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hum tumhe YAAD karte hai (for my mast bhai) - 11th October 2004, 08:17 PM

ye meri taraf se mere mast bhai ke liye hai... aur har us dost ki taraf se us dost ke liye jo sat samundar par door kahin rehta hai...


door desh main nishan hai tera…
badi imarton main basera hai tera..
bharat main phir bhi hum dua karte hai
ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai…

maa ki gaud se juda ho tum…
wahan ke chahe khuda ho tum…
hum khuda se par fariyad karte hai..
ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai…

kayi din hue tumko yahan se gaye…
yaden kyun dil main chor gaye…
tere khaton ko shubah sham padte hai…
ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai….

Kheton main aaj bhi hawa lehrati hai…
Khushbu teri bhi inme se aati hai…
Inme aaj bhi tumhe khelte dekha karte hai..
Ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai…

Tu bade bade kalamo ko aaj likhta hai
Par tere School ka wo bag khali dikhta hai
Hum teri kitabon ko bhi chooma karte hai…
Ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai…

Wo chat pe beetti thi garam raten
Doston se pyar-takrar ki baten..
Hum khidki se aaj dekha karte hai…
Ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai…

Paas ke bagh main har sham ko jana…
Ghoomte ghoomte ladki ko patana …
Ab kahan wo deewane yaar karte hai…
Ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai…

Ab aaja ki bohat din hue…
Rasta dekhte thakte na hue
aaj bhi har pal tera intzar karte hai
ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai…

maa ki gaud main sir rakh lena…
papa ke kandhe pet um ro lena…
doston ke dil milne ko karte hai…
ki hum tumhe yad karte hai…

askho ko ab hansi bana do..
apne bhai ko “mast” bana do…
hum sab tumhe “saccha_pyar” karte hai
ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai…


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11th October 2004, 10:19 PM

Kunal BHaI

kYa kaHuN aaB . . . . . . . . . . . DiL CheeR ke BaS TuM SeedHe AanDar aa BaiTHe Ho. . . .

askho ko ab hansi bana do..
apne bhai ko “mast” bana do…
hum sab tumhe “saccha_pyar” karte hai
ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai…


KuNaL....

BaS ItNa hi

Kis ghaadi ka koi punya mere kaam aaya
tere milne se yun sawar hum gaye
tere izzat mohabbat mein lafz kam padhte hai
ki hum bhi tumhe itna yaad karte hai..

dhadkhane dil ki abaad karte hai
tumhe bhi hum itna yaad karte hai...



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12th October 2004, 12:05 AM

kunal bhai...

o mere kunal bhai... maine wakai main aap sa dost bana ke koi galti nahi ki... bhai aapka ye kalam padh ke aankhon main nami aa gayi... mujhe nahi maloom mast bhai kahan rehte hai... par jahan bhi hai.. is gazal ko padne ke bad aapko hindustan jaroor yaad aaa jayega ... mast bhai par ye khali ek creation nahi hai... main to hairan hun ... kunal bhai aap kitna pyar karte ho apne doston ko... pehle priya ke liye woh gana likha ... aur aaj mast bhai ke liye itni ek poorri gazal... woh bhi aisi jo seedha dil par asar kare ... bhai koi kahan karta hai kisi ke liye aaj itna ... bhai kasam se meri aankhen num ho aayi tumhare pyar ko dekh ke... kunal bhai wakai main aap jitna accha likhte ho usse jyada acche insaan ho... bhai aapse milne ki tamnna si jag gayi hai wakai main.... bhai jaroor milunga tumse jaldi hi... mast bhai mere kunal bhai ko pyar jaroor dena unki is gazal pe aur samet ke rakhna apne dil main iska har ek lafz... kunal bhai apna khyal rakhna ... aapka bhai chara bhagwan kare yun hi rahe... numi ankhon main liye aapko dua deta hua ...

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12th October 2004, 01:11 AM

hi kanu,

wah wah kya likha hai . manna padega kanu .

her waqt , her emotion ko tum akruti de sakte ho . gr8 job

perdes jane wale ki yaden kitni pida deti hai . kitna bakhubu pesh kiya tumne, mast ke liye jo likha yeh tumha ra uske liye pyar dikhata hai , kyonki jaanti hu shabdo se nahi tum dil se likhte ho.


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12th October 2004, 01:20 AM

Kunal Bhaiya..

Itna pyar aur itna sneh.. kahan milta hai.. jitne yahan mila hume aap sab se...

I'm so proud ki main is pyare parivaar ka hissa hun... aur itne ache, itne pyare bhai hain...

Aapne sach mein bahut achi kavita likhi hai Mast Bhaiya ke liye.. Ithi khoobsoorat ki lafz nahi hain mere paas...

Yunhi nahi hum fariyaad karTe hain..
Tumhara pyar apne aanchal mein sama leTe hain..
Mile sada yunhi pyar aur saaTh bhaiyon ka..
Lambi ho unki umar... yehi keh ke unhe yaad karTe hain..
Ki hum bhi.. jab kabhi fariyaad karTe hain..
Bas Tumhe yaad karTe hain..

Apna khayaal rakhiye..


Mast Bhaiya..

Aapki likhi woh chaar panktiyaan..
bilkul sach hain... khoon ke rishton se badh ke hain yeh rishte apne.. jin mein pyar is kadar koot koot ke bhara hai.. ki har dum fairyaad karte hain.. bas tumhe yaad karte hain...

Bahut Khoob!!!

Aap dono apna khayaal rakhiye..

~Priya



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12th October 2004, 09:38 AM

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kYa kaHuN aaB . . . . . . . . . . . DiL CheeR ke BaS TuM SeedHe AanDar aa BaiTHe Ho. . . .

askho ko ab hansi bana do..
apne bhai ko “mast” bana do…
hum sab tumhe “saccha_pyar” karte hai
ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai…

KuNaL....

BaS ItNa hi

Kis ghaadi ka koi punya mere kaam aaya
tere milne se yun sawar hum gaye
tere izzat mohabbat mein lafz kam padhte hai
ki hum bhi tumhe itna yaad karte hai..

dhadkhane dil ki abaad karte hai
tumhe bhi hum itna yaad karte hai...


bhai...

shukriya jo aap mere liye apne dil ke darwaze khol ke rakhte ho ...bhai aapne jo line likhi sahi main mere pas aapki baton koi jawab nahi... aaj ye post likh ke meri khud ki aankhen num ho gayi... aapka reply padhne ke bad ...bhai yun hi yad karte rehna bhai...

tumhara chota bhai...

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kunal bhai...

o mere kunal bhai... maine wakai main aap sa dost bana ke koi galti nahi ki... bhai aapka ye kalam padh ke aankhon main nami aa gayi... mujhe nahi maloom mast bhai kahan rehte hai... par jahan bhi hai.. is gazal ko padne ke bad aapko hindustan jaroor yaad aaa jayega ... mast bhai par ye khali ek creation nahi hai... main to hairan hun ... kunal bhai aap kitna pyar karte ho apne doston ko... pehle priya ke liye woh gana likha ... aur aaj mast bhai ke liye itni ek poorri gazal... woh bhi aisi jo seedha dil par asar kare ... bhai koi kahan karta hai kisi ke liye aaj itna ... bhai kasam se meri aankhen num ho aayi tumhare pyar ko dekh ke... kunal bhai wakai main aap jitna accha likhte ho usse jyada acche insaan ho... bhai aapse milne ki tamnna si jag gayi hai wakai main.... bhai jaroor milunga tumse jaldi hi... mast bhai mere kunal bhai ko pyar jaroor dena unki is gazal pe aur samet ke rakhna apne dil main iska har ek lafz... kunal bhai apna khyal rakhna ... aapka bhai chara bhagwan kare yun hi rahe... numi ankhon main liye aapko dua deta hua ...
bhai raj...

bhai ye to ap jante hai ki humko kareeb lake apne theek kiya ya galat... par aap ko humne apna ke bohat sahi kam kiya hai hume faqra hai aape..bhai aap ke jazbat mere is kalam se nikal pade aapka meri aankhen bhi um ho gayi ye dekh... sahi kaha bhai mast bhai ko jaroor apna hindustan yaad aayega hi ... aur dekho unhone kaha bhi hai ... ki wo bhi hume yaad karte hai.. bhai main accha hun kyunki aap acche ho achhe logon ka asar to aayega hi na..bhai aap mujhse jab marji mil sakte hai... jaisa ki aapko maine apna id bhi diya tha pichle post pe ...aapki dua ke liye shukriya ... aur baki jo sawal mast ji se kiye hai .. umeed hai unke jawab aapko mast ji jaroor denege ....

milta hun aapse phir

aapka apna

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12th October 2004, 12:27 PM

Kunal ji...

Aapki ye rachna.. ek rachna nahi, ek jazba hai.. ek ehsaas hai.. jazba dosti ka.. ehsaas apnepan ka.. jab bhi koi kalaam, dil se likha gaya ho.. to usme ek ajab si kashish hoti hai... paRne waale ke dil me wahi jazbaat kuchh hadh tak panapte hain.. kuchh is tarah asar rakhte hain dil se likhe gaye lafz.. aur aapke is kalaam ka har lafz aisa hi hai...

Bohat khoob likha hai aapne!

Behad khushi hui aapke aur mast ji ke beech ye bhaichara dekh kar.. sach, yahaan kitne hi rishte ban gaye han .. dil ke.

yunhi likhte rahiyega... aur dill se daad kubool kijiyega..


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12th October 2004, 06:23 PM

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hi kanu,

wah wah kya likha hai . manna padega kanu .

her waqt , her emotion ko tum akruti de sakte ho . gr8 job

perdes jane wale ki yaden kitni pida deti hai . kitna bakhubu pesh kiya tumne, mast ke liye jo likha yeh tumha ra uske liye pyar dikhata hai , kyonki jaanti hu shabdo se nahi tum dil se likhte ho.


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man gayi na ...manna hi tha beta ... humne is bar likha hi aisa hai... khud ko yakeen nahi ho raha itna sab kaise likh gaya...aur tumne to wakai main aasman pe chada diya... main to bas kosish karta hun jo sochta hu use likh paun ... yahi bas is kalam main kiya .. woh bat aur hai ki ye kalam mujhe khud ko rula gaya... shukria mayu meri bhavnaye samajhne ke liye.. tum yun hi mera sath dena ... kyunki tum janti ho tum mere liye kitni importent ho... sath yun hi dena main likhta rahunga ...

tumhara

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13th October 2004, 12:55 PM

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Kunal Bhaiya..

Itna pyar aur itna sneh.. kahan milta hai.. jitne yahan mila hume aap sab se...

I'm so proud ki main is pyare parivaar ka hissa hun... aur itne ache, itne pyare bhai hain...

Aapne sach mein bahut achi kavita likhi hai Mast Bhaiya ke liye.. Ithi khoobsoorat ki lafz nahi hain mere paas...

Yunhi nahi hum fariyaad karTe hain..
Tumhara pyar apne aanchal mein sama leTe hain..
Mile sada yunhi pyar aur saaTh bhaiyon ka..
Lambi ho unki umar... yehi keh ke unhe yaad karTe hain..
Ki hum bhi.. jab kabhi fariyaad karTe hain..
Bas Tumhe yaad karTe hain..

Apna khayaal rakhiye..


Mast Bhaiya..

Aapki likhi woh chaar panktiyaan..
bilkul sach hain... khoon ke rishton se badh ke hain yeh rishte apne.. jin mein pyar is kadar koot koot ke bhara hai.. ki har dum fairyaad karte hain.. bas tumhe yaad karte hain...

Bahut Khoob!!!

Aap dono apna khayaal rakhiye..

~Priya
han priya ...

sahi kaha itna pyar itna sneh kahin nahi mil sakta.... mujhe khud ko proud hai aur humsab ko hona chaiye .... aur tumhara pyar humare liye bhi kam nahi hai.. meri ye kavita mast bhai ke liye dil se likhi hai is liye ye mujhe bhi asand hai tumne pasand kiya bahut accha laga ... tum aayi yahio kafi hai kuch na kaho ...

aur han wakai main mast bhai ne apne jazbat bayn kar meri aankhen bhi nam kar di hai ...tumhari dua hum dono bhai kabool karte hai aur behna tum bhi apna khayal rakhna ...

tumhare apne

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13th October 2004, 05:05 PM

maa ki gaud se juda ho tum…
wahan ke chahe khuda ho tum…
hum khuda se par fariyad karte hai..
ki hum tumhe yaad karte hai…


Kunal Bhaaii..

Bahoot zabardast likha hai aap ne.. YuN tou puri qalam kaabil-e-taareef hai.. Lekin aap ne jo jasbaat se yahaan is qalam ko pesh kiya hai..uss ke tou kahna hi kyaa.. Padhte hi mujhe"Naam" film ka wo gaana yaad aa gaya jis ka bol hai "chhitthi aayi hai".. Bahoot hi achchha likha hai aap ne.. Taareef qabul kijiye..

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13th October 2004, 08:06 PM

Doston...

Priya ji Afshan Ji Mayuri Ji Raj Bhai Mayank Ji

Aap sabne jo alfaz likhe shayad mein itna kaabil nahi ki unke aage apni baat keh paaun...Kunal aur aap sabse jo pyaar, izzat maan mila hai bas rom rom aab mehak uthaa hai...

Kehne ko hum mein se kisi ka koi rishta nahi phir bhi hum sab ek dusre se itne jude hai jaise hum sadiyon se ek dusre ke saath ho..Woh khuda us insaan ko itni dua dega .... Gaurav Ji aap nahi Jaante par aapki zara si koshish yeh website mehaz ek website nahi Yeh logo ka dil aur dil ki dhadhkan ban kar sama gayi hai..

Ek se ek anmol hiraa hai yaha hai par...har ek apne mein nayaab jispar faqr ho

Kunal..mere bhai..pyar izzat dena koi tumse sekhe..aaj agar saari duniya sun rahi ho to kaan khol ke sune kyonki shayad itna aacha bhai mujhe naseeb se milaa hai

Raj Bhai aap jis lagawaat se mere bhai ka saath dete hai bas khuda se duaa hai yeh badhti hi jaaye aur armaan hai ki aapke bhi seene se laga loon...Hamesha Yunhi hamare saath rahiYeGaa

Priya .. Tum kal rawaana ho rahi ho aur dekho tumhare bhai ki aankh aabhi se bhar aayi tumhe door jaata hua dekh dil pighal raha hai..ho sake to aapne in bhaaiyon ki yaad dil mein rakhnaa

Afshan Ji Mayuri Ji aap dono khud hi itna aacha likhti hai ki bas kya kaha jaaye par aap dono ne mera aur kunal ka jis tarah saath diya hai bas aage bhi hum isi par nirbhar hai aur umeed hai ki aage bhi aap dono ka pyaar aur sahyog hamare dono ke saath rahegaa

Mayank Bhai aapne khoob kahani bhi kuch naam film jaisi hai....

Aaj Yahi likhne ko mann kar raha hai

Upar Mera Naam Likha Hai,
Andar Ye Paigham Likha Hai
O Pardes Ko Jaane Vaale,
Laut Ke Phir Na Aane Vaale
Saat Samundar Paar Gaya Tu,
Humko Zinda Maar Gaya Tu
Khoon Ke Rishte Todh Gaya Tu,
Aankh Mein Aansoo Chhodh Gaya Tu
Kum Khaate Hain Kum Sote Hain,
Bahut Zyaada Hum Rote Hain
Chitthi Aayi Hai ...

Sooni Ho Gaeen Shehar Ki Galiyaan,
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Kehte Hain Saawan Ke Jhule,
Bhool Gaya Tu Hum Nahin Bhoole
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Tere Bin Jab Aayi Holi,
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Peepal Soona Panghat Soona
Ghar Shamshaan Ka Bana Namoona
Fasal Kati Aayi Baisakhi,
Tera Aana Reh Gaya Baaki
Chitthi Aai Hai ...

Pehle Jab Tu Khat Likhta Tha
Kaagaz Mein Chehra Dikhta Tha
Bund Hua Yeh Mel Bhi Ab To,
Khatam Hua Yeh Khel Bhi Ab To
Doli Mein Jab Baithi Behna,
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Teri Maan Ka Haal Bura Hai
Teri Biwi Karti Hai Seva,
Soorat Se Lagti Hai Bewa
Toone Paisa Bahut Kamaaya,
Is Paise Ne Desh Chhudaaya
Desh Parayaa Chodd ke Aaja
Panchhi Pinjra Todh Ke Aaja


Bas Itna hi..is se jayada num ho gayi aankhein to kahi chalak na Jaaye

Aap sabka abhaari

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14th October 2004, 01:07 PM

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Kunal ji...

Aapki ye rachna.. ek rachna nahi, ek jazba hai.. ek ehsaas hai.. jazba dosti ka.. ehsaas apnepan ka.. jab bhi koi kalaam, dil se likha gaya ho.. to usme ek ajab si kashish hoti hai... paRne waale ke dil me wahi jazbaat kuchh hadh tak panapte hain.. kuchh is tarah asar rakhte hain dil se likhe gaye lafz.. aur aapke is kalaam ka har lafz aisa hi hai...

Bohat khoob likha hai aapne!

Behad khushi hui aapke aur mast ji ke beech ye bhaichara dekh kar.. sach, yahaan kitne hi rishte ban gaye han .. dil ke.

yunhi likhte rahiyega... aur dill se daad kubool kijiyega..
afsan ji ...

aapka shukriya ada kaise karoo ... aapne is post pe aane ki jehmat uthayi... aur mera pyar mere bhai ke liye bayan bhi kiya... sahi kaha is kalam ka ek ek lafz dil se likha gaya hai... tabhi ise likh ke main khud roya ... ... sach kahun to ab tak ke sabse acche kalam laga mujhe ... aur mast bhai ko bhi ye pasand aaya ... aap sath yun hi dete rehna hum yun hi likhte rahnege... daad aapki humne kabool ki ...

shukriya afsan ji

is post ki shobha badhane ke liye

aapka apna

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Kunal Bhaaii..

Bahoot zabardast likha hai aap ne.. YuN tou puri qalam kaabil-e-taareef hai.. Lekin aap ne jo jasbaat se yahaan is qalam ko pesh kiya hai..uss ke tou kahna hi kyaa.. Padhte hi mujhe"Naam" film ka wo gaana yaad aa gaya jis ka bol hai "chhitthi aayi hai".. Bahoot hi achchha likha hai aap ne.. Taareef qabul kijiye..

I inspired.

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mayank bhai ...

bhai aapka aana usse jyada jabardast hai.. mere emotion samajhne ke liye... aapne mere kalam ko padha aapko accha laga ... bohat khushi hui ... bhai wakai main mere dil main na jane kya hai jo main mast bhai se itna jud gaya hun... aur mere jazbat jab upar ho gaye to ye qalam bana dala maine... aapne bohat hi acche gane ki yaad dila di jab bhi sunta hun use ... ankhen nam ho jati hai ... aapki tareef ke liye aapka teh dil se shukra gujar hun

aapka apna

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Priya ji Afshan Ji Mayuri Ji Raj Bhai Mayank Ji

Aap sabne jo alfaz likhe shayad mein itna kaabil nahi ki unke aage apni baat keh paaun...Kunal aur aap sabse jo pyaar, izzat maan mila hai bas rom rom aab mehak uthaa hai...

Kehne ko hum mein se kisi ka koi rishta nahi phir bhi hum sab ek dusre se itne jude hai jaise hum sadiyon se ek dusre ke saath ho..Woh khuda us insaan ko itni dua dega .... Gaurav Ji aap nahi Jaante par aapki zara si koshish yeh website mehaz ek website nahi Yeh logo ka dil aur dil ki dhadhkan ban kar sama gayi hai..

Ek se ek anmol hiraa hai yaha hai par...har ek apne mein nayaab jispar faqr ho

Kunal..mere bhai..pyar izzat dena koi tumse sekhe..aaj agar saari duniya sun rahi ho to kaan khol ke sune kyonki shayad itna aacha bhai mujhe naseeb se milaa hai

Raj Bhai aap jis lagawaat se mere bhai ka saath dete hai bas khuda se duaa hai yeh badhti hi jaaye aur armaan hai ki aapke bhi seene se laga loon...Hamesha Yunhi hamare saath rahiYeGaa

Priya .. Tum kal rawaana ho rahi ho aur dekho tumhare bhai ki aankh aabhi se bhar aayi tumhe door jaata hua dekh dil pighal raha hai..ho sake to aapne in bhaaiyon ki yaad dil mein rakhnaa

Afshan Ji Mayuri Ji aap dono khud hi itna aacha likhti hai ki bas kya kaha jaaye par aap dono ne mera aur kunal ka jis tarah saath diya hai bas aage bhi hum isi par nirbhar hai aur umeed hai ki aage bhi aap dono ka pyaar aur sahyog hamare dono ke saath rahegaa

Mayank Bhai aapne khoob kahani bhi kuch naam film jaisi hai....

Aaj Yahi likhne ko mann kar raha hai

Upar Mera Naam Likha Hai,
Andar Ye Paigham Likha Hai
O Pardes Ko Jaane Vaale,
Laut Ke Phir Na Aane Vaale
Saat Samundar Paar Gaya Tu,
Humko Zinda Maar Gaya Tu
Khoon Ke Rishte Todh Gaya Tu,
Aankh Mein Aansoo Chhodh Gaya Tu
Kum Khaate Hain Kum Sote Hain,
Bahut Zyaada Hum Rote Hain
Chitthi Aayi Hai ...

Sooni Ho Gaeen Shehar Ki Galiyaan,
Kaante Ban Gaeen Baag Ki Kaliyaan
Kehte Hain Saawan Ke Jhule,
Bhool Gaya Tu Hum Nahin Bhoole
Tere Bin Jab Aayi Diwali,
Deep Nahin Dil Jale Hain Khaali
Tere Bin Jab Aayi Holi,
Pichkaari Se Chhooti Goli
Peepal Soona Panghat Soona
Ghar Shamshaan Ka Bana Namoona
Fasal Kati Aayi Baisakhi,
Tera Aana Reh Gaya Baaki
Chitthi Aai Hai ...

Pehle Jab Tu Khat Likhta Tha
Kaagaz Mein Chehra Dikhta Tha
Bund Hua Yeh Mel Bhi Ab To,
Khatam Hua Yeh Khel Bhi Ab To
Doli Mein Jab Baithi Behna,
Rasta Dekh Rahe The Naina
Maein To Baap Hoon Mera Kya Hai,
Teri Maan Ka Haal Bura Hai
Teri Biwi Karti Hai Seva,
Soorat Se Lagti Hai Bewa
Toone Paisa Bahut Kamaaya,
Is Paise Ne Desh Chhudaaya
Desh Parayaa Chodd ke Aaja
Panchhi Pinjra Todh Ke Aaja


Bas Itna hi..is se jayada num ho gayi aankhein to kahi chalak na Jaaye

Aap sabka abhaari

-aapka apnaa
mast bhai...

aapko to maloom hai aaj mai kis halat main hun bas bhai jyada to nlikh nahi sakta par bhai aapki aaj bohat yaad aarahi hai sahi main aapne kal rat phone kiiya to laga main wakai jaldi theek ho jaounga

Priya ji Afshan Ji Mayuri Ji Raj Bhai Mayank Ji

aap sab logo ka bhi shukriya

mayu tum mayu i miss u yar mere sath rehna yun hi


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19th October 2004, 01:18 PM

Raj Bhai aap jis lagawaat se mere bhai ka saath dete hai bas khuda se duaa hai yeh badhti hi jaaye aur armaan hai ki aapke bhi seene se laga loon...Hamesha Yunhi hamare saath rahiYeGaa

bhai mast...

bhai kunal jitna aapka hai utna hi main bhi use chahta hun...aur aap bhi mere bhai hi hai ... seene se kya apne dil main bitha lijiye hume bhi .... aap bhi yun hi sath rahiyega ...


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bhai mast...

bhai kunal jitna aapka hai utna hi main bhi use chahta hun...aur aap bhi mere bhai hi hai ... seene se kya apne dil main bitha lijiye hume bhi .... aap bhi yun hi sath rahiyega ...
raj bhai

aapne mujhse pehle kyun nahi bataya .... mast bhai ko itna man dene ke liye shukriya mere bhai


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hi - 7th November 2004, 06:22 PM

hi kunal bhai

kasie ho aap. wah wah

bhoot khoob, itna piyaar hai aapki kavita mai saath mai dard bi hai wot a combination i think mast ji bhut lucky hai jin ko aap jaisa dost mila. kunke sache dosto ka milna bhut mushkil hai is duniya mai. neway mai jo bi kaho is kavita ke liye kam ho ga.

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Bilkul sahi kaha romaana ji..mein wakaai bahut lucky hoon!!

likhte rahiYeGaa

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Re: hi - 9th November 2004, 11:47 AM

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hi kunal bhai

kasie ho aap. wah wah

bhoot khoob, itna piyaar hai aapki kavita mai saath mai dard bi hai wot a combination i think mast ji bhut lucky hai jin ko aap jaisa dost mila. kunke sache dosto ka milna bhut mushkil hai is duniya mai. neway mai jo bi kaho is kavita ke liye kam ho ga.

keep on writing
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shukriya romana ji...

main ek dum theek hun...

aap meri sabse fav poem pe aayi hai .. ye mujhe sabse jyada azeez hai ... meri har tarah ki kavita shayri ssaabme .... aur jitne lucky mast bhai hai utna hi main bhi ... sach sacche dost mushkil se hi milte hai .... aapka shukriya kaise ada karoo main khud nahi janta


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mujhe lucky kehna tha .... aap se jyada lucky hun main ... mujhe bada bhai mila /// bada mane jyda


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