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25th March 2009, 11:40 AM
Dosto diya ji ne mujhe bachho k upar koi thread banane ko kaha tha,maine ek choti si koshish ki hai, ummeed hai aap bhi is thread me apne bachpan k ehsaas share karenge...
Aur meri choti si koshish ko pasand karenge...  Mai ek chota bachha hu, akal ka thoda kachha hu, mere mann me koi khot nahi, mai dil ka ekdum sachha hu... baat hai mere bachpan ki, meri shararte,mere alhad mann ki... Har kisi k saath hansna khelna, wo bado ka meri shararte jhelna.. Wo ladakpan bahut yaad aata hai... Wo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai... Wo Dosto k sath jhagadna, fir agle he pal unke sath hansna.. Wo 'Hero mind' bahut yaad aata hai... Wo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai... Bazar me kisi cheez ko dekh rukna, uske liye zid karna, fir papa ka meri zid k aage jhukna... Wo 'hitler mind' bahut yaad aata hai... Wo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai... Khilono k saath khelna, unhe todkar fir se jodna, wo 'engineer mind' bahut yaad aata hai... Wo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai... Mera kisi baat pe roothna, daadi ka papa ko daantna.. Mujhe puchkaarna,mujhe manana.. Wo daadi ka pyaar bahut yaad aata hai.. Wo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai... Wo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai... Ummeed hai aapko mere bachpan k ehsaas pasand aaye honge |
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25th March 2009, 11:57 AM
Aap dosto se iltezaa hai k aap b is thread me apne shabdo me kuch add kare
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25th March 2009, 12:04 PM
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sakhi saheliyaa.n baaraati, wo jhut moot ka rona, karte hue gudiya ka gauna, wo "match making mind" bht yaad aata hai, wo bachpan bht yaad aata hai.......... Sach mein yaar tumne wakai bachpan ki yaad dilaadi..........bht hi saaf aur natural ehsaas hain...........aise hi likhte raho.......keep it up |
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25th March 2009, 12:27 PM
Wo Kehton mein khel na....
wo cycle chalana.... Wo teelon par chadna... Aur ghir ke sambhalna... Wo ladkon se ladai aur unse hata pai... Wo Rootey hove Hans na Bahut yaad aata hai ..... Wo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai..... |
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25th March 2009, 12:50 PM
Thanx naaz nd baqti-yaar ji,
aapke ehsaas bahut he achhe hain i like it |
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26th March 2009, 02:22 PM
Wo saara din ghumna,
masti me khelna, gali cricket khelna, patang udana, hide n seek khelna... Wo 'player mind' bahut yaad aata hai.. Wo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai... Subah subah uthna, Baag se aam churana, dosto k saath bhagna, sabko chidana, khilli udana.. Mann me umang, jaise ho kati patang... Idhar udhar dolna, kahi b ghus jana... !  Wo 'tension free mind' bahut yaad aata hai... Wo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai.... |
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27th March 2009, 11:09 AM
Wo baghon me ghoomna
Aur titliyan pakadna  Wo baarish ke paani me Kagaz ki kashtiyaN chalana Wo padosi ke ladkon se kanche khelna Aur unhe dhoke se haraana  Wo mummy ka daraana, Aur papa ka manaana Wo bachpan bohat yaad aata hai.............. BOHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE RAJ SAHEB,MUJHE BHI APNA BACHPAN YAAD AAGAYA,,.........YUHI LIKHTE RAHIYE....... ZAINY Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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27th March 2009, 01:26 PM
Apne ehsaaso ko share karne k liye thanx zainy ji...
aur b kuch yaad aaye to jrur share kijiyega... |
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27th March 2009, 02:02 PM
Buland Ji, bahut hi khubsurat likha hai, mujhe toh mera bachpan yaad aa gaya............. behand khubsurat, apki kavita pad ke ehsaas hua ki kitni jaldi zindagi ke 22 saal beet gaye, aur aaj me ek 22 saal ka ladka hun, jo apne bachpan ko bahutmiss karta hai.................. behad khusbsurat.....
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Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe  Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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27th March 2009, 02:37 PM
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aapne apne keemti waqt se kuch waqt meri is koshish ko diya... Ise saraaha ... Thanx alot... |
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27th March 2009, 03:34 PM
wo dadi, wo nani,
wo paiyo.N ki kahani, wo raat mei.N chat pe sona, phir darr ke rona, wo gittiyo.N keliye ladai, wo bunk karna padhai, wo 'tension free mind' bht yaad aata hai, wo bachpan bht yaad aata hai. Aj bachpan ki yaad ayi to tumhare is thread ki bhi yaad ayi, sochi kuch share karti hun.......... |
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27th March 2009, 03:44 PM
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actully mujhe tumhare ehsaas padh k wakai me mujhe b ek incident yaad aa gaya... Suno... Wo chat pe sona, darr k rona, bandar ka aana, mujhe le k jaana... wo bandar bahut yaad aata hai, wo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai... |
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27th March 2009, 03:49 PM
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interestingwo bhagho.N mei.N jaana, churake aam khaana, wo bhooto.n ki kahani, dila deti thi yaad nani, wo 'darpok mind' bht yaad aata hai, wo bachpan bht yaad aata hai.............. |
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27th March 2009, 04:04 PM
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wo jb kisi shadi me jaana, naye naye dost banana, raat ko jaagna, jagaana, dosto k sath milke , unko bhoot banake, apne se bado ko daraana... Wo 'Horror mind' bahut yaad aata hai... Wo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai... |
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27th March 2009, 06:43 PM
woh black board par teachers ke cartoon banana
woh teachers day par unki nakl utarna woh ladkiyon ko hamesha pareshaan karna, woh half pant mein jaane par unka machalna woh mere pass unka baithkar mujhko cherna wakai yaar bahot yaad aata hai...... Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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