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"*Mere Dil Mein Teri Sacchi Chaahat Betalab Utar Aane Lagi........!!*" |
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"*Mere Dil Mein Teri Sacchi Chaahat Betalab Utar Aane Lagi........!!*" -
3rd December 2005, 03:54 AM
mere azeez doston..aaj dard se kuch hat ke likh rahi hoon..umeed karti hoon ke aap sabhi ise padhenge aur apni pasand napasand mujhe batayenge.....yeh kalaam aaj mere dil ki gehraiyon se nikla hai....jab zindagi me kisiko kisika ka pyaar bina khabar mil jata hai toh shayad uski dil ki kaifiyat bhi isi kalaam jaisi hoti hai....dil jhoom sa uthta hai,haina doston!!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- tum kya aaye meri yeh zindagi phir se gungunaane lagi murjhayi hui sabhi ye kaliyaan phir se muskuraane lagi chal padi thee mein andheron mein naa jaane kab say tum kya aaye mehfile chiraagon se phir jagmagaane lagi kat rahi thee umar bas merii khwaabon khyaalon mein tum kya aaye mein toh bas bin piye hi behek jaane lagi kaash bata paati duniya ko kay kiski mohabbat milee sabhki uthti nazron say aankhein mein ab churaane lagi jiski baaton pe kal tak mujh ko yoon aitbaar naa tha aaj uski shokh baaton se mein muskurake sharmaane lagi kal tak jin aankhon se mere talkh aasoon chalakte the aaj yahi aankhein meri shokh khushiyaan chalkaane lagi jin kaali raaton se mujhe musalsal wehshat hoti thi aaj wahi syaah aur sard raatein mera dil behkaane lagi kaisa ajab sa junoon hai teri mohabbat ki taaseer me mere dil mein teri sacchi chaahat betalab utar aane lagi Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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3rd December 2005, 08:33 AM
 priy farhana,yunhi likhti raho.... tumhari kavita ne madhoshi ka aalam bana diya.. di |
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3rd December 2005, 10:09 AM
wow!!!!
behad pyaara sa hai...................... bye tc ..............................................  . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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3rd December 2005, 10:18 AM
farhana,
Hamensha ki tarhaa bahut sundar likha hai tumne... par tumhari iss rachna ne mujhe kuch sochne par majboor kar diya... well, you take care & keep writting! Have a nice day! |
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3rd December 2005, 12:20 PM
meri Farru pyari Farru... har baar ki tarah ik or nayaa kalaam jo mere dil ko choo gayaa...
u hin likhti rahna..... jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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3rd December 2005, 12:32 PM
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dil ko chhoo jane wali kavita mazza aa gaya ek alag siii feeling hui dil me padhne ke baad yunhi likhti rahiye  ~*~ EK SHAYAR Anjaan~*~ 
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3rd December 2005, 12:42 PM
bahut bahut bahut hi achi hai faru dd likhte rahiye aise kalam har koi nahi likh sakta aap mein wo kala hai so plzzz keep writing
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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3rd December 2005, 08:47 PM
hi dd...online toh bata hi chuki hoon ke aapka jawaab dekhke kitni khushi hui hai...yahan bhi bata rahi hoon ke sach aise hi aati rahiyega meri post pe..aapko dekhke dil khush hojata hai...apna khyaal rakhiyega.
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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3rd December 2005, 08:48 PM
hi chandsi....its so nice to see u on my post...m glad tumhe pasand aaya...keep coming...take care...bye dear.
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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3rd December 2005, 10:42 PM
zyada mat socho parul...mein toh bas yuhin kuch bhi likhti rehti hoon...ab likhne pe afsos horaha hai....shayad insaan ko apne dil ka haal hi likhna chhaiye jo mera dard zyada behtar bayaan karta hai....ishq vishq hamare naseeb ka nahi hai.....khair tumhe pasand aaya jaanke khushi hui sweets....aati rehna....take care.
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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4th December 2005, 02:59 AM
hi shweta....mujhe khushi hai tumhe pasand aaya dear.keep coming.bye
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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4th December 2005, 03:01 AM
dear abhishek.....tumhe itna pasand ayega mujhe ummeed na thi...par shayad ab aise kalaam likh na paun mein,,,,ishq vishq hamari nasib me nahi...yeh toh bas ek imaginary kalaam hai....aate rehna.bye
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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4th December 2005, 03:02 AM
hi mehul...khushi hui jaanke ke tumhe pasand aaya kalaam,,,,waise mujhme koi kala nahi....kala dekhne wale ki aankhon me hoti hai...lekin ab aisa kalaam dobara likhne ka irada nahi...is ek kalaam se dhero gham mile hain...keep coming dear.bye
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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4th December 2005, 05:22 AM
You know this made me happy... padhne se pehle hi khushi hui..
All i will say is beautiful .... Take Care Rohin |
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4th December 2005, 06:18 AM
thanks rohin...m glad u liked the kalaam....
keep coming....take care buddy!! bye Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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4th December 2005, 08:06 AM
hey farhana,
you are taking me wrong buddy.. meine kab kaha ishq pe na likho yaa dard pe, yaar tu bhi na... It was really great and I was surprised to read such a wonderful creation! I am happy for you dear... take care & keep writting! aur haan...... keep smiling! |
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4th December 2005, 08:25 PM
hmmm ab tumhari baat ka jawaab toh me online de chuki....aane ke liye shukriyas weets...take care.
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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Re: "*Mere Dil Mein Teri Sacchi Chaahat Betalab Utar Aane Lagi........!!*" |
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Re: "*Mere Dil Mein Teri Sacchi Chaahat Betalab Utar Aane Lagi........!!*" -
5th December 2005, 06:12 PM
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Mohbbat maiN ye kaisi maboori aayi... dil pe naam, jubaN na kisi se keh payi.. utar gaye jism se ghamoN ke libaas.. chahat jaam ban ke nasha karti aayi... faru yuN kisi ka jindgi maiN aana ek dum se andheri jindgi maiN ronak kar dena ,... aur khayaloN ka jawaan ho uthtna ... yahi nahi armaaN na sirf pyar paane ke ,.. na sirf pyar dene ke .. jism ki pyas kar ... had se gujar jane ke... har aalam ko tumne yuN alfazon se mehkaya hai ki koun ye khata kar baithe pata nahi .. koun isme apna aks dekhe pata nahi ... bas lazawab hai har lafz ... yuN hi mehkati raho aalam priye... tumhara apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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5th December 2005, 10:51 PM
hmmmm so finally aap aa hi gaye meri post pe...late lateef!!!.........hehe chalo der aaye durust aaye............pehli baat toh tumhara sher gazab ka laga...bilkul dil se dil tak.......bahaut khoob
tumhari kaheen baatein bhi bilkul sacchi lagi tumhari tarah....tumhe yeh kalaam pasand aaaya jaanke dil ko tasalli hui...........aise hi aate raha karo aur kuch sher keh jaaya karo..... maza agaya chand line padhke tumhari.....ummeed hai jald hi tumhara ek lajawaab kalaam padhne milega...tabtak ke liye apna khyaal rakkho aur khush raho.....Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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