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Zindagi Mili Hai.. -
30th June 2006, 11:29 AM
Hello..friends!....Dua-salaam sabko!
Main aaj yaha kafi wqt k baad kuch likne aayi hu...kuch kaam ki masrufiyat badh gayi hai aaj kal to likh nahi paati..and the most sad part is padh bhi nahi paati  ...par aaj kuch likha hai mene..Ek khas shakhs k liye..n u would not be able to guess...who...he is!....... "our Family doctor"! ... Unse zindagi ki kai ese lamhe jude hain jise hum chahe to bhi bula na skenge...aur chahe to bhi unka karz chuka na skenge...He is a very very dear person to all of us in our family....! Hum kabhi kabhi shukriya aada nahi kar paate kuch logo ka...aur fir jab khayal aata hai to shayad der ho chuki hoti hai...muje der nahi karni!  so aaj joo likha hai...share kar rahi hu. (baap re inta lamba intro mene life mai nahi likha...kindly bear )-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Aap ki muskurahat se hume zindagi mili hai jab bhi aap se mile, dhadkano ko mausiqi mili hai Hum kis roop ka kare shukriya ada Aap k har roop se hume Taazgi mili hai Aap k komal sparsh ka sookun Aap ki baato ka meetha jaadu Jab bhi talasha aapki shakhsiyat ko hume sirf saadgi mili hai Jab jab mausam rutha hai jab logo ka saath chuta hai aap k hi dar se dil ko humdili mili hai kuch log zindagi se mila karte hai kuch logoN se "Zindagi" milti hai humne ye tab se jana hai, …jab se zindagi ko Aap ki maujudgi mili hai! Thanks Doctor Uncle! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- komal |
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30th June 2006, 01:26 PM
Hi Komal,
Very sweetly written... different from what u write usually.... A very sweet dedication... i hope u show it to him... he will really like it... very touching... do keep writing... tc Rohin |
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30th June 2006, 02:10 PM
Hi Rohin..!
He is too sweet..is liye sweet ho gayi hai poem! Thanks a lot!....ya i wd show it 2 him....wondering how wd he react!  tc komal |
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wah wah bhut pyari nazam hai...... |
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wah wah bhut pyari nazam hai...... -
30th June 2006, 03:23 PM
komal ji bhut pyari soach hai appki......kasam say bhut umda kalaam hai rouh ko sakoon mila appki nazam parhkar.......appka dost raj..........
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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30th June 2006, 06:19 PM
Thanks so much...Rajveer....
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30th June 2006, 06:27 PM
very touching komal ji n so very true,bahut sahi likha aapne.acha laga aapko padhkar.ikhte rahiye yunhin
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30th June 2006, 06:55 PM
mari priy Komal,
saras anubhuti....nirmal bhav.. aaje j aemne jai vanchaav je tari di |
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2nd July 2006, 09:42 PM
Hi Komal,
Very Nice Lines Dear. Pure, sweet and Innocent. Keep It Up Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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4th July 2006, 08:16 PM
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Hello..akeli jaan ji! bahot shukriya aapka...! aap ka jawab pakar bahut achha lga! tc komal |
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4th July 2006, 08:19 PM
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Ej diwase emne wanchavi hati mai...! He liked it a lot!! tc komal |
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4th July 2006, 08:20 PM
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hi komal ji |
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hi komal ji -
7th July 2006, 10:59 PM
Pahele tho kesi ho aap aaj behot deeno baad aap ka likha kuch padhne ko mila yeha aap nehi thi aur veha karan G bhi kuch gayeb se ho gaye the nejane ku esha lagta tha ke aap dono ke ewal jewab chalte the vo band ho gaye mager aacha lega aaj behot deeno baad aap ko yeha dekh kar aur ek baat aaj aapne jo likha sach kehu tho wake hi tarif ke kabil ho aap kuch hatt ke likha hai aap ne aur esha likha ke dil ko chu geya aur kuch baat jo aksar bhul jate hai vo aaj aapne fir yaad diladi ek aacaha shayer yehi chahta hai ke logo ko kuch aacha suna sake aur vehi aapne bhi kiye aur sach mey aacha lega ....................
aap shayed muje bhul geyi hogi mager mey aap ko nehi bhula ............. aap ko shayad yaad ho mey vehi hu jisne aapko keha tha ke aap ka har kalam mere paas save kiya huwa hai aur karan ji ka bhi .............. yaad aaya ? ha vehi SOME ONE aaj bhi aap ke dono ke likhe huwe har kelaam ko apne paas rakhta hu aur ab tho ek aadet si pad geyi hai aap ke likhe kalam save karne ki ........................ oooooooopppppppppps sorry aaj kuch jada hi likh diya shayad aapko bore kerdiya .....mosame shayri mey dil ka haal suna diya .......... kya keru aap ne apne kalam se mera dil jo chura liya.............. kesi rahi choti si hai mager uhi ban geyi chalta hu take care of ur self hamesha uhi aap likhti rahe yehi duwa karta hu J S K SOME ONE |
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9th July 2006, 04:20 PM
Helo Sumone ji!
Main achhi hu...umeed hai aap bhi achhe honge!... Han muje yaad hai apne kaha tha aap meri kavitaeN pasand karte hain. Muje khushi hai ki is baar bhi aapko mera likha pasand aaya,....!!! nahi aapne bore nahi kiya ...Thanks so much...!! tc Jai shree krishna komal |
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18th July 2006, 03:53 PM
Aap ki muskurahat se hume zindagi mili hai
jab bhi aap se mile, dhadkano ko mausiqi mili hai Hum kis roop ka kare shukriya ada Aap k har roop se hume Taazgi mili hai hmmmm...... Aap k komal sparsh ka sookun Aap ki baato ka meetha jaadu Jab bhi talasha aapki shakhsiyat ko hume sirf saadgi mili hai nice words Jab jab mausam rutha hai jab logo ka saath chuta hai aap k hi dar se dil ko humdili mili hai very nice... kuch log zindagi se mila karte hai kuch logoN se "Zindagi" milti hai humne ye tab se jana hai, …jab se zindagi ko Aap ki maujudgi mili hai! waaah.... sooo sweet... Dear Komal, This is suchhhh a shweet dedication... maasoom si pyaari si.... Loved it yaar srsly loved it..... Sach kaha tumne kucch logon ka hum humesha shukriya kehna chaahte hain par keh nahi paate.... I also hope that you show this to him( If not already shown)... Mujhe badaa hi accha laga ise padhkar.... kuchc cheezen dil ko choo jaati hain.... take care..... PS: Saw u writing a background for the poem for the first time but it really helps Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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hi -
19th July 2006, 11:05 AM
Hey pulkit...it was not the first time...ya bt definately the 1st big intro!....
Usually to intro poem mai ek engaging factor add karne k liye, deti hun, is baar kissa kuch aur tha....muje is liye dena pada taake...poem ki feel k sath feeling ka root point bhi smajh aa jaye! ( u see adding sum cosmatics 2 sumthing n having a necessity..is differnt!...ye Graphics launguage defination tha. )Vese mai dar rahi thi k baaki sab ki thik hai, mere Doc Uncle ko ye root point smajh ayega ya nahi!... but thank god he reacted so wel....he read n took my hand in his...n smiled! ...thanks...yaar tumhe ise padna achha laga! tc komal |
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