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itne haiN sadme ke jheley dil se jaate hi nahiiN - 21st February 2002, 07:30 PM

salaam dosto

ek arsaa ho gaya mehfil meiN haaziri lagvaaye.....ek taaza ghazal le ke haazir huaa huuN....mulaiiza kijiye

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itne haiN sadme ke jheley dil se jaaTe hii nahiiN
raNg haiN itne ki naqshey meiN samaaTe hii nahiiN

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kyaa hai saaqi ? jaam tere kaam aate hii nahiiN
hosh haiN qaayam hamaare laRkhRaaTe hii nahiiN

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vo bhi din the jab siTam pe voh siTam karte rahe
haaye ree qismaT !! ke ab to aazmaaTe hii nahiiN

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aek din chaahaT tumhaari kabar takk le jaayegi
bekhabar the hum vagarnaa dil lagaaTe hii nahiiN

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ab naa kaaNpegii hamaarii rooh hawaa ke khauf se
khiRkiyoN meN ab to deepak hum jalaaTe hii nahiiN

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naa bulaave bhej tuu "maikash" hamaare naam ke
ab tere aNdaaz , apney "jee" ko bhaaTe hii nahiiN


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bahut achche! - 8th May 2002, 08:19 PM

namaste maikash-jee, - nice one - is shayri.com ke mehfil mein humara pehla post aapki ghazal ke naam likh rahe hai! - hume kaafi pasand aayi, khaaskar yeh sher:

itne haiN sadme ke jheley dil se jaaTe hii nahiiN
raNg haiN itne ki naqshey meiN samaaTe hii nahiiN

vo bhi din the jab siTam pe voh siTam karte rahe
haaye ree qismaT !! ke ab to aazmaaTe hii nahiiN

ab naa kaaNpegii hamaarii rooh hawaa ke khauf se
khiRkiyoN meN ab to deepak hum jalaaTe hii nahiiN

likhte rahiyega.


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10th May 2002, 04:50 AM

mahek saheba....

aadaab-o-namaste....aur SSA


jaisa ki aapne zikr kiya ke apni pehali post aap khadim ki Ghazal ke naam kar rahi haiN ye mere liye hausle ki baat hai....aapka shukria adaa karna chahuNgaa.....aiiNdaa bhi saath dijiyega......bohat shukria


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