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jeete jii poochhaa na kisii ne, marne par ye haal huaa
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jeete jii poochhaa na kisii ne, marne par ye haal huaa
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jeete jii poochhaa na kisii ne, marne par ye haal huaa
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is daur me.n jiinaa mushkil hai ai 'Ashk' ko_ii aasaa.N nahii.n
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is daur me.n jiinaa mushkil hai ai 'Ashk' ko_ii aasaa.N nahii.n
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hashr me lutf ho jab un se ho do-do baaten
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hashr me lutf ho jab un se ho do-do baaten
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dekh kar aaeena, bole ye saNwarne wale
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jo bhi dekhega tujhe,bus dekhta rah jayega


mastii bhii taqaddus bhii ek saath chale dono.n
ik simt ho maiKhaanaa ik simt shivaalaa ho
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ik taraf yaad teri ek taraf paimana hoga
kis tarah maine bata khud ko sambhala hoga
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ik taraf yaad teri ek taraf paimana hoga
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aa jaao aur bhii zaraa nazadiik jaan-e-man
tum ko qariib paake bahut Khush hai zindagii

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bohat mazedaar jawaab diya hai aap ne.. mazaa aa gaya paDh kar....
jawaab kii pasaNdagii ke liye shukr_guzaar hooN ''Mayank'' jii.....

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tark-e-muhabbat karne vaalo kaun aisaa jag jiit liyaa
ishq ke pahle ke din socho kaun baRhaa sukh hotaa thaa


"na kar badnaam tu mohabat ko, kush rehna tuje aata hi nahii,
ab bhi tu har pal rota hai, phele bhi aaheN hi bhar.ta rehta tha"

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"na kar badnaam tu mohabat ko, kush rehna tuje aata hi nahii,
ab bhi tu har pal rota hai, phele bhi aaheN hi bhar.ta rehta tha"
''Sunita'' jii ye sher mere khayaal se bahar meN nahiiN hai...Khair...


nahaq ham majbooroN par, tuhmat hai muKhtaari kii
jo chaaho so aap karo ho, ham ko abas badnaam kiya

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''Sunita'' jii ye sher mere khayaal se bahar meN nahiiN hai...Khair...


nahaq ham majbooroN par, tuhmat hai muKhtaari kii
jo chaaho so aap karo ho, ham ko abas badnaam kiya

merii tabaahii meraa muqaddar
aap pe kuchh ilzaam nahii.n hai

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karte hai.n har lamhaa badnaam hame woh
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ham taalib-e-shohrat haiN hameiN naNg se kya aar?
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meri qismat ki mai is daur me badnaam hu varna
wafaadaari thi shart-e-aadamiyat is se pahle bhi


"main jard patte ki maanid toot kar rah gaya,
wo waffa nibha na saka muje hi bewaffa kah gaya"

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"main jard patte ki maanid toot kar rah gaya,
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bil aaKhir thak haar ke yaaro, ham ne bhii tasliim kiya
apnii zaat se ishq hai sachchaa, baaqii sab afsaane haiN

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Sher ka jawab sher meiN deejiye..

DostoN,


ham apni is Anjuman main ek or thread ka izafa karte haiN ess main aap ko ashar hi likhne haiN or agle member ko us sher ke jawab main koi sher meiN likhna hoo ga theek hai ?

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kaise kahun k wo mujhse door hai.
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wo to meri rooh mei hai iskadar smaya
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UNHE KHABAR NHI SHAYAD.......


UNHE KHABAR NHI KI KIS KADAR HUM UNHE CHAHTE HAIN...
DIL K KARIB HAIN UNKE PAR UNHE DOOR NAZAR ATE HAIN......

KHUD HI HME WO BHULATE HAIN
AUR FIR BOOLKAR HME YAAD RAKHNA JATATE HAIN.....

HUMNE UNHE KHO DIYA PAR KOI GUM NHI
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HME PTA NAA THA WO KISI AUR K HO JAYENGE
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PAR AAJ HUM UNKE BIN REH NHI PATE HAIN....
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UNKI YAAD ME HUM PAL PAL MARTE HAIN...
UNHE KHABAR NHI SHAYAD HUM UNHE KIS KADAR PYAAR KARTE HAIN
PYAAR KARTE HAIN......... PYAR KARTE HAIN..............
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jo ye sach hai to phir ai ishq tera kaam kya hoga?
Kitna be-bas aur lachaar ho gaya hai ISHQ mein HSN.....!
Woh agar pukaray zindagi ko maut aur maut ko zindagi to pukar lete hain hum bhi

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Kitna be-bas aur lachaar ho gaya hai ISHQ mein HSN.....!
Woh agar pukaray zindagi ko maut aur maut ko zindagi to pukar lete hain hum bhi
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Ishq ko bebasi aur lachari ka naam na dey
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Aashiq ki naakami, ISHQ ki naakmi hoti hai abid miyan,
Aashiq ki ruswai, ISHQ ki ruswayi hoti hai abid miyan,
Aashiq ka kia kasoor jab koi is qadar bewafa ho jaye,
Yeh baat hai samjhne ki ab samjh bhi jao abid miyan.... :P

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Yeh baat hai samjhne ki ab samjh bhi jao abid miyan.... :P

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Hassan bhai, ye sher apne mere liye lika hai ya apne liye ye to ap jane per muze ek baat sidhi pata chal rai hai ki ap ki kashti ishq ke talatum me doob gai hai

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maiN kya karooNga agar ishq meN hua nakaam?
mujhe to aur ko_ii kaam bhii nahiiN aataa

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Dhondh raha hai woh mujhe bhool jane ka tareeqa FARAZ,
Sochta hon khafa ho kar us ki mushkil aasaan kar donh...

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Sochta hon khafa ho kar us ki mushkil aasaan kar donh...
Subhan allah Faraz sab ki baat hi nirali hai..

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Subhan allah Faraz sab ki baat hi nirali hai..

Kabhi sochu kyun na chahun main tujhe
Bhool kar jo bhoola na paun main tujhe

itanaa naa muz se too pyaar badhaa, ke main yek baadal aawaaraa
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