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19th September 2005, 05:17 PM
1.Khali shishe bhi nishan rakhte hain,
tute hue dil bhi armaan rakhte hain,
Jo khamoshi mein guzar jate hain,
Vo dariya bhi dil mein toofaan rakhte hain!!
*Shishe = Mirrors
Dariya = Rivers
2.Dilo se khelne ka hunar hume nahi aata,
Is liye ishq ki baazi hum haar gaye,
Humari zindgi se sayad unhe bohat pyar tha,
Is liye vo hume zinda hi maar gaye!!
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20th September 2005, 07:35 PM
Hi mohit..
Thoughts wonderfully expressed.. The first verse was 2 good!
take care
zee..
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20th September 2005, 08:17 PM
hello 1% shareef munde ji......
behad asardaar shabd hain......loved both of them........
do keep writing.........
luv,
KaSaK.........
~A tease in heart~
Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii,
Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN ..
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20th September 2005, 09:35 PM
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21st September 2005, 11:51 AM
bahut bahut bahut khooob.... fantastic.......
Pallavi...
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22nd September 2005, 06:38 PM
Hi Unki Dewani ji
Vaise unki kinki??? ......Meri??
just joking....never mind and take care
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22nd September 2005, 06:40 PM
Dear kasak ji
thanks
aapke jab bhi reply karti hain to bohat acha lagta hai
kyonki........
kyonki aapke piche piche 1-2 reply aur aa jate hain
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22nd September 2005, 06:51 PM
Dear Lucky ji
thanks for replying
yeah ofcourse try karunga aur acha likhne ki.....
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hi -
22nd September 2005, 06:57 PM
hi mohit
kaise ho
vow i m impressd bhut hi acha likha hai tum ne. humai to nahi pata tha ke aap chupe rustam ho shayri seedhe dil ko cho gayi. asaan or simple lafzo se pesh ki hoi aapki yeh nazam bhut piyaari hai.
waise tum 99% shareef kab se ho gaye ho
tc
keep on writing
bye
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22nd September 2005, 06:58 PM
Dear Pallavi
thanks
vaise aapka naam mujhe kissi ki yaad dilata hai...
you know kiski??
chalo jane do... fir kabhi btayunga
take care
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22nd September 2005, 07:12 PM
Hi Romana ji
main to bachpan se hi sareef munda hu
sayad aap bhool gayi
haan vaise bhi abhi to aap thori si budhi ho gayi hogi
aur is umar main to yaadaast kuch kam ho hi jati hai na
hey hey never mind and take care of yourself
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hi -
22nd September 2005, 07:17 PM
hi mohit
kiya baat hai
loog umar ke saath bade hote hai aur aap lagta hai ke dossre aur ja rahe hai
waise meri yadaash theek hai lakin jab bi koi aage aake kahe ke mai shareef hoo to bala ab uski baat kon maanega lagta to aisa hai yaar ke tum 1 % shrafat maintain kiye hove ho
neway
once again nice poem
bye
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22nd September 2005, 09:31 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by mohit
Dear Pallavi
thanks
vaise aapka naam mujhe kissi ki yaad dilata hai...
you know kiski??
chalo jane do... fir kabhi btayunga
take care
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mujhe sab pata hai.... mera naam.. batau kiski yaad dilata hai batauu?? bata du???
hehehehe...
mera nam na.. vo na... actually na..... mera naam na aapko.. meriiiiii yaad dilata hai.....
waise main fir kab milungi na na na na.....
Pallavi...
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hiiiiiiiiiii -
22nd September 2005, 09:53 PM
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Mohit Jiii
Main Surbhii .. main yaha bhi aa gayiiiiiiiii sab friends ke sath
n tarif too main aapke bahut pehle kar chuki hu aur nahi yeh bas
aapko hii hai
see u soon n hope aapke exams acche ho rahe hai...
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24th September 2005, 12:27 PM
Hi Romana ji
keh to aap bhi rahi hain ki aapki yaadast theek hai
aur ab jab aap meri baat nahi maan rahi hain to main
aapki baat kaise maanunga???
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24th September 2005, 12:33 PM
Hi Pallo
No Comments
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24th September 2005, 12:39 PM
Dear Surbhi
1minute Doll, Muskan and Surbhi
itne naam
Oh God
yaar main to aapke naam yaad hi karta reh jayunga
ek kaam karta hu likh leta hu
kya aapke aur bhi kuch naam hain
agar hain to bata dijiye
i will not all of them at one place
hey hey vaise ek baat btayu
2-3 din pehle aap online thi and maine aapko
kitne message bheje aur kya kya nahi kiya
Buzz, smileys sab kuch bheja lakin aapne reply nahi kiya??
kyon??
kaisi dost ho aap
ek reply bhi nahi kar sakti....katti...
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24th September 2005, 01:15 PM
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mohit -
24th September 2005, 01:28 PM
Hmmm mera naam SURBHII hi hai ...Doll yahoo ka id
hai...MUSKAN yaha ka hehehehe:P ...itne confused mat hoiye lol
kissi bhi naam se bulaiyegge main hi reply karrugi n Sir mujhe
aapka 1 bhi na na aadha mess bhi nahi milla .huhh itna jhut? uff
waisse gud to see u online n aap ke exams kaise rahe ???
khatam ho gaye??n y u r not there in yahoo?? tello telloo ab me
KATTI ....HUHHHHHHHHHHH
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7th October 2005, 08:21 PM
Hi Lucky ji thanks for replying
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7th October 2005, 08:29 PM
Hi Shubhi, Muskan and Doll
actually exams abhi shuru hi nahi hue to khatam hone ka to sawaal hi nahi paida hota
5th November se 8th November tak exams hain
aur mera yahoo messanger uninstall ho gaya tha....
abhi fir se download karna padega
and hey hey yaar yahoo ki kya zroorrat hai
aap to Lcal ho
yahoo to door door Canada, USA chat karne ke liye hota hai
aap to mujhe phone bhi kar sakti ho na
oh samjha aap nahi chahti ki aapka bill jada aaye
theek hai baba miss call hi kar diya karo
main samajh jayunga ki ap mujh se baat karna chahti ho
fir main miss call kar diya karunga fir aap samjhna ki humari baat ho gayi.....ok
hai na good idea bill bachane ka
to let us play miss call-miss call
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7th October 2005, 08:32 PM
Dear Shubhi, Muskan and Doll
hey hey ek shayer sunayo....lo suno
"College ki galiyo mein ajeeb khel hota hai,
notes badle love mail hota hai,
isi liye to Pappu har saal fail hota hai"
its incomplete
pura bhool gaya....
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10th October 2005, 06:45 PM
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11th January 2006, 01:44 PM
is liye woh hamein zindagi hi maar gaye,,
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ASSALAM WALEKUM,, MOHIT JI.BOHOT HI ACHHA LIKHA AAPNE,ALLAH AAPKO AUR TARRAKKI DE(AAMIN)ALLAH HAFIZ
UR FRND SONY
Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
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( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
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13th March 2007, 04:17 PM
Sapne saare tod kar baithe hain,
Dil ke armaan chhod kar baithe hain,
Na kijiye humse wafa ki baatein,
Abhi Abhi Dil ke tukde jod kar baithe hain!!
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16th March 2007, 07:23 PM
well written
keep it up
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18th March 2007, 09:14 PM
hi mohit ji
aapne achchha likha hai par ye pehle bhi padha hua hai,
aapne khubsurat shayri sabke samne rakhi hai , padhke achchha laga
hamari taraf se bhi kuch aapki khidmat mein
Baat esi ho ki jazbat kam na ho,
Khayalat ese ho ki kabhi gum na ho,
Dil ke kone me itni si jagah rakhna,
Ki khali khali sa lage jab hum na ho.
Zindagi bahut sikhati he,
Thoda hasati he, thoda rulati he,
Khud se jyada kisipe bharosa mat karma,
Kyuki andhere me to padchhai bhi sath chhod jati he.
NOTE MINE
aapka dost
Merul
Quote:
Originally Posted by mohit
1.Khali shishe bhi nishan rakhte hain,
tute hue dil bhi armaan rakhte hain,
Jo khamoshi mein guzar jate hain,
Vo dariya bhi dil mein toofaan rakhte hain!!
*Shishe = Mirrors
Dariya = Rivers
2.Dilo se khelne ka hunar hume nahi aata,
Is liye ishq ki baazi hum haar gaye,
Humari zindgi se sayad unhe bohat pyar tha,
Is liye vo hume zinda hi maar gaye!!
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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