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Tu ho samne to waqt thehar jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Kaash mere wajud me tu utar jaaye
Zindagi tujhe dekhte dekhte gujar jaaye
Tera har bol mera dil gungunaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Chahti hu tujhe apni jaan se bhi jyaada
Pujti hu tujhe bhagwaan se bhi jyaada
Tere roop me mujhe rab mil jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Geet chedti hawa kuch kehne lagi
kyun tere khayaalo me behne lagi
Tere aagosh me hi chain mujhe aata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Har ek surat tujh si jaan pdd-ti hai
Tere khayalo me ab raat kyu kat-ti hai
Tere siwa ab mujhe kaha koi bhaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

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Tu ho samne to waqt thehar jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Kaash mere wajud me tu utar jaaye
Zindagi tujhe dekhte dekhte gujar jaaye
Tera har bol mera dil gungunaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Chahti hu tujhe apni jaan se bhi jyaada
Pujti hu tujhe bhagwaan se bhi jyaada
Tere roop me mujhe rab mil jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Geet chedti hawa kuch kehne lagi
kyun tere khayaalo me behne lagi
Tere aagosh me hi chain mujhe aata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Har ek surat tujh si jaan pdd-ti hai
Tere khayalo me ab raat kyu kat-ti hai
Tere siwa ab mujhe kaha koi bhaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai
Kavita....waise to sab badiya hai...par wo raat ko jagne wali baat...hahhahah
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Tu ho samne to waqt thehar jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Kaash mere wajud me tu utar jaaye
Zindagi tujhe dekhte dekhte gujar jaaye
Tera har bol mera dil gungunaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Chahti hu tujhe apni jaan se bhi jyaada
Pujti hu tujhe bhagwaan se bhi jyaada
Tere roop me mujhe rab mil jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Geet chedti hawa kuch kehne lagi
kyun tere khayaalo me behne lagi
Tere aagosh me hi chain mujhe aata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Har ek surat tujh si jaan pdd-ti hai
Tere khayalo me ab raat kyu kat-ti hai
Tere siwa ab mujhe kaha koi bhaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai
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18th September 2010, 11:41 AM
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namaste!

rachanaa achChhi rahii.n! yeh ehsaas mujhe bahot hi pasand aaye.n!
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Very Impressive Kavita jee..........very Impressive.........bas ek choti si guzarish hai............aap agar aisa kuch likhe to use fauran post na kare.......use gungunaye use mehsoos kare use aur polish kare thodi bohat editing ke baad jab aap poori tarah se satisfy ho jaye tab post kare, it was just a small tip............nothing against this work of yours.

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18th September 2010, 02:28 PM
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Tu ho samne to waqt thehar jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Kaash mere wajud me tu utar jaaye
Zindagi tujhe dekhte dekhte gujar jaaye
Tera har bol mera dil gungunaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Chahti hu tujhe apni jaan se bhi jyaada
Pujti hu tujhe bhagwaan se bhi jyaada
Tere roop me mujhe rab mil jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Geet chedti hawa kuch kehne lagi
kyun tere khayaalo me behne lagi
Tere aagosh me hi chain mujhe aata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Har ek surat tujh si jaan pdd-ti hai
Tere khayalo me ab raat kyu kat-ti hai
Tere siwa ab mujhe kaha koi bhaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Bahut khoobsurat ehsaason se Nazm ko sajaayaa hai ... kavita Ji aapne ...

Dil ko Chhuuti Sabhi Panktiya...padhkar accha laga....dil se daad hazir hai...
aisie likhti rahen aage bhi... khush rahen....

duaaon ke saath....



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kya baat hai kavita jee..........bahut hee badiya shayri hai .......khaastaur se ye lines mujhe bahut acchi lageein
Kaash mere wajud me tu utar jaaye
Zindagi tujhe dekhte dekhte gujar jaaye
Tera har bol mera dil gungunaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Chahti hu tujhe apni jaan se bhi jyaada
Pujti hu tujhe bhagwaan se bhi jyaada
Tere roop me mujhe rab mil jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai


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Tu ho samne to waqt thehar jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Kaash mere wajud me tu utar jaaye
Zindagi tujhe dekhte dekhte gujar jaaye
Tera har bol mera dil gungunaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Chahti hu tujhe apni jaan se bhi jyaada
Pujti hu tujhe bhagwaan se bhi jyaada
Tere roop me mujhe rab mil jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Geet chedti hawa kuch kehne lagi
kyun tere khayaalo me behne lagi
Tere aagosh me hi chain mujhe aata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Har ek surat tujh si jaan pdd-ti hai
Tere khayalo me ab raat kyu kat-ti hai
Tere siwa ab mujhe kaha koi bhaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

kavita jee
radhe radhe

bahut khoob....dil se daad aise hi likhti rahen

Kaash mere wajud me tu utar jaaye
Zindagi tujhe dekhte dekhte gujar jaaye
Tera har bol mera dil gungunaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

duaon ke saath

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badi sohni mithi jehi kavitaa likhi hai....

daad ke saath reps bhi de raha huN

Vikas ji,

Aapda bhot bhot dhanwaad ji.....!!!! tuhade daad te reps dil to qubool hai ji......!!!

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kavita jee:

namaste!

rachanaa achChhi rahii.n! yeh ehsaas mujhe bahot hi pasand aaye.n!

liKhate rahe.n aage bhee..dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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Good one kavita ji,..bohat pasand aayi mujhe aapki kavita.........



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Very Impressive Kavita jee..........very Impressive.........bas ek choti si guzarish hai............aap agar aisa kuch likhe to use fauran post na kare.......use gungunaye use mehsoos kare use aur polish kare thodi bohat editing ke baad jab aap poori tarah se satisfy ho jaye tab post kare, it was just a small tip............nothing against this work of yours.

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Bahut khoobsurat ehsaason se Nazm ko sajaayaa hai ... kavita Ji aapne ...

Dil ko Chhuuti Sabhi Panktiya...padhkar accha laga....dil se daad hazir hai...
aisie likhti rahen aage bhi... khush rahen....

duaaon ke saath....
Naresh Ji,
Aapka teh dil se dhanyawaad jo aapko meri ye choti si koshish pasand aai....!!!! aapki daad dil se qubool hai....!!! Apna sath banaaye rakhiyega....!!!

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A very cute creation, Kavita Ji...! Sincere compliments...!

Keep it up and take care, ok...?

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kya baat hai kavita jee..........bahut hee badiya shayri hai .......khaastaur se ye lines mujhe bahut acchi lageein
Kaash mere wajud me tu utar jaaye
Zindagi tujhe dekhte dekhte gujar jaaye
Tera har bol mera dil gungunaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Chahti hu tujhe apni jaan se bhi jyaada
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Tere roop me mujhe rab mil jaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

Meri kosish ko pasand karne aur sarahaane ka bahut bahut shukriya Arvind ji,.....!!!!

Khush Rahien....!!!

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kavita jee
radhe radhe

bahut khoob....dil se daad aise hi likhti rahen

Kaash mere wajud me tu utar jaaye
Zindagi tujhe dekhte dekhte gujar jaaye
Tera har bol mera dil gungunaata hai
Dekhti hu aaina aur tu nazar aata hai

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Ishq ji,
Radhe Radhe.....!!!
Bilkul aise hi likhte rahenge Ishq ji,,, aapka bahut bahut shukriya......!!!

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Good one kavita ji,..bohat pasand aayi mujhe aapki kavita.........

meri koshish ko padhne aur pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Zainy Ji............

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Kavita....waise to sab badiya hai...par wo raat ko jagne wali baat...hahhahah
SMS ban karo, kavita so nahi pati hai

Bahut hi accha likha hai tumne, sach mein tum mujhe har baar sochne par mazboor kar deti ho, aur main kahta bhi hoon k "tu meri jaan le kar rahegi"....
bas ek kami hai isme isse itni berukhi se kyun pesh kiya gaya hai....kuch likhna chahiye tha iske sandharbh mein pehle, mera matlab kuch lines... likhne ki wazah kya hai, aur kiske liye likha hai

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Shukriya jo tumhe kavita ki kavita pasand aai.............. Aur tumne aaj tap tap taaliyaan bhi nahi bjaai... Aur rahi baat iske sandarbh me likhne ki to ye keval khayaali pulaav hai agli baar sandarbh me likh kar hi pesh karungi apni koi bhi nazam..........


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Aur rahi baat iske sandarbh me likhne ki to ye keval khayaali pulaav hai
Kavita...pulaav jal rahe hain...aanch kam karo jara

Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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Kavita...pulaav jal rahe hain...aanch kam karo jara

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Ohh.... Pulaav jal gya.... Dekha nahi maine....!!! Acha hua bta diya.... !!! Aage se khayaali pulaav bnaane band....

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A very cute creation, Kavita Ji...! Sincere compliments...!

Keep it up and take care, ok...?

With blessings
Hem Your Blessings with thankfulness so they don't unravel...!!!

God Bless You.....!!!

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