat nahi, bas wo aapko meri qaamyabi ki mubaarakbaad dena chahti haiN.." "Theek hai betaa unhe bula lo, main aa jaunga ghar jaldi.." wo behad khush they apni betii ki is qaamyabi par.. Shaam ki taiyaari ke liye aaj ghar pe Mehjabeeen bhi aa gayee thi, aur wo daawat ki taiyaari kehkashaan ke saath milkar karwa rahi thii... Mukhtaar samajh to rahe they ke koi khaas baat zaroor hai aur unhe is baat ki pakki maloomaat tab huii jab chupke se unhone MehjabeeN se sara raaZ ugalwaa liyaa.. Ab unki khushi ka koi thikaana na rahaa, wo ban than kar aane waale mehmaan ki raah takne lage... Shaam ke kareeb 8 baje Miss. Ahmed ki Cab unke ghar aa kar rukii, aur Car me se Shehzaad ke saath wo utreeN, KehkashaaN unhe lene baahar tak gayee.. Idhar kehakashaan un dono ko andar ki taraf lekar chalee udhar taxi driver rawaana ho gayaa.. Miss. Ahmed kaafi khush theeN, aur unhone sochaa ke is mubaaraq mauqe pe agar in dono ke rishte ki baat KehkashaaN ke waalid se ki jaae to behtar hoga.. to bas isi baaise-masarrat wo may shehzaad ke inke ghar tashreef le aaiN.. Chaay nashte ke silsile ke baad unohne poocha, "Beta kehkashaaN, aapke Waalid saahab kahiN nazar nahi aa rahe" to wo boli. "Jee Miss, asal me bahot der se wo aapka intzaar kar rahey they, magar hospital me koi emergency aa jane ki wajah se ekdam se jaana padaa.. par aap fikar na karen wo bahot hi jald waapas aa jaaenge." "Accha chalo koi baat nahi, hum to fursat se aaye hain." itna kehte hi thahaakon ki goonj sunaai dee... Idhar gappen chal rahi theeN udhar KehkashaaN ka dil pareshaan huaa jaa rahaa thaa, "Na jaane paapa kahaan faNs gaye, jaldi jaldi me mobile le jaana bhi bhool gaye, Hospital phone karooN to kahiiN disturb na hoeN... " bas yahi sab udheD bun me wo lagi huii thii.. "Aye Allah papa jaldi lout aayeN." yahi duaaeN hi wo maang rahi thi ke achanak se use papa ki gaadi ka horn sunaai diyaa... Khushi se dauDte hue wo darwaaze ki taraf bhaagi, idhar Miss. Ahmed aur Shehzaad ne bhi apni jagah pe zaraa adjust hote hue kapdoN ki kreech baraabar kii... Mukhtaar ke andar aaate hi Shehzaad ne jo unhi ki taraf mukhaatib thaa, pehle salaam arz kiyaa.. aur ab Miss. Ahmed bhi PalteeN, aur jo nazaara dekhaa to gash khaate khaate reh gayeeN... ZubaaN maano jamm gayee, halak me patthar atak gayaa aur badan ka khoon sookh gayaa...... to be Continued......................................... |
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"Papa..aap aa gaye, main aapko inhi se milwaana chaahtii thii, ye hamare college ki professor haiN Miss. Rakshanda Ahmed"
kehkashaan bhagti hui gai aur apne papa se unka tarruf karaane lagee... Mukhtaa ke kadam Zameen par chipak gaye, zubaan se bas itnaa hi nikla, "Rakshi.." do pal ko lamha sahem sa gayaa, waqt thahar sa gayaa, Miss Ahmed ke muh se bhi yahi nikla "Mukhi.. tum??" us ke baad jaise hi unhone hosh sambhaala, itnii tezii se baahar ki taraf bhaagiiN jaise koi tuufaan ... Mukhtaar ke kuch samajh na aayaa, peeche peeche Kehkashaan aur Shehzad bhi bhaage..Wo musalsal rote hue dauDtee chalee jaa rahii theeN aur peeche peeche unhe pukaarte Kehkashaan bhi bhaagi ja rahi thee, ke achaanak se bahot zor se breaks ki aawaaz aai aur ek zordaar takkar ke saath kehkashaaN uchal ke door jaa giri... Ek car se uska badaa hi bhayaanak accident ho gayaa, kehkahaaN behosh... aur yaqaayaq Miss. Ahmed ke paaoN thithak gaye... Afraa tafree ka aalam ho gayaa, Mukhtaar jo butt bane hue khade they, aur unki smajah me bhi na aaya ke pal bhar me kya se kya ho gaya... unko hosh tab aaya jab MEhjabeeN chillatii huii bhaagi "KehkashaaN ka accident ho gaya uncle jaldi chaliye.." Mukhtaar ke saamne phir wahi manzar aa gayaa jo ek baar Farha ke saath ho chuka tha.. Wo is baar apne muqaddar aur khushiyon ko khona nahi chaahte they, ghabraahat ke aalam me fauran kehashaan ke paas pahoche jo ki khoon se latpath thii, use God me uthaa kar hospital ko bhaagne lage.. tabhi Ambulance wahaan pahoch gayee, jise shaayd kisi ne ittelah kar di hogee.. Hospital me use ICU me admit karaaya gayaa.. bahot khoon beh jaane ki wajah se wo lagaatar behosh thii, Doctors ne khoon ka intzaam jaldi karne ko kahaa, Blood bank me khoon nahi milaa, Mukhtaar ka khon match nahi ho raha thaa, tabhi Rakshanda wahaan pahoch gayee aur Doctor se kaha, "Doctor aap meraa khoon le leiN, Mera blood group bhi B+ hai." Mukhtaar se kuch kehte na ban rahaa tha, aaj arse ke bad wo shakhs achaanak se saamne aa gayaa jise wo kabhi bhulaa na paaye they... lekin aaj jab betii is haal me hai to unhe Aulaad ki fikar sabse zyaada thii.. shaayd ke bacchoN ki muhabbat sabse upar hoti hai bajaae kisi aur rishte ke.. Sahi khoon mil jane se ab uski haalat me sudhaar aana shuru hi gayaa... 2,3 din to Mukhtaar aur Rakshi khamoish rahe, magar lagaataar in dono ke hosopital me maujood rahene se ab baatcheet ka silsilaa shuru ho hi gayaa aakhir.. Dono me se kisi ne bhi apne maazi ki baat na karee, bas guftgoo ka sabab sirf aur sirf kehkashaaN thii.. Betii is haal me dekh kai baar Mukhtaar ki aankhoN se Aansu kai baar saare baandh toD kar nikal jaaya karte tab Rakshi unhe hauslaa detii, "Kuch nahi hogaa kehkashaaN ko Mukhtar, Allah pe bharosaa rakho." Mukhtaar kehte, "Merii betii mujhe merii jaan se bhi pyaari hai Rakshi, agar ise kuch ho gayaa, to main bhi apni Zindgee khatam kar doonga.." Rakshi uske muh pe haath rakh kar kehti hai, "Allahh na kare Mukhtaar, tum aisi baateN na karo, aur apne ko sambhaalo." Agle din subah subah jab Docter Inspection ke baad nikle, tab Muskurate hue mukhtaar ke paas aaye aur bole, "Ab ghabrane ki koi baat nahi Doctor Mukhtaar, aapki betii ab khatre se baahar hai.." "Allah teraa laakh laakh shukr hai.." ye khete hue unhone Doctor ko gale lagaa liyaa.. Rakshi ke bhi ab jaan me jaan aai.. usne Mukhtaar ki taraf dekhaa to Mukhtaar ke chehre pe muskuraahat ki lakeer khiNch gayee thee.. Dopahar ko Rakshi ne kahaa, "Mukhtaar, kai dino se tumne na dhang se kuch khaaya hai na piyaa hai.. ab Allah ke shukar se Kehkashaan bhi theek hai , chalo kuch khaa kar aate hain." to usne kahaa, "Nahi Rakshi tum jaao , mujhe bhookh nahi hai.." Rakshi ke bahot manaane ke baad aakhir Mukhtaar ko raazi hona hi padaa , wo dono chal pade Hospital canteen ki taraf.. Canteen me dono ne khaana khaate hue, jitni bhi baaten thi sab ek doosre ke saath share kareeN, Mukhtaar ne use bataaya ke kaise shaadi ke baad Farha dubai aayee... kaise uska road accident me intqaal huaa, kis tarah se usne kehkashaaN ko paala hai, uski baat sun kar Rakshi ki aankh bhar aai.. usne Mukhtaar ke haath par apne haath rakh diye.. Mukhtaar ne poocha, "Rakshi tumne apne baare me kuch nahi bataaya, yahaan kaise, tumhaare bacche kahaan hain, shauhar kyaa karte hain.." aise hi na jaane kitne hi sawaal usne poocha to kuch pal khamosh rehne ke baad Rakshi ne kahaa, "Humne shaadi nahi ki hai Mukhtaar.." "Kyaa.." Mukhtaar ko zordaar jhatkaa lagaa.... "Haan Mukhi , humne shaadi nahi ki hai, Jis muhabbat ko bade armaano se paala thaa, jab wo hi nakaam ho gayee, to hum mummy ke saath dubai aa gaye, yahaan papa ke business ko chalaane ki bahot koshish ki magar mandi ke haalat me use bachaa nahi sake, aur nateejtan business doob gaya.. aur maine college me padhaana shuru kar diyaa.. Ammi ke laakh zidd karne ke baavjood bhi maine shaadi nahi ki, bas unhe akele is haal me chhodaa nahi jaata thaa, ya sach kahuN to tumhaare baad kisi pe aetbaar hi na rahaa" Mukhtaar khamoshi se saari baat sunta rahaa.. Aur nazreN jhukaae jaise apne gunaahoN ki maafii maangta rahaa... Usne aage kahaa... " Qamar mamu ke intqaal ke baad shehzaad ka hamaare sivaa koi nahi thaa, aur us par jawaan bahen ki zimmedaari, mujhe usi se maloom padaa ke kehkashaan ke mamu se Gulnaar ki shaadi hui hai, chooNki hum India jaa nahi paaye, warna kafipehle maloom ho jaata ke kehkashaan tumhaari aulad hai Mukhtaar...." "Aur ek baat kahun agar tum yaqeen karo to.." usne poocha "Kaho Rakshi kaho, aaj tumhe apni sari baateN keh dene ka haq hai.." mukhtaar ne thandi aahen bharte hue Rakshi ko ijaazat dee.. "Mujhe kehkashaaN se shuru se hi ajeeb sa lagaaw rahaa hai, na jaane kyuN magar use dekh kar yahi lagtaa tha ke itni pyaari bacchi hai, kaash ke agar meri shaadi hui hoti to aaj merii betii hubahoo us jaisi hotii.." kuch pal khamosh rehkar wo fir bolii, "Shaayad ke isme tumhaara khoon tha, aur muhabbat ne khoon pehchaan liya ho.. Aur jab se mujhe KehkashaaN ki muhabbat ki khabar huii, maine Thaan liya ke kem se kam iski muhabbat main poori karoongi aur apne shehzaad bhai ka rishtaa maangne hi tumhaare Ghar aai thee.." Mukhtaar uski taraf dekh kar poochte hain, "to ab kyaa iraada hai tumhaara Rakshi..?" Rakshi ne jawaab diyaa, "Mukhi chache kuch bhi ho magar wo dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hain, aur sach kahun to kehkashaan ko dekh kar mujhe mere bachpan ke din yaad aate hain... aur waise bhi mukhtaar jo mere saath huaa hai main nahi chaahti ke uske saath bhi ho.. main nahi chaahti ke uski muhabbat bhi adhuri reh jaaye..." Kuch pal ki khamoshi me dono doobe rahe, tabhi Mukhtaar ki aawaz goonji, "Shaayad Allah ko manzoor nahi thaa ke hamaari muhabbat adhuri reh jaaye" "Kya matlab hai tumhaara Mukhi.." wo bhadak uthhi.. "Rakshi main yahi kehna chahta hoon ke jo kuch bhi ho chukaa hai aur jo ab ho raha hai usse yahi lagtaa hai ke Allah ne hame waapas milaaya hai..." Mukhtaar ko beech me hi toktii huii wo bolee... "Khuda ke liye Mukhtaar, ab aisi baateN na karo, jin yaadoN ki kabrgaah main bahot pehle bana ai hoon , mujhe majboor na karo use kuredne ke liye... aur tumhe khudaa ka waasta hai jo tumne ab ye baat kahi.." Wo dandanaati huii hospital ki taraf chal padee.. Ab kehkashaaN kaafi behtar ho gayee thee aur ab usse milne ki ijaazat Doctor ne Mukhtar ko de di thi.. "Ab kaisi ho betii, dekho tumhaari Miss. Ahmed aur Shehzaad bhi aaye hain tumse milne." Mukhtaar uske saamne aaye to khud ko rok na paaye... aur aage kahe.. "Aur betii jaisaa ke meraa tumse vaada thaa, tumhaari har chahat main poori karunga, aaj main shehzaad ko tumhaare liye haan kehta hoon.. Mujhe shehzaad pasand hai.." Ye sunkar KehkashaaN ne papa ka haath bade pyaar se thaam liyaa, aur saath ki Miss Ahmed ki tarf bhi haath badhaa dee.. Miss ahmed ne bade pyar se uske haath pakde aur uska maatha choom liyaa aur kahaa, "Mubaarak ho meri bacchi.. ab to khush ho na.." Tabhi achaanak KehkashaaN ne Mukhtaar aur Rakshi ka haath ek doosre ke haathoN me de diyaa ye kehte hue, "Haan ab jaakar khush hui hoon main, Mummy" Rakshi ki aankhon se aansuu chalak pade.. kehkashaan ne aage kahaa, "Kuch saalon pehle mujhe mummy ki ek diary mili thi jisme ye zikr tha ke shaadi ke pahle papa kisi ko chahte they, magar unki shaadi mumy se ho gayee.. main us baat ko bhool gayee thee, magar jab us din aapke aur papa ke muh se ek dusre ke naam sune to mujhe yaqeen ho gayaa aap wahi ho... aaj agar aap meri pitaai bhi kar do Miss. Ahmed to bhi main aapse ek baat poochna chahungii.. Kyaa aap merii mummy banengii?? Please Miss. meri aakhri tamanna samjh ke qubool kar lijiye.." Musalsal rote rote Rakshi ne kahaa, "Haan meri bacchi haan, main banungii tumhaari Mummy, lekin ab galtee se bhi ise aakhri tamanna na kehna.. jee bhar ke apnii mummy pe ab huqum chalaana.." Uff kya nazaara thaa, jise Mehjabeen aur Shehzaad darwaaze pe khade hokar dekh rahe they, aur yaqenan un dono ki aankhoN me bhi paani bhar aaya thaa.. Aaj asal maayne me khushiyaaN mukhtaar ki zindgee me waapas aai theeN.. Aaj zindgi bhar ke dukh jhelne ke baad uske naseeb me kabhi na jane waali khushiyaan aa gai theeN.. aur yaqeenan aaj do do kahaaniyaaN poori hui theeN... Sach, kuch rishte aise hote hain, jinhe hum chaah kar bhi koi naam nahi de paate.. aur wo rishte hote hain Dil se dil ke rishte.. muhabbat ke rishte... unhi ristoN ko Benaam rishta kahaa jaata hai... aur aise Benaam RishtoN ko meraa laakh laakh salaam.... This is not an End........ this is just a Beginning...... Happy Reading |
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12th January 2013, 09:28 PM
Shaoaib.......bahut bahut bahutttttttttt acchi kahani thi....sach kahuN to muje esko kahani kehte hue ajeeb sa lag rha hai...muje yeh kahani nahi lagti muje lagta hai jaise mere aas-paas hi kisi ki baat hai....en BENAAM RISHTON ko naam dene ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
aur haaN, muje lagta tha ki Mukhi aur Miss Ahmad ki shaadi ho jayegi end meiN par yeh na soch paaye ki Miss Ahmad Mukhi ka khoya pyar "Raksi" hongi. dil se mubarakbaad kabool karo bhai....bahut accha likha tumne... reps +++ add vry sorry...reps nahi de paa rhi....par aap meri taarf se reps kabool karo dil de rhi hu...jaroori nahi ki points add hone hi chahiye...dil bhi koi cheez hai bhai :-) .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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13th January 2013, 02:01 AM
Masha Allah bohat khoobsurat kahaani hai Shaad sahab...
saare hi Chapters interesting haiN...waise kahaaniyoN ka shauq nahi mujhe lekin aapki kahaani padhna shuru kiya tou khatm hone tak dam na liya maine... Bohat hi acchi tarah se har character ko depict kiya hai aapne ...padhte padhte kab story me involve ho gayi pata hi nahi chala... Mujhe siraj sahab per ghussa aa raha hai...jaate jaate unhone jo bacchon ki shadi ki baat ki kaash unko andaza hota...usse kitne logoN ki zindegiyoN me toofan aane waala hai.. Obaid sahab, Aamna bee, Muqtar agar sab milkar koi hal nikalte tou zarur surate haal kuch aur hoti.... In sab ke beech rakshi per jo guzri hogi ...uska tou andaza hi nahi lagaya jaa sakta...aakhri chapter padhte padhte tou meri bhi aakhoN me aansoo aa gaye.. But anyways all is well that ends well.. Aapki agli kahaani ka intezaar rahega... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th January 2013, 09:22 AM
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Zainy saahiba.. awwal to nacheez ka salaam arz ho.. baad salaam ke ye kehanaa chahungaa ke behad masarrat ka sabab huaa hai aapka jawaabi khat dekh kar.. Yoon to ye kahaani badii sada si thii.. lekin aap, aur sunita dee jaise readers ne ise aam se khaas banaa di hai.. aap sab ka saath aur pyaar miltaa rahaa to inshaa Allah bahot jald nai kahaani shuru karunga.. Aur aapke views ki main qadr kartaa hoon.. aapki kahi gai ek ek baat sau fee sadi sach hain.. ,magar jab kuch un expected hota hai to hi wo kahaani bantii hai... mujhe khushi ho rahi hai ye dekhkar ke bilaakhir aapne apni masroof zindgii se waqt nikaala aur is ko padhaa.... bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka zainy ... yuNhi duaaoN me yaad rakkheN.. shukriyaa Shaad... |
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baraae-karam Mehrbaani Sunita dee................ bahot khushi huii ye dekh kar ke aapne aakhir kahaani ko khatam kar hi di... aapke sujahaav aur aapke expectation mujhe bahot acche lage.. Aur rahi baat reps ki.. to dee main bataa doon ke aapka aana hi mere liye sabse badaa rep point hai.... duaaon se nawaazti rahen... aati rahen.. hauslaa badhaati rahen .. shukriyaa.. Shaad.... |
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wah....inaa saara likh diya.....! :O Hum jra idhar udhar kya huee....yahan to tufaan laa diya shamsheer_sulemaani ne
ab padhne me maja aayega... padh ke batate he kaisi lagi storry ...! Abhi ke liye No comment Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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wah....inaa saara likh diya.....! :O Hum jra idhar udhar kya huee....yahan to tufaan laa diya shamsheer_sulemaani ne
ab padhne me maja aayega... padh ke batate he kaisi lagi storry ...! Abhi ke liye No comment Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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Hame intzaar rahega aapke kahaani padhne ka.. aur ummeed karte hain aapko pasand aaye... shukriyaa. Shaad... |
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14th January 2013, 04:42 PM
Shaad bhai aadaab,
miyaaN yeh kis kaam par lagaa diya aapne! waqt to pehle hi nahiiN hota aur ab yeh kahaani aapne aisi raqm ki hai ke shuru kar chuka huuN aur ab chain paRne ke aasaar kam hi nazar aa rahe haiN! chaliye pehle padh li jaaye (qishtoN meiN) phir aapse dua-salaam hogi rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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14th January 2013, 04:47 PM
hahahhaahha... now thats a good news.....
it was not even expected that you guys will come to my ghareebkhana (story) and specially u maikash saahab.... bahot khushi hui aaj ye jumlaa aapke muh se sunkar... main to bas yuNhi shouqiyaa likh rahaa thaa. aur sach kahun to jab aap log tashreef laane lage hain to ab lagtaa hai ke likhne ki keemat wasool ho rahi hai... Masha Allahh tahe dil se aapka istaqbaal karte hain Maikash saahab... do keep read this thread i hope u will like this.... Aisaa mujhe bahot se members ne bhi bataaya hai that it is interesting.. take care bro.... Shaad... |
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