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har dua ko apni hote beasar dekha kiye.. - 3rd September 2016, 12:12 AM

har dua ko apni hote beasar dekha kiye
umra bhar is dil ko apne muntzar dekha kiye

vo jise bhooli hai meri oor aati har gali
Ham usi ke vaste sooni dagar dekha kiye

vo kisi fursat ke lamhe takta hoga chaand ko
Soch kar ham raat bhar ujla qamar dekha kiye

Dil jigar jalta raha hai aag aisi ishq ki
Ye tamasha har ghadi har ik pahar dekha kiye

unki ankhein darya jaisi gahri aur khamosh hain
Khud ko unme doobte Sham o seher dekha kiye.....

.....madhu.



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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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har dua ko apni hote beasar dekha kiye
umra bhar is dil ko apne muntzar dekha kiye

vo jise bhooli hai meri oor aati har gali
Ham usi ke vaste sooni dagar dekha kiye

vo kisi fursat ke lamhe takta hoga chaand ko
Soch kar ham raat bhar ujla qamar dekha kiye

Dil jigar jalta raha hai aag aisi ishq ki
Ye tamasha har ghadi har ek pahar dekha kiye

unki ankhein dariya si gahri aur khamosh hain
Khud ko unme doobte Sham o shahar dekha kiye.....

.....madhu.
Bohat la-jawaab ghazal hui hai madhu sahiba

Aapke ghazlo ka miyaar bohat aala hai

Allah aapke hunar ko aur manzar-e-aam tak laaiye
   
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4th September 2016, 01:23 AM

behad ummdah ghazal kahi hai aapne madhu saahibaa....
Ek ek lafz ghazal ke roop ko nikhaar raha hai.. bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne

tahe dil se daad qubool kijiye aur likhti rahen

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har dua ko apni hote beasar dekha kiye
umra bhar is dil ko apne muntzar dekha kiye

vo jise bhooli hai meri oor aati har gali
Ham usi ke vaste sooni dagar dekha kiye

vo kisi fursat ke lamhe takta hoga chaand ko
Soch kar ham raat bhar ujla qamar dekha kiye

Dil jigar jalta raha hai aag aisi ishq ki
Ye tamasha har ghadi har ek pahar dekha kiye

unki ankhein dariya si gahri aur khamosh hain
Khud ko unme doobte Sham o shahar dekha kiye.....

.....madhu.
Bahut umdaa aur haseen ghazal pesh ki hai Madhu....Makhta ek dam sateek aur pur asar raha daad qubool farmayein



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buhet achey ghazal madhu ji
sab ashaar buhet achey lagey buhet khoob
daad qubool kariye
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har dua ko apni hote beasar dekha kiye
umra bhar is dil ko apne muntzar dekha kiye

vo jise bhooli hai meri oor aati har gali
Ham usi ke vaste sooni dagar dekha kiye

vo kisi fursat ke lamhe takta hoga chaand ko
Soch kar ham raat bhar ujla qamar dekha kiye

Dil jigar jalta raha hai aag aisi ishq ki
Ye tamasha har ghadi har ek pahar dekha kiye

unki ankhein dariya si gahri aur khamosh hain
Khud ko unme doobte Sham o shahar dekha kiye.....

.....madhu.


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Bohat la-jawaab ghazal hui hai madhu sahiba

Aapke ghazlo ka miyaar bohat aala hai

Allah aapke hunar ko aur manzar-e-aam tak laaiye
mujahid sahab aapka comment padhkar har baar sochti hun shukriya kin shabdon me karun........
is izzat afzai aur paziraai ka dil se shukriya..

aap jaise padhne walon se hee likhne ka hausla milta hai...

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Wah. - 12th September 2016, 12:20 AM

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har dua ko apni hote beasar dekha kiye
umra bhar is dil ko apne muntzar dekha kiye

vo jise bhooli hai meri oor aati har gali
Ham usi ke vaste sooni dagar dekha kiye

vo kisi fursat ke lamhe takta hoga chaand ko
Soch kar ham raat bhar ujla qamar dekha kiye

Dil jigar jalta raha hai aag aisi ishq ki
Ye tamasha har ghadi har ek pahar dekha kiye

unki ankhein dariya si gahri aur khamosh hain
Khud ko unme doobte Sham o shahar dekha kiye.....

.....madhu.

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Bohot baDhiya Madhu Ji. Har naye kalaam ke saTh nikhaar baDhta ja raha hai.
Likhte rahiye. Khush rahiye


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har dua ko apni hote beasar dekha kiye
umra bhar is dil ko apne muntzar dekha kiye

vo jise bhooli hai meri oor aati har gali
Ham usi ke vaste sooni dagar dekha kiye

vo kisi fursat ke lamhe takta hoga chaand ko
Soch kar ham raat bhar ujla qamar dekha kiye

Dil jigar jalta raha hai aag aisi ishq ki
Ye tamasha har ghadi har ik pahar dekha kiye

unki ankhein darya jaisi gahri aur khamosh hain
Khud ko unme doobte Sham o seher dekha kiye.....

.....madhu.


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vo jise bhooli hai meri oor aati har gali
Ham usi ke vaste sooni dagar dekha kiye


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behad ummdah ghazal kahi hai aapne madhu saahibaa....
Ek ek lafz ghazal ke roop ko nikhaar raha hai.. bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne

tahe dil se daad qubool kijiye aur likhti rahen

Shaad...

Ghazal par aane aur sath dene ka dil se shukriya shaad sahab.....khushi huyi ki aapne ghazal pasand ki......

Aapki amad bazm me chaar chaand laga deti hai.....aate rahein....

Khush rahein...



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Bahot shukriya anu...aapko ghazal pasand aayi bahot khyshi huyi..daad dil se qubool huyi.......sath dete rahiyega....

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buhet achey ghazal madhu ji
sab ashaar buhet achey lagey buhet khoob
daad qubool kariye
Bahot bahot shukriya saba ji...

Khush rahiye...
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