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वो खुदा है या है पत्थर, क्या पता? - 11th January 2011, 07:38 PM

सब झुकाते हैं जहाँ सर, क्या पता?
वो खुदा है या है पत्थर, क्या पता?


दोस्त भी दुश्मन भी सब हंसकर मिले
किसके पहलू में है खंज़र, क्या पता?


कब न जाने ख़त्म होगा ये सफ़र?
लौट के कब जायेंगे घर, क्या पता?


आज मेरी दोस्त है तू ज़िन्दगी
कल दिखाए कैसे मंज़र, क्या पता?


क़त्ल मुझ को वो नहीं कर पायेगा
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11th January 2011, 07:49 PM

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सब झुकाते हैं जहाँ सर, क्या पता?
वो खुदा है या है पत्थर, क्या पता?


दोस्त भी दुश्मन भी सब हंसकर मिले
किसके पहलू में है खंज़र, क्या पता?


कब न जाने ख़त्म होगा ये सफ़र?
लौट के कब जायेंगे घर, क्या पता?


आज मेरी दोस्त है तू ज़िन्दगी
कल दिखाए कैसे मंज़र, क्या पता?


क़त्ल मुझ को वो नहीं कर पायेगा
चाहता है वो मुझे, पर क्या पता?


कब बहा ले जाएँ 'साहिल' ये तुझे,
नीयत-ऐ-मौज-ऐ-समंदर, क्या पता?

Fantastic Saahil, very very well written.


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सब झुकाते हैं जहाँ सर, क्या पता?
वो खुदा है या है पत्थर, क्या पता?

दोस्त भी दुश्मन भी सब हंसकर मिले
किसके पहलू में है खंज़र, क्या पता?


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सब झुकाते हैं जहाँ सर, क्या पता?
वो खुदा है या है पत्थर, क्या पता?


दोस्त भी दुश्मन भी सब हंसकर मिले
किसके पहलू में है खंज़र, क्या पता?


कब न जाने ख़त्म होगा ये सफ़र?
लौट के कब जायेंगे घर, क्या पता?


आज मेरी दोस्त है तू ज़िन्दगी
कल दिखाए कैसे मंज़र, क्या पता?


क़त्ल मुझ को वो नहीं कर पायेगा
चाहता है वो मुझे, पर क्या पता?


कब बहा ले जाएँ 'साहिल' ये तुझे,
नीयत-ऐ-मौज-ऐ-समंदर, क्या पता?


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सब झुकाते हैं जहाँ सर, क्या पता?
वो खुदा है या है पत्थर, क्या पता?


दोस्त भी दुश्मन भी सब हंसकर मिले
किसके पहलू में है खंज़र, क्या पता?


कब न जाने ख़त्म होगा ये सफ़र?
लौट के कब जायेंगे घर, क्या पता?


आज मेरी दोस्त है तू ज़िन्दगी
कल दिखाए कैसे मंज़र, क्या पता?


क़त्ल मुझ को वो नहीं कर पायेगा
चाहता है वो मुझे, पर क्या पता?


कब बहा ले जाएँ 'साहिल' ये तुझे,
नीयत-ऐ-मौज-ऐ-समंदर, क्या पता?


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