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Hamko mouqaa hi kahaan thaa, ki, baith kar rotey! - 21st August 2010, 03:50 PM

Hamko mouqaa hi kahaan thaa, ki, baith kar rotey!
Tum nahin ho, to kyaa hai wah, ki, jisey ham khotey!!

Mulk shaadaab hai, mousoof sabzhkheyz safar;
Phir bhee lagtaa hai, jaa rahey hain ham waham dhhotey!

Kuchh na kuchh to zaroor hee huaa hai: ham warnah,
Khud apnee raah mein har soo babool kyoun botey?

Wo to ham hain, ki, jahannum bhi hai jannat hamko:
Yuun to, hotey hain roz zaahidoun sey samjhotey!

Ham kisee aur key hokey raheyn, mumkin hi naheen!
Khaas wo hi hain hamaarey huzoor iklotey!

Laakh qurbaaniyaan dey deejiye: honaa kyaa hai?
Ab bhi qaabiz hain us yazeed-e-bad key padpotey!

Zindagee dar-b-dar na ho, iseeliye mein ney,
Us sey nazdeekiyaan rakkheen hain jaagtey-sotey!

Naaz-o-andaaz kaa rakhaa hai khyaal har lamahey,
Taaki wah, yun hi rahey roo-b-roo meyrey hotey!!

Dafn huun qabra-e-khak mein hazzaar saaloun sey:
Hoz-e-kousar mein kab lagaauungaa, 'abd', gotey?


हमको मौका ही कहाँ था , कि, बैठ कर रोते !
तुम नहीं हो , तो क्या है वह , कि , जिसे हम खोते !!

मुल्क शादाब है , मौसूफ़ सब्ज़ाखेज़ सफ़र ;
फिर भी लगता है , जा रहे हैं हम वहम ढोते !

कुछ न कुछ तो ज़रूर ही हुआ है : हम वर्ना ,
खुद अपनी राह में हर सू बबूल क्योँ बोते ?

वो तो हम हैं , कि , जहन्नुम भी है जन्नत हमको :
यूं तो , होते हैं रोज़ जाहिदों से समझोते !

हम किसी और के होके रहें , मुमकिन ही नहीं !
ख़ास वो ही हैं हमारे हुज़ूर इकलोते !

लाख कुर्बानियां दे दीजिये : होना क्या है ?
अब भी काबिज़ हैं उस यज़ीदे बद के पड़पोते !

ज़िंदगी दरबदर न हो , इसीलिये मैंने ,
उस से नजदीकियां रक्खीं हैं जागते-सोते !

नाजो अंदाज़ का रखा है ख्याल हर लमहे ,
ताकि वोह यूँ ही रहे रूबरू मेरे होते !!

दफन हूँ क़ब्रे खाक में हज़ार सालौं से :
होज़े कौसर में कब लगाऊँगा , 'अबद ', गोते ?

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लाख कुर्बानियां दे दीजिये : होना क्या है ?
अब भी काबिज़ हैं उस यज़ीदे बद के पड़पोते !

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22nd August 2010, 11:28 AM

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लाख कुर्बानियां दे दीजिये : होना क्या है ?
अब भी काबिज़ हैं उस यज़ीदे बद के पड़पोते !

waaah huzoor waah ...............dil se daad yzide bad ke parpote aur dekhie bad ko english me bhi bad kahte ha.n
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, parween komal ji!

Kainaatoun kee baat ho jaaye:
Kahkashaan to mahaz khilonaa hai!

Kyoun khalaaoun pai nazar beykhud hai?
Khwaab hai: saath-saath sonaa hai!

Waqaar-e-khud kahaan talaash kareyn?
Aadmee kuchh nahin hai: bonaa hai!



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Subaan allah..!! Man gaye jii aapki Qalam ko, kya khoob likha hai aapne.
Sare hi asar tareef ke Qabil hai.

Daad Qabool kare..

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हमको मौका ही कहाँ था , कि, बैठ कर रोते !
तुम नहीं हो , तो क्या है वह , कि , जिसे हम खोते !!

मुल्क शादाब है , मौसूफ़ सब्ज़ाखेज़ सफ़र ;
फिर भी लगता है , जा रहे हैं हम वहम ढोते !

कुछ न कुछ तो ज़रूर ही हुआ है : हम वर्ना ,
खुद अपनी राह में हर सू बबूल क्योँ बोते ?

वो तो हम हैं , कि , जहन्नुम भी है जन्नत हमको :
यूं तो , होते हैं रोज़ जाहिदों से समझोते !

हम किसी और के होके रहें , मुमकिन ही नहीं !
ख़ास वो ही हैं हमारे हुज़ूर इकलोते !

लाख कुर्बानियां दे दीजिये : होना क्या है ?
अब भी काबिज़ हैं उस यज़ीदे बद के पड़पोते !

ज़िंदगी दरबदर न हो , इसीलिये मैंने ,
उस से नजदीकियां रक्खीं हैं जागते-सोते !

नाजो अंदाज़ का रखा है ख्याल हर लमहे ,
ताकि वोह यूँ ही रहे रूबरू मेरे होते !!

दफन हूँ क़ब्रे खाक में हज़ार सालौं से :
होज़े कौसर में कब लगाऊँगा , 'अबद ', गोते ?

- अबद बुन्देली



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Subaan allah..!! Man gaye jii aapki Qalam ko, kya khoob likha hai aapne.
Sare hi asar tareef ke Qabil hai.

Daad Qabool kare..
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Ham kisee aur key hokey raheyn, mumkin hi naheen!
Khaas wo hi hain hamaarey huzoor iklotey!

Laakh qurbaaniyaan dey deejiye: honaa kyaa hai?
Ab bhi qaabiz hain us yazeed-e-bad key padpotey!

Zindagee dar-b-dar na ho, iseeliye mein ney,
Us sey nazdeekiyaan rakkheen hain jaagtey-sotey!


Good One......Bundeli Sahab ! Bahuth Khoob !

Very Nice Creation.........dil se daad hazir ... khush rahen...

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Ham kisee aur key hokey raheyn, mumkin hi naheen!
Khaas wo hi hain hamaarey huzoor iklotey!

Laakh qurbaaniyaan dey deejiye: honaa kyaa hai?
Ab bhi qaabiz hain us yazeed-e-bad key padpotey!

Zindagee dar-b-dar na ho, iseeliye mein ney,
Us sey nazdeekiyaan rakkheen hain jaagtey-sotey!


Good One......Bundeli Sahab ! Bahuth Khoob !

Very Nice Creation.........dil se daad hazir ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
Bahut bahut shukriyah Anshumali ji!

Parmaatmaa aapko sarwadaa swasth aiwam saanand rakhey!

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21st September 2010, 10:55 PM

Hamko mouqaa hi kahaan thaa, ki, baith kar rotey!
Tum nahin ho, to kyaa hai wah, ki, jisey ham khotey!!

Wo to ham hain, ki, jahannum bhi hai jannat hamko:
Yuun to, hotey hain roz zaahidoun sey samjhotey!

Ham kisee aur key hokey raheyn, mumkin hi naheen!
Khaas wo hi hain hamaarey huzoor iklotey!


Bohat khoob.........................




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Hamko mouqaa hi kahaan thaa, ki, baith kar rotey!
Tum nahin ho, to kyaa hai wah, ki, jisey ham khotey!!

Wo to ham hain, ki, jahannum bhi hai jannat hamko:
Yuun to, hotey hain roz zaahidoun sey samjhotey!

Ham kisee aur key hokey raheyn, mumkin hi naheen!
Khaas wo hi hain hamaarey huzoor iklotey!


Bohat khoob.........................
Thanks zainy ji!

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कुछ न कुछ तो ज़रूर ही हुआ है : हम वर्ना ,
खुद अपनी राह में हर सू बबूल क्योँ बोते ?


वो तो हम हैं , कि , जहन्नुम भी है जन्नत हमको :
यूं तो , होते हैं रोज़ जाहिदों से समझोते !


bahut khoob - abd bundeli ji..............................


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कुछ न कुछ तो ज़रूर ही हुआ है : हम वर्ना ,
खुद अपनी राह में हर सू बबूल क्योँ बोते ?


वो तो हम हैं , कि , जहन्नुम भी है जन्नत हमको :
यूं तो , होते हैं रोज़ जाहिदों से समझोते !


bahut khoob - abd bundeli ji..............................
Rashmi ji, bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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