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A diffrent one from gaalib -
16th February 2005, 09:23 AM
gaalib wrote sevreal poetry,i got many of them but yet this is one of a very diffrent of from Gaalib:-
koi umeed bar* nahi aati koi surat nazar nahi aati maut ka ek din mua-iyan* hai neend kyun raat bhar nahi aati aage aati thee haal-e-dil pe hansi ab kissi baat per nahi aati jaanta houn savaab-ta_ato zehad* per tabiyat idhar nahi aati hai kuch aisee he baat jo chup houn verna kya baat kar nahi aati kyun na cheekhun ke yaad kerte hain meri awaaz gar nahi aati daag-e-dil gar nazar nahi aata boo bhee e charagar* nahi aati hum wahaan hain jahaan se humko he khud humari khabar nahi aati marrte hain aarzoo me marne ki maut aati hai per nahi aati kaaba kiss muh se jaoge gaalib sharm tumko magar nahi aati bar--completly mua-iyan---definate the result ho worship charagar---healer Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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16th February 2005, 09:31 AM
Thanks Karan,
For sharing such good words with us the composition is fantastic well we can not compliment "galib ji" ki shayri as its always good but still i said this Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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20th February 2005, 10:57 AM
Wah Karan,
koi umeed bar* nahi aati koi surat nazar nahi aati kaaba kiss muh se jaoge gaalib sharm tumko magar nahi aati kya likha hai, Really wonderful thought!!! |
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