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Originally Posted by mujib66
Aadab arz hai Shaad Sahab.
aap ne waqt nikala aur mujh ko padha Bohut bohut shukriya aap ka.
Yun hi saath dete rahiye.
Bhai mera zehen dard wale kalaam ke pass nahin jaata. eh baat nahin ke dard se bhare kalaam main padhta nahin ya mujhe acche nahin lagte. Main inhen padhta hun likhta bohut kam hun.
Rahi baat mazaaq ki ...agar mazaaq sasta/ khasta na ho ya gira hua na ho to eh qabil-e-qubool hota hai. Acchhe mazaaq se qurbat men ijafa hota hai...isliye hansne hansane ke liye mazaaq karte rehna chahiye.....bas dhyaan rakhna chahiye ke isse koi hurt na ho.
Ek correction kar ne ki zehmat uthayiyega. Mujhe khushi hogi.
"Faty " ko "Fatty" kardijiye. Aur last men ek aur philosophical makta jod dijiye.
ghar men Parwaaz hanste hansate raho
be-zaroorat kahin tum na jaya karo.
With thanks & regards.
Mujeeb Parwaaz.
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Mujeeb saahab aadaab.. aapke huqum ki tameel karte hue maine wo dono correction kar diye hain jo aapne kahe they...... au mujhe sach kahun to aapke kalaam ka ye rang bahot hi zyaada pasand aaya... ek shaayar me variations hona bahot zaruuri hai ye merii raay hai........
Allah kare zore qalam aur zaada... likhte rahiye...........
Shaad..