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ghazal: na hota ishq agar tujhse. - 15th November 2011, 11:54 AM
sdc pariwaar ke sabhi sadasyo ko is naacheej ka namaskaar.kagaj ki kisthi hoon ke baad apni yeh doosri gajal aapke samane pesh kar rahaa hoon.aapki beshkeemtee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
tera wazood meri aahon men bikhara ek nisha hota.
na hota ishq agar tujhse to jaane phir kahaan hota.

tera hona meree aawaaragee ko naqsh deta hai,
meri pachaan kya hotee jo tera naam na hota.

tumharee gamgusaree ka bharam jo dil men na rakhate,
ye aansu aankh se girke na gaalo par rooka hota.

phaqat neend thee,maut na thee, zag jaate zagane se,
pukara door se tumne qareeb aakar chhuaa hota.

isee dar se sapheena dil ka ye girdaab men rakhaa,
ki saahil jaane kab laharo men ghulkar bah gaya hota.

main teri rahgujar men chaar-das kadamo pe simata hoon,
isee jad men bhala rahakar koi kab tak chala hota.

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sdc pariwaar ke sabhi sadasyo ko is naacheej ka namaskaar.kagaj ki kisthi hoon ke baad apni yeh doosri gajal aapke samane pesh kar rahaa hoon.aapki beshkeemtee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
tera wazood meri aahon men bikhara ek nisha hota.
na hota ishq agar tujhse to jaane phir kahaan hota.

tera hona meree aawaaragee ko naqsh deta hai,
meri pachaan kya hotee jo tera naam na hota.

tumharee gamgusaree ka bharam jo dil men na rakhate,
ye aansu aankh se girke na gaalo par rooka hota.

phaqat neend thee,maut na thee, zag jaate zagane se,
pukara door se tumne qareeb aakar chhuaa hota.

isee dar se sapheena dil ka ye girdaab men rakhaa,
ki saahil jaane kab laharo men ghulkar bah gaya hota.

main teri rahgujar men chaar-das kadamo pe simata hoon,
isee jad men bhala rahakar koi kab tak chala hota.

badhee muddat huyee "uffak" abas mayoos rahate ho,
gam e dil bhulkar logo se tu hanskar mila hota.
kyaa likhte h yaar tum............. kamal hai.... hairaan huN ki kafiye galat,,,, behr ek se jydaaa... magar kuch sher .. ek dam pakki behr maiN.... aur itne behtreen ki bas............... hatss of to u...

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sdc pariwaar ke sabhi sadasyo ko is naacheej ka namaskaar.kagaj ki kisthi hoon ke baad apni yeh doosri gajal aapke samane pesh kar rahaa hoon.aapki beshkeemtee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
tera wazood meri aahon men bikhara ek nisha hota.
na hota ishq agar tujhse to jaane phir kahaan hota.

tera hona meree aawaaragee ko naqsh deta hai,
meri pachaan kya hotee jo tera naam na hota.

tumharee gamgusaree ka bharam jo dil men na rakhate,
ye aansu aankh se girke na gaalo par rooka hota.

phaqat neend thee,maut na thee, zag jaate zagane se,
pukara door se tumne qareeb aakar chhuaa hota.

isee dar se sapheena dil ka ye girdaab men rakhaa,
ki saahil jaane kab laharo men ghulkar bah gaya hota.

main teri rahgujar men chaar-das kadamo pe simata hoon,
isee jad men bhala rahakar koi kab tak chala hota.

badhee muddat huyee "uffak" abas mayoos rahate ho,
gam e dil bhulkar logo se tu hanskar mila hota.
mashallah!!! kya baat hai....
uffak saheb bahut gehraayee tak le gaye aap apne ehsaasoN ko is ghazal ke zariye....padh kar bahut bahut achha laga....dheroN daad aur mubaraqbaad....
aap agar bura na maane to ek baat kehna chaahta huN....aap talafuz pe thoda mashq kijiye aur phir dekhiye kya kamaal hota hai...aapke "j" aur "z" meN thodi dikkat hai baqi to sab kamaal hi kamaal hai....
agar aapko mera yuN kehna bura laga ho to mere kahe ko dar kinaar kar deN aur muaf bhi kar deN....lekin aapne itna achha likha hai ki mujh se raha hi nahi gaya....

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kyaa likhte h yaar tum............. kamal hai.... hairaan huN ki kafiye galat,,,, behr ek se jydaaa... magar kuch sher .. ek dam pakki behr maiN.... aur itne behtreen ki bas............... hatss of to u...

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mashallah!!! kya baat hai....
uffak saheb bahut gehraayee tak le gaye aap apne ehsaasoN ko is ghazal ke zariye....padh kar bahut bahut achha laga....dheroN daad aur mubaraqbaad....
aap agar bura na maane to ek baat kehna chaahta huN....aap talafuz pe thoda mashq kijiye aur phir dekhiye kya kamaal hota hai...aapke "j" aur "z" meN thodi dikkat hai baqi to sab kamaal hi kamaal hai....
agar aapko mera yuN kehna bura laga ho to mere kahe ko dar kinaar kar deN aur muaf bhi kar deN....lekin aapne itna achha likha hai ki mujh se raha hi nahi gaya....

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mast sahab, namaskar.ye kya baat huyi ek aur aap mujhe apna dost likhte hai wahi muaphi aur bura lagne jaisee bate karate hai.in friendship.....no sorry ......no thanks.baharaahaal apne meri gajal ko is hadh tak pasand kiya iske liye bahut-2 shukriya.main aapki beshkeemti raay ko dimag men rakhte huye talafuz ka khas khyal rakhoonga.bas aap yun hee hausla badhaate rahiye.
   
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tera wazood meri aahon men bikhara ek nisha hota.
na hota ishq agar tujhse to jaane phir kahaan hota.

tera hona meree aawaaragee ko naqsh deta hai,
meri pachaan kya hotee jo tera naam na hota.

tumharee gamgusaree ka bharam jo dil men na rakhate,
ye aansu aankh se girke na gaalo par rooka hota.

phaqat neend thee,maut na thee, zag jaate zagane se,
pukara door se tumne qareeb aakar chhuaa hota.

isee dar se sapheena dil ka ye girdaab men rakhaa,
ki saahil jaane kab laharo men ghulkar bah gaya hota.

main teri rahgujar men chaar-das kadamo pe simata hoon,
isee jad men bhala rahakar koi kab tak chala hota.

badhee muddat huyee "uffak" abas mayoos rahate ho,
gam e dil bhulkar logo se tu hanskar mila hota.
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Umdaa ... BehtreeN ... Laajawaab Peshkash ... !

Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!



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sdc pariwaar ke sabhi sadasyo ko is naacheej ka namaskaar.kagaj ki kisthi hoon ke baad apni yeh doosri gajal aapke samane pesh kar rahaa hoon.aapki beshkeemtee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
tera wazood meri aahon men bikhara ek nisha hota.
na hota ishq agar tujhse to jaane phir kahaan hota.

tera hona meree aawaaragee ko naqsh deta hai,
meri pachaan kya hotee jo tera naam na hota.

tumharee gamgusaree ka bharam jo dil men na rakhate,
ye aansu aankh se girke na gaalo par rooka hota.

phaqat neend thee,maut na thee, zag jaate zagane se,
pukara door se tumne qareeb aakar chhuaa hota.

isee dar se sapheena dil ka ye girdaab men rakhaa,
ki saahil jaane kab laharo men ghulkar bah gaya hota.

main teri rahgujar men chaar-das kadamo pe simata hoon,
isee jad men bhala rahakar koi kab tak chala hota.

badhee muddat huyee "uffak" abas mayoos rahate ho,
gam e dil bhulkar logo se tu hanskar mila hota.
Boht Acha Likha Hai Bhai........ Go-Ke Ghazal KA Matla Theak Nahi Hai ..... Magar Phir Bhi Boht Achi Lagi..... Ghazal Ki Rawani Or Andaz-e-Bayan Boht BHaya........ Takhayyul Bhi Khooob Raha........

ALLAH Kare Zor-e-Qalam Or Ziada......... Mehnat Jari Rakhiye Or Khush Rahen



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ALLAH Kare Zor-e-Qalam Or Ziada......... Mehnat Jari Rakhiye Or Khush Rahen
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sdc pariwaar ke sabhi sadasyo ko is naacheej ka namaskaar.kagaj ki kisthi hoon ke baad apni yeh doosri gajal aapke samane pesh kar rahaa hoon.aapki beshkeemtee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
tera wazood meri aahon men bikhara ek nisha hota.
na hota ishq agar tujhse to jaane phir kahaan hota.

tera hona meree aawaaragee ko naqsh deta hai,
meri pachaan kya hotee jo tera naam na hota.

tumharee gamgusaree ka bharam jo dil men na rakhate,
ye aansu aankh se girke na gaalo par rooka hota.

phaqat neend thee,maut na thee, zag jaate zagane se,
pukara door se tumne qareeb aakar chhuaa hota.

isee dar se sapheena dil ka ye girdaab men rakhaa,
ki saahil jaane kab laharo men ghulkar bah gaya hota.

main teri rahgujar men chaar-das kadamo pe simata hoon,
isee jad men bhala rahakar koi kab tak chala hota.

badhee muddat huyee "uffak" abas mayoos rahate ho,
gam e dil bhulkar logo se tu hanskar mila hota.
Iss behtareen ghazal ke liye dher saare daad qabool kareiN, Uffak Ji...!

4th one hamara pasandidaa sher hai...!

Keep it up with such amazing creations and take care of yourself, ok...?

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Iss behtareen ghazal ke liye dher saare daad qabool kareiN, Uffak Ji...!

4th one hamara pasandidaa sher hai...!

Keep it up with such amazing creations and take care of yourself, ok...?

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tera wazood meri aahon men bikhara ek nisha hota.
na hota ishq agar tujhse to jaane phir kahaan hota.

tera hona meree aawaaragee ko naqsh deta hai,
meri pachaan kya hotee jo tera naam na hota.

tumharee gamgusaree ka bharam jo dil men na rakhate,
ye aansu aankh se girke na gaalo par rooka hota.

phaqat neend thee,maut na thee, zag jaate zagane se,
pukara door se tumne qareeb aakar chhuaa hota.

isee dar se sapheena dil ka ye girdaab men rakhaa,
ki saahil jaane kab laharo men ghulkar bah gaya hota.

main teri rahgujar men chaar-das kadamo pe simata hoon,
isee jad men bhala rahakar koi kab tak chala hota.

badhee muddat huyee "uffak" abas mayoos rahate ho,
gam e dil bhulkar logo se tu hanskar mila hota.

bahot khub uff ak sahab
achchi ghazal par daad qabul farmayen

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