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बेड़ियाँ तेरी यादों की - 23rd August 2017, 12:43 PM

तुम्हारी यादें बेड़ियाँ हैं?...
बेड़ियाँ किसी को इतनी अच्छी लगती हैं क्या
जैसे मुझे लगती हैं..खुद को इनमें बाँध कर रखना चाहती हूँ
तब तक जब तक की तुम खुद आकर इन्हे खोल न दो
एक एक कड़ी को टुकड़ो में करो ..
फिर इन्ही से श्रृंगार कर दो मेरा
पाँव , कलाइयाँ,कमर ,माथे पर सजा दो इन्हें
और फिर तुम्हारी आँखों में
खुद का ये रूप देखकर पलकें झुका लूंगी
हाँ वादा है ऐसा ही होगा
पर तब तक ये मेरी आंखें दरवाज़े पर लगी रहने दो न
मुझे इन बेड़ियों में बंधी रहने दो न ....

मधु
   
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29th August 2017, 10:37 AM

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तुम्हारी यादें बेड़ियाँ हैं?...
बेड़ियाँ किसी को इतनी अच्छी लगती हैं क्या
जैसे मुझे लगती हैं..खुद को इनमें बाँध कर रखना चाहती हूँ
तब तक जब तक की तुम खुद आकर इन्हे खोल न दो
एक एक कड़ी को टुकड़ो में करो ..
फिर इन्ही से श्रृंगार कर दो मेरा
पाँव , कलाइयाँ,कमर ,माथे पर सजा दो इन्हें
और फिर तुम्हारी आँखों में
खुद का ये रूप देखकर पलकें झुका लूंगी
हाँ वादा है ऐसा ही होगा
पर तब तक ये मेरी आंखें दरवाज़े पर लगी रहने दो न
मुझे इन बेड़ियों में बंधी रहने दो न ....

मधु


madhu ji aadaab..

aap hindi kavitaaen bhi itni acchi likh letii hain
pahle mujhe pataa to thaa magar aaj yaqeen ho gayaa hai...

jis khoobsurti se aapne ye bayaani ki hai uska koi saani nahi hai...
tahe dik se meri daad qubool kijiye.. likhti rahiye bazm sajaati rahiye

you are one of the pillar of our sdc.. aap un chandd me se ek waahid shakhs hain jinhe padhne main khud sdc par aata hoon..

khush rahen..

shaad....


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madhu ji aadaab..

aap hindi kavitaaen bhi itni acchi likh letii hain
pahle mujhe pataa to thaa magar aaj yaqeen ho gayaa hai...

jis khoobsurti se aapne ye bayaani ki hai uska koi saani nahi hai...
tahe dik se meri daad qubool kijiye.. likhti rahiye bazm sajaati rahiye

you are one of the pillar of our sdc.. aap un chandd me se ek waahid shakhs hain jinhe padhne main khud sdc par aata hoon..

khush rahen..

shaad....
Izzat afazai ka behad shukriya shaad sahab....aapne itne dil se kavita ko padha aur mahsoos kiya bahot khushi huyi...aur aise hee aage bhi padhte rahiyega taki likhne ka hausla milta rHe....

Hame bhi apke kalaam ka intzaar rahta hai sdc par...

Aate rahiye kahne sunne ke mauke dete rahiye...aur khush rahiye....



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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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30th October 2017, 04:20 PM

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तुम्हारी यादें बेड़ियाँ हैं?...
बेड़ियाँ किसी को इतनी अच्छी लगती हैं क्या
जैसे मुझे लगती हैं..खुद को इनमें बाँध कर रखना चाहती हूँ
तब तक जब तक की तुम खुद आकर इन्हे खोल न दो
एक एक कड़ी को टुकड़ो में करो ..
फिर इन्ही से श्रृंगार कर दो मेरा
पाँव , कलाइयाँ,कमर ,माथे पर सजा दो इन्हें
और फिर तुम्हारी आँखों में
खुद का ये रूप देखकर पलकें झुका लूंगी
हाँ वादा है ऐसा ही होगा
पर तब तक ये मेरी आंखें दरवाज़े पर लगी रहने दो न
मुझे इन बेड़ियों में बंधी रहने दो न ....

मधु

Madhu Bala....ehsaas dil fareb haiN, bahut acche se bayaan ki hi dil ki hasrate, es kavita meiN jo tadap hai usey maiN mehsoos kar sakti hu, tadap...intejaar aur dard sab apna sa lag rha hai....!!

yu hi bazma ki ronak badati rho.


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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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Madhu Bala....ehsaas dil fareb haiN, bahut acche se bayaan ki hi dil ki hasrate, es kavita meiN jo tadap hai usey maiN mehsoos kar sakti hu, tadap...intejaar aur dard sab apna sa lag rha hai....!!

yu hi bazma ki ronak badati rho.
Bahot Khushi huyi di Kavita ki rooh ko mahsoos kiya aapne........
Apko dekhkar Khushi huyi sath banaye rakhiyega...

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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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