Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Shayri-e-Dard

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
tha mujhe jis ka sahara gum raha
Old
  (#1)
'Saahil'
mai shayar badnaam.......
'Saahil' is just really nice'Saahil' is just really nice'Saahil' is just really nice'Saahil' is just really nice
 
'Saahil''s Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 36
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: kabhii dhoop maiN, kabhi chaavN maiN, is shahar maiN us gaoN maiN
Rep Power: 0
tha mujhe jis ka sahara gum raha - 5th September 2010, 12:56 AM

doston! pesh-e-khidmat hai ek aur ghazal..........hope you like it.

meri kismat ka sitaraa gum raha
tha mujhe jis ka sahara gum raha

ab janaaze par chala hai shauk se
jeete ji kyon shehar saara gum raha

fir nahi apnaayenge ae dil tujhe
is kadar jo tu dobaraa gum raha

zulf aadhi khol ke wo so gaye
isliye to chaand saara gum raha

jisne waada saath chalne ka kiya
hamsafar wo hi hamara gum raha

aakhiri shab teri galiyoN main dikha
aur fir 'saahil' awaara gum raha



'Saahil'
http://saahilspoetry.blogspot.com



मेरी किस्मत का सितारा गुम रहा
था मुझे जिसका सहारा गुम रहा

अब जनाज़े पर चला है शौक से

जीते जी क्यों शहर सारा गुम रहा

फिर नहीं अपनाएंगे ऐ दिल! तुझे

इस कदर जो तू दोबारा गुम रहा

ज़ुल्फ़ आधी खोल के वो सो गए

इसलिए तो चाँद सारा गुम रहा

जिसने वादा साथ चलने का किया

हमसफ़र वो ही हमारा गुम रहा

आखिरी शब तेरी गलियों में दिखा

और फिर 'साहिल' आवारा गुम रहा



Sandeep 'Saahil'

saahilspoetry.blogspot.com
  Send a message via Yahoo to 'Saahil'  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#2)
ashu_uppal
Registered User
ashu_uppal is a jewel in the roughashu_uppal is a jewel in the roughashu_uppal is a jewel in the rough
 
Offline
Posts: 182
Join Date: Nov 2007
Rep Power: 16
5th September 2010, 09:00 PM

waah janaab
bahut khoob
yuhi likhte rahiye
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
'Saahil'
mai shayar badnaam.......
'Saahil' is just really nice'Saahil' is just really nice'Saahil' is just really nice'Saahil' is just really nice
 
'Saahil''s Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 36
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: kabhii dhoop maiN, kabhi chaavN maiN, is shahar maiN us gaoN maiN
Rep Power: 0
7th September 2010, 09:04 AM

shukriya Ashu ji, thank you for encouraging words..........


Sandeep 'Saahil'

saahilspoetry.blogspot.com
  Send a message via Yahoo to 'Saahil'  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#4)
m.mayoos
Registered User
m.mayoos has much to be proud ofm.mayoos has much to be proud ofm.mayoos has much to be proud ofm.mayoos has much to be proud ofm.mayoos has much to be proud ofm.mayoos has much to be proud ofm.mayoos has much to be proud ofm.mayoos has much to be proud ofm.mayoos has much to be proud of
 
m.mayoos's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 654
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Waltham, MA
Rep Power: 23
11th January 2011, 07:55 PM

Reading all of urs, these 2 were good.

ज़ुल्फ़ आधी खोल के वो सो गए
इसलिए तो चाँद सारा गुम रहा


आखिरी शब तेरी गलियों में दिखा
और फिर 'साहिल' आवारा गुम रहा


इक रोज़ क़यामत बराबर कर ही देगी इसे
हमने ना की मुकम्मल ज़िंदगी, तो न सही
  Send a message via Yahoo to m.mayoos  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#5)
naresh_mehra110
Anshumali
naresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
naresh_mehra110's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 7,420
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: DELHI (INDIA)
Rep Power: 83
11th January 2011, 09:01 PM

zulf aadhi khol ke wo so gaye
isliye to chaand saara gum raha


Very Romantic ....... Saahil Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... !

dilee daad .. !

khush rahen ... !
duaaon ke saath ... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


---Naresh Mehra----
  Send a message via Yahoo to naresh_mehra110  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
ISHK EK IBADAT
RADHE RADHE
ISHK EK IBADAT is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comISHK EK IBADAT is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comISHK EK IBADAT is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comISHK EK IBADAT is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comISHK EK IBADAT is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comISHK EK IBADAT is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comISHK EK IBADAT is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comISHK EK IBADAT is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comISHK EK IBADAT is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comISHK EK IBADAT is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comISHK EK IBADAT is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
Offline
Posts: 4,115
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: DELHI
Rep Power: 55
Love 12th January 2011, 12:30 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by 'Saahil' View Post
doston! pesh-e-khidmat hai ek aur ghazal..........hope you like it.

meri kismat ka sitaraa gum raha
tha mujhe jis ka sahara gum raha

ab janaaze par chala hai shauk se
jeete ji kyon shehar saara gum raha

fir nahi apnaayenge ae dil tujhe
is kadar jo tu dobaraa gum raha

zulf aadhi khol ke wo so gaye
isliye to chaand saara gum raha

jisne waada saath chalne ka kiya
hamsafar wo hi hamara gum raha

aakhiri shab teri galiyoN main dikha
aur fir 'saahil' awaara gum raha



'Saahil'
http://saahilspoetry.blogspot.com



मेरी किस्मत का सितारा गुम रहा
था मुझे जिसका सहारा गुम रहा

अब जनाज़े पर चला है शौक से

जीते जी क्यों शहर सारा गुम रहा

फिर नहीं अपनाएंगे ऐ दिल! तुझे

इस कदर जो तू दोबारा गुम रहा

ज़ुल्फ़ आधी खोल के वो सो गए

इसलिए तो चाँद सारा गुम रहा

जिसने वादा साथ चलने का किया

हमसफ़र वो ही हमारा गुम रहा

आखिरी शब तेरी गलियों में दिखा

और फिर 'साहिल' आवारा गुम रहा


bahut khoob janaab likhte rahiye
duaon ke saath....................
....


Aapka Apna
Ishk


'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है


email: rkm179@gmail.com
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#7)
Radhika_2
RooH Se RooH Tak
Radhika_2 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comRadhika_2 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comRadhika_2 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comRadhika_2 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comRadhika_2 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comRadhika_2 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comRadhika_2 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comRadhika_2 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comRadhika_2 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comRadhika_2 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comRadhika_2 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
Radhika_2's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,247
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 50
13th January 2011, 12:10 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by 'Saahil' View Post
doston! pesh-e-khidmat hai ek aur ghazal..........hope you like it.

meri kismat ka sitaraa gum raha
tha mujhe jis ka sahara gum raha

ab janaaze par chala hai shauk se
jeete ji kyon shehar saara gum raha

fir nahi apnaayenge ae dil tujhe
is kadar jo tu dobaraa gum raha

zulf aadhi khol ke wo so gaye
isliye to chaand saara gum raha

jisne waada saath chalne ka kiya
hamsafar wo hi hamara gum raha

aakhiri shab teri galiyoN main dikha
aur fir 'saahil' awaara gum raha



'Saahil'
http://saahilspoetry.blogspot.com



मेरी किस्मत का सितारा गुम रहा
था मुझे जिसका सहारा गुम रहा

अब जनाज़े पर चला है शौक से

जीते जी क्यों शहर सारा गुम रहा

फिर नहीं अपनाएंगे ऐ दिल! तुझे

इस कदर जो तू दोबारा गुम रहा

ज़ुल्फ़ आधी खोल के वो सो गए

इसलिए तो चाँद सारा गुम रहा

जिसने वादा साथ चलने का किया

हमसफ़र वो ही हमारा गुम रहा

आखिरी शब तेरी गलियों में दिखा

और फिर 'साहिल' आवारा गुम रहा


ji bhaut khoob.............................

ab janaaze par chala hai shauk se
jeete ji kyon shehar saara gum raha

jisne waada saath chalne ka kiya
hamsafar wo hi hamara gum raha



Radhika

Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye


E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#8)
'Saahil'
mai shayar badnaam.......
'Saahil' is just really nice'Saahil' is just really nice'Saahil' is just really nice'Saahil' is just really nice
 
'Saahil''s Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 36
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: kabhii dhoop maiN, kabhi chaavN maiN, is shahar maiN us gaoN maiN
Rep Power: 0
13th January 2011, 10:50 PM

m.mayoos ji, naresh ji, ishq ji, Raadhika ji

mujhe padhne ka aur daad dene ka shukriya..........


Sandeep 'Saahil'

saahilspoetry.blogspot.com
  Send a message via Yahoo to 'Saahil'  
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2021, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com