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Love Ye kab hua yaad nahi... - 24th July 2014, 08:12 PM

Kab mere dil ne Tera Naam liya
Kab meri dhadkan ne Teri dhadkan ko suna..
Kab meri saans me Teri khushboo ghul gayi hamdam
Kab bhari mahfil me main hone lagi yoon gum
Kab main khud se hi sharmaane lagi
Kab bina baat ke muskarane lagi
Ye pahli baar hua kab
Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
Jane lagi
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Kab main khud se hi sharmaane lagi
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Mujhe yaad nahi
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25th July 2014, 01:03 AM

Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
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Wahh... wahh.... Madhu Jiii,

Aap ne ishQ se bharpoor, aik dil-nasheen nazm pesh ki hai..

boht boht khoob... teh-e-dil se nikli dehrooN daad qabool kijiye,,

aise hi mehfil roshan karte rahiye,

DuaooN k saath,,


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Wahh... wahh.... Madhu Jiii,

Aap ne ishQ se bharpoor, aik dil-nasheen nazm pesh ki hai..

boht boht khoob... teh-e-dil se nikli dehrooN daad qabool kijiye,,

aise hi mehfil roshan karte rahiye,

DuaooN k saath,,
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Kab main khud se hi sharmaane lagi
Kab bina baat ke muskarane lagi
Ye pahli baar hua kab
Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
Jane lagi
Yaad hai itna ki tum mere ho
Mohabbat Teri meri rooh me samaane lagi....
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Kab meri saans me Teri khushboo ghul gayi hamdam
Kab bhari mahfil me main hone lagi yoon gum
Kab main khud se hi sharmaane lagi
Kab bina baat ke muskarane lagi
Ye pahli baar hua kab
Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
Jane lagi
Yaad hai itna ki tum mere ho
Mohabbat Teri meri rooh me samaane lagi....
Madhu ji....dil ki baate dil hi jaane...
aapne apne dil ki baate bahut saadgi se seede-saaf lafzoN bayaan ki...bahut khoobsurat lge aapke ehsaas.

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Khush rahiye.....apni Haaziri lagate rahiye...
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Kya Bat hai Madhu Ji

bahut Khoob madhu ji bahut achi likhi apne
Bahot shukriya...............
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